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jetveerxd
#210628248Saturday, February 25, 2017 4:59 PM GMT

I recently made a machinima, and my channel is Notsoaveragemachinimadude(Roblox never allows links) or just search jetveerxd on youtube and I need feedback is it good is it bad what improvements I need to start making. If you could, thanks.
jetveerxd
#210638441Saturday, February 25, 2017 6:53 PM GMT

My channel(if you cant type it in or cant find it): https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCiUrEqMB-bAuhnvuiK-3bIA
Fruitium
#210639772Saturday, February 25, 2017 7:11 PM GMT

Nice, hope you continue.
jetveerxd
#210648539Saturday, February 25, 2017 8:55 PM GMT

i'm working on one right now
jetveerxd
#210648569Saturday, February 25, 2017 8:55 PM GMT

also thx :)

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