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ChristianGreyMD
#215287786Tuesday, April 25, 2017 9:26 PM GMT

(Intro) One day I thought you was cool. But yet your swimming in a swimming pool. (Verse 1) Man I am from the south. Be ready to aim the shot pow pow pow. I am the hottest you mad bruh? Yet, I am messing with your girl up in youI ain't broke. All these people lo####e##utting on a show. Man, You ready? I be ready to diss you any day. any day. Talk about me man what do you do? You smell like burnt fish right out the door. And I don't hate. I appreciate cause all your hating is irrelevant. I am good, no you ain't. But what's good. I don't even cry maybe once a day. But all your bullies are gonna be in a hospital one day. (VERSE 2) Man your life is built like a swimming pool. Man don't drown in it. Cause your really poor. (CLOSING) I believe in life. But you better live it right. You may think I am trash. But when I take the crown from your sash. You better be ready to flash.
timthegreat2salt
#215288049Tuesday, April 25, 2017 9:30 PM GMT

This is really bad. Some examples: "One day I thought you was cool. But yet your swimming in a swimming pool." 1. Were, not was. 2. you're, not your. "Man I am from the south. Be ready to aim the shot pow pow pow. I am the hottest you mad bruh?" What even is this? "I am good, no you ain't." 1. Double negative 2. Incoherent sentence. Opinion courtesy of the best liberal scum
Tonightless
#215288203Tuesday, April 25, 2017 9:33 PM GMT

what is this crap
RhysEddy1234
#215355249Wednesday, April 26, 2017 5:54 PM GMT

Corny/10
xabi
#215356023Wednesday, April 26, 2017 6:12 PM GMT

what does the intro even mean
Eagleman443
#215356175Wednesday, April 26, 2017 6:15 PM GMT

Maxime can rap better than u
VitoDonatelli
#215359745Wednesday, April 26, 2017 7:40 PM GMT

"One day I thought you was cool. But yet your swimming in a swimming pool." 👌😩 hang the blessed dj
motman5
#215360423Wednesday, April 26, 2017 7:52 PM GMT

Bruh ya'll all haters, this sh-- was dope. Sorry, I can't...HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHA yo second verse wasn't even 4 bars

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