Family Roleplay: sign ups

Join Date: 2016-07-23
Post Count: 19

#218199857Monday, June 05, 2017 6:45 PM GMT

Hi. I'm starting a roleplay called Family Roleplay. These are the characters: Robert ,Father. Selena,Mother. James,Older brother. Cristina,Older sister. Jacob,Younger brother,twin. Rachel,Younger sister,twin. Rules: No violent or inappropriate stuff. Follow roblox rules. Don't bully or be mean. If you ask a question or are saying something not in roleplay,use ().

iiOmqItzChloeRose

Join Date: 2016-10-19
Post Count: 5

#218204029Monday, June 05, 2017 7:48 PM GMT

I like RP'S

iiOmqItzChloeRose

Join Date: 2016-10-19
Post Count: 5

#218204051Monday, June 05, 2017 7:48 PM GMT

I made on e myself, has loads of visits.

CosmicPigeon

Join Date: 2012-10-14
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#218204580Monday, June 05, 2017 7:55 PM GMT

Roleplay is gross think again sweetie

NuclearBronco

Join Date: 2014-05-26
Post Count: 1515

#218205389Monday, June 05, 2017 8:05 PM GMT

The reason why this roleplay is not doing well is because it is not written very well and it is copied. If you want your roleplay to do better, I would suggest that you make original roleplays and you work harder on the writing. It would also help if you let people make their own characters. Also, you could work on making your roleplay more professional like this: Hi. I'm starting a roleplay called Family Roleplay. These are the Characters: Robert (Father) Selena (Mother) James (Older brother) Cristina (Older sister) Jacob (Younger brother, twin) Rachel (Younger sister, twin) Rules: No violent or Inappropriate stuff Follow all Roblox rules Don't bully or be mean If you ask a question or are saying something not in character, use () I hope that you use these to your advantage and become a great roleplayer someday.

heerpdeerp

Join Date: 2016-01-25
Post Count: 9481

#218206016Monday, June 05, 2017 8:13 PM GMT

robert lol

Ryanblorpblorp

Join Date: 2017-02-11
Post Count: 222

#218208053Monday, June 05, 2017 8:41 PM GMT

I am now roleplaying as Robert "hiiii my name is rotten Robbie I was born in #########

kotycoolyo

Join Date: 2016-07-23
Post Count: 19

#218210776Monday, June 05, 2017 9:19 PM GMT

I'm trying to make it professional. This is my only roleplay, so I can't make it perfect. I was trying to make it more spaced out, but I can't figure out how to do it. I can't do this. I can't make this role play. I give up.

kotycoolyo

Join Date: 2016-07-23
Post Count: 19

#218211050Monday, June 05, 2017 9:22 PM GMT

And how is it copied? I didn't use anyone else's role play, and I came up with the characters. I give up.

NuclearBronco

Join Date: 2014-05-26
Post Count: 1515

#218212777Monday, June 05, 2017 9:44 PM GMT

Hey, I'm not trying to discourage you at all. I'm just trying to help you. I'm getting the whole "copied" thing from how similar it is to legendary fun's popular roleplay, "Together, Family"

NuclearBronco

Join Date: 2014-05-26
Post Count: 1515

#218212942Monday, June 05, 2017 9:46 PM GMT

And with the whole professional thing, it doesn't matter. Wisest miner, an extremely good RP writer (at least in my opinion) doesn't do his like that. How you write your roleplay is completely up to you, and I don't care how. I'm just trying to give you suggestions to help you create roleplays that lots of people will want ti join.

legenderyfun23

Join Date: 2015-03-20
Post Count: 4793

#218216818Monday, June 05, 2017 10:37 PM GMT

Honestly, it's fine, just don't go too overboard. I suggest that you add more details to your roleplay sign-ups to hook people in. Keep on spacing it out, and preview it, till it works.

legenderyfun23

Join Date: 2015-03-20
Post Count: 4793

#218216844Monday, June 05, 2017 10:38 PM GMT

You need to try to be more professional.

kotycoolyo

Join Date: 2016-07-23
Post Count: 19

#218242321Tuesday, June 06, 2017 5:11 AM GMT

I'm trying to. You make it seen so easy. But it's hard. Maybe I'll try to make another roleplay using your tips. But for now, I'm gonna get more ideas. I understand you're just trying to help me, so thanks.

kotycoolyo

Join Date: 2016-07-23
Post Count: 19

#218242832Tuesday, June 06, 2017 5:23 AM GMT

I'm just new to the forum post thing. And I only just found this roleplay thing, so I'm new to this

legenderyfun23

Join Date: 2015-03-20
Post Count: 4793

#218270755Tuesday, June 06, 2017 6:59 PM GMT

Good luck out here, because only some roleplays succeed.

Aexleo

Join Date: 2016-06-04
Post Count: 489

#220105289Friday, June 30, 2017 12:58 PM GMT

Family Roleplays are not the common.