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Hello Americans. I would like to inform you all that I will be running for ### Senate. You may ask why should "Ejthegreat1" be Senator. Well here's why I want to be a Senator. I want to make America better than it already is! As Senator ## main plan is to make America a safer place for everyone. We will also put an end to corrupt and replace them with people that actually know what they're doing! Lastly, we're not going to leave any Americans behind, no American will suffer from poverty. ~Together we can do anything~ If you support me in running for ### Senate than please sign below. If you don't then I respect that. Party: Democratic |
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InnocuityJoin Date: 2012-08-05 Post Count: 5050 |
your speech is way too brief and you dont even elaborate on what you want to do.
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I would appreciate it if you didn't promote yourself on my post. That's very Disrespectful. |
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InnocuityJoin Date: 2012-08-05 Post Count: 5050 |
im not promoting my self, that's my siggy. you dont forum much do u? anyways im just delievering some constructive criticism
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Speech was very generic
"Oh we'll stop corruption"
"Oh we'll make America great!"
"Oh nobody will suffer from poverty"
I also feel like you could of done some indenting.
I don't do much. |
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Speech Continued...
As your Senator, I will be nothing but for the people. I will listen to your suggestions and complaints, and to my best ability I will make sure that your voices as citizens, don't go unheard. Many time Americans are just ignored and threw to the side. But with me as your Senator that won't happen.
Here's a list of some problems that are going to be solved.
1. Crime
2. Corrupt Leaders
3. Inactive Agencies
4. Low Wages
To Solve USA's crime problem, we need to increase our law enforcement, and these law enforcement officers are going to be thoroughly trained.
To make agencies more active, we're going to make a law that every agency do an Activity check at least once every 2 weeks. And reform those who are inactive in that duration of time.
For the low wages, I will help pass a law for a pay increase for all Americans.
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Not specifying what I want to see.
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dancai123Join Date: 2015-08-07 Post Count: 39 |
Signed for now, but if you get elected and not do what you say you will I will not be happy
Signed: Dancai123 |
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Crime can never be stopped. People will still do it, even if it against ### law. Corrupt Leaders will still be corrupt. Inactive agencies could be fixed. Low wages... These things are practically used in every speech. You seem like ### guy to attend one session to only propose a failed law. |
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kr_uptJoin Date: 2016-09-08 Post Count: 2875 |
Firstly, your speech is way too brief. Secondly, you say you're going to stop something and whatnot, but you aren't explaining how you are going to do it. Lastly, every candidate is saying this, but the differences is they actually explain what they plan to do to help a cause. |
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kr_uptJoin Date: 2016-09-08 Post Count: 2875 |
Your speech, broken down.
I'm going to stop corruption and other stuff. I'm going to stop poverty. Vote for me. Ok, bye now |
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The problems listed are just a few, that we all realize is there, and it hasn't went away. Also, I did give solutions to how I would solve these problems in the 2nd part of my speech.
I'm very active on Roblox and USA, so trust me I will be attending every session so the American Voice can be Vocalized.
Some background information on me:
-USCP PO
-Department of Transportation-Chief Of Staff
One last thing, if there is something that any of you personally see has a problem then feel free to let me know.
I'm here for you all. ~The American People~
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Signed, LeEmperorNapoleon1 |
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kr_uptJoin Date: 2016-09-08 Post Count: 2875 |
Yes, you only listed a few points, but you didn't explain it in-depth. You say you will attend every session, but it isn't guaranteed. |
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In my opinion I explained it straight forward, this is a speech not the bill. The bill will be more in depth. Also, yes, I will be at every session if I'm senator, I already go to the sessions even though I'm not Senator as USCP. |
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