catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
I haven't read them yet. |
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MINARD777, these are strange, yet nice. Good job, good job! You win 9000 internets. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Thanks dude! |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
WHAT THE HECK is a Nargle? |
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I don't have much of this song yet. Basically nothing. But, it's something.
I want to leave, but somehow I can't.
I want to Run, but I can't even stand.
Twisting, turning, neverending
My whole life is still just pending!
These halls! These walls!
All I've ever known
These halls! These walls!
They've got everything I've ever owned....
I picture the lyrics, if not mine, somewhere between Adam Gontier and David Draiman. |
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180th post... lol. lameo.. lol. jk. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
IT IS HERE! The 40th MINARD777 series... this time featuring 2 other writers! Thanks Crash and Miley for your help.
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Evolution of The Machine (By MINARD777, Crash6351, and Miley01804)
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-[Key To Devastation]- (By MINARD777)
Rising from the shifting sands
A dark warlord with bloody hands
He is the master
of Devastation
Running ever faster
Across this dying nation
He carries the key
To an age-long war
To enslave the free
And lock the door
Rising from the sands
is a steel-hearted nation
What lies within their hands
Is the key to DEVASTATION!!!!
Shattering the walls of stone
The age of steel shall dawn
In this war we stand alone
Until this all is gone
They feed off us like maggots
They terrorize the soul
They stick to us like magnets
And prevail in this time, dull
Invasion of the machines!!!!
Rising from the sands
is a steel-hearted nation
What lies within their hands
Is the key to DEVASTATION!!!!
Invasion of the machines!!!!
-[Closing In]- (By Crash6351)
A man-made army, a living nightmare,
Made of metal, they rise,
This hell-like world that's betrayed what we loved,
They wait until they hear our cries.
We hide in fear, spread throughout the town,
And devise a plan to succeed,
Our plan has failed, they're too strong,
We lie, we die, we bleed.
So long world, I the creator of this meneace has left this place,
I will never return, for I don't want to see this menace in my face,
I may die in the cold, lonley regions of space...
But I have saved where I lie in eternity, this blackened case.
The battle has raged throughout time,
The leader of the rebellion has forgotten this so called "crime"
I see the madness six feet above me,
How can this battle be?
A devastation, madness that left this world torn,
We wait to be reborn.
If that happens, Which it won't, because of the advantage they have,
They're unstoppable,
We will never win, this army of metal is too strong,
They're unbeatable.
The leader has come...
-[Evolution of The Machine]- (By MINARD777)
[I- Lost And Blind]
I try to scream through walls of glass
I try to see through clouds of grey
And through the gate I try to pass
But how do I know this is the way?
Lost inside this wasteland
A journey through the void
A map unseen in my hand
Their traps I can't avoid
I can't seem to find the way
Though the answer's not so far
I wander the night in search of day
I burn myself to hide the scars
I cannot read what it's saying to me
The words slip from my mind
I cannot see! What is my destiny?
What will come of all mankind?
Only the master holds the keys
To brighter distant lands
Only the glorious master sees
The map that lies within my hands
Where is the master?
Where is my call?
A slave I am to the shadow caster
This twisted tale begins to fall
Collapsing into this mechanical inferno!!!!
[II- The “Mighty”/The War]
The sun of the age of man descends
The Shadows cast prevail!
The blackened sun of hate ascends
Your world under our veil!
WE THE MIGHTY ONES OF STEEL!
We come in hate, we come for war!
NEVER COME WILL WE TO HEAL!
We come in hate to shut the door!
We are the ones to rule the lands
We take away your life, now it's within our hands
WE, THE ONES OF STEEL!!!!
No turning back
Creator of this madness
No keeping track
Of every tear of sadness
We, your pride, once lifted high
Were tossed into the fire
I'd never let this nation die!
Creator just a liar?
Machines were made to take our place
But I just couldn't let it go
A heart of steel was shown no grace
How couldn't you see my anger grow?
...AND NOW I RULE THE WORLD!!!!
[III- Evolution]
The machines begin to slowly change
Mutations appear, it's all so strange
Evolution appears
In their civilization
We cry bloody tears
For the devastation
Madness takes control
I have nowhere to run!
Oh how sadness takes it's toll
And takes away the sun!
Legions of steel
Begin to form
Our wounds can't heal
Within this storm
Mechanical metamorphosis
And a false genetics appear
You ask me “What will come of this?”
But I just shed another tear
For they have taken away my love away!!!!
-[Hopeless]- (By MINARD777)
Falling down like a storm of hail
I have nowhere to run
All emotion 'neath the veil
Along with the glory of the sun
The world I once knew
Is now dying and old
The skies once so blue
Now so blackened and cold
Sinking to the bottom of the fire
Falling through the blackened skies
Declining slowly, a downward spiral
Nightmares wear a thick disguise!!!!
I run tonight
So deep in agony
No hope in sight
No hope inside of me
Now I can't believe
All their words, so cold and dead
Designed to deceive
With dark intentions better left unsaid
This “life” that I've created
Has come to take me down
All my dreams have slowly faded
And now my life begins to drown
Sinking to the bottom of the ocean
Falling through this clouded dream
Declining slowly, a downward motion
Nightmares are never as they seem!!!!
-[My Love]- (By MINARD77 and Miley01804)
My love where have you gone?
Can it be you're in the shadows?
Did you slip away at the dawn?
Did you stand alone by the gallows?
My love where have you gone?
THIS CAN'T BE REAL!
THIS CAN'T BE REAL!
...My love!
I'm crying out
I have no hope tonight
A wanderer in doubt
Will I ever return from this fight?
They took you away
They took away my all!
They blackened the day
And caused us all to fall!
My love... where have you gone?
Is this but a fantasy?
A nightmare gone astray?
Or can it be my destiny?
But LORD please take my pain away...
You disappear into the dark,
My love you have fallen
And there you go with a fiery spark
My heart is broken,
the night has spoken,
and the time is now...
LORD help me find my love!
Is she hidden in the dungeon?
With the raging fire?
Is she a captive of the darkest liar
Is the locked up,
is she dying??
My love, are you alive?
-[Escape The Madness]- (By MINARD777)
Rise of the tyrants of steel
They are coming
The nation dying, must heal
From what it is becoming
I try to run from what I've done
But I can't seem to escape this madness
I'm waiting for a rising sun
But all I see is the rising sadness
I feel it burning, all my sorrow
The sky is blackened still
With all my hope in a brighter tomorrow
I can't seem to get my fill
A wanderer am I
So lost in this dimension
And oh, I can't believe this lie
A slave to my very own invention
How can the maker
Be the slave?
You, the life taker
Are left to die, no soul to save!
Falling down again!
Into the lions den!
WHERE HAVE YOU GONE MY LOVE?
Running into walls of glass
While running through the fields of grass!
I NEED A MESSAGE FROM ABOVE!
-[Let A New Tale Begin]- (By MINARD777)
Oh this has been a twisting path
Descending deep into the dark!
I've had a taste of this world's wrath
And now I wear a madman's mark
The voices in my head
Are singing songs of my regrets
Still alive, yet heart so dead
I've been drowning in my debts
I need someone to bear my pain
I need someone to crush my sin
Please heal my mind, I've gone insane
And end the war RAGING WITHIN!!!!
I am not the hero of this tale
My greatest victory is but another fall
And when my skin goes cold and pale
I can hear a distant call
“A time has come to wake!
A time has come to rise!
I come to die, your soul to take!
I come to bleed, to crush the lies!”
Where are you my God when I'm asleep?
Are you by my side forever?
When I've fallen down a pit so deep
Will you save me from the never?
As I'm falling off the ledge
I can feel it in my soul
A soul reborn, saved at the edge
AN END SO BRIGHT IN A TALE SO DULL!!!!
LET A NEW TALE BEGIN!!!!
-[Key To Salvation]- (By MINARD777)
Rising from the shifting sands
Our MIGHTY LORD with bloody hands
He is the giver
of our salvation
Our souls he will deliver
From the darkness of damnation
He carries the key
To to end this war
To set us free
And open the door
Returning to the sands
is a steel-hearted nation
For he has taken from their hands
The key to devastation
Shattering the their hearts of steel
The age of steel shall end
Our souls do dead, he's come to heal
Paradise is just around the bend
They fed off us like maggots
They terrorized the soul
They stuck to us like magnets
And ruled our lives in a time so dull
FALL OF THE MACHINES!!!!
Rising from the shifting sands
The holder of the key to salvation
What lies within his bloody hands
Is the only hope for a fallen nation
FALL THE MACHINES!!!!
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majornickJoin Date: 2009-10-09 Post Count: 896 |
This is actually very good. sorry i couldn't help. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
It's O.K. after I finish this one im working on (by myself) i can get u to help. |
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majornickJoin Date: 2009-10-09 Post Count: 896 |
i'm making a series it's called "Journey to the west". Miley, you can help if you want. it's about when this evil queen rises from the shadows and takes over the planet. a prince sets out to find the queen and destroy her. so far i got "Unstoppible" (nearly) and "Rock This Town". you and Minard can help. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Sure! I'd do it... u could send her pm... she'll probably say yes. wut do u need me to write? |
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HaterdudeJoin Date: 2009-04-26 Post Count: 1325 |
Sweet. |
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HaterdudeJoin Date: 2009-04-26 Post Count: 1325 |
Forgot that I'm Crash. LOL? No? Whatever. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Hey dude... sup? Great job BTW! |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
IT IS HERE!!!
All of this series is by me, MINARD777!
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The Seven Voids
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-[Lost Outside of Time]-
I'm lost outside of time tonight!
Not a glimpse of reality in sight!
Oh I can't comprehend
All the things that I see
Clouded is the message that they send
The ones who come to rescue me
I feel I've dreamed for ages
I feel I've slipped away
So now, I turn the ancient pages
And come to know of where I am today
I'm lost outside of time tonight!
Not a glimpse of reality in sight!
This is a feeling I can't explain
Like falling through the nothingness
Complexity I can't contain
While wondering through my madness
The shadows come
And haunt me still
Afraid to admit what I've become
I am the madman they must kill
I'm lost outside of time tonight!
Not a glimpse of reality in sight!
And I can't comprehend
All the things that I see
Clouded is the message that they send
The ones who come to rescue me
But I just fade away
Into a distant sleep
I'm a drifter, never to stay
I'm going further in, so deep
It's not some distant lost dimension
It's just another dream
It's just another mental invention
I'll drop it in the flowing stream
-[Kaleidoscopic]-
Kaleidoscopic hallucinations
Descending to the sands
Broken, interrupted, communications
There is no sword within my hands
My dreams all cast into the stream
Insanity to embrace
Am I lost in another dream?
Or am I a wanderer lost in space?
Kaleidoscopic hallucinations
Descending to the sands
Broken, interrupted, communications
There is no sword within my hands
Where has my hope gone?
Oh I have lost another page?
When will come the age's dawn?
When will come a brighter age?
Enslaved
LEFT TO DIE ON THE BLOODY SHORE!
Engraved
IS MY SOUL UPON THE DOOR!
They say
I AM THE NEXT TO DIE!
I pray
THAT IT IS ALL I LIE!
Kaleidoscopic visions
A maze of mirrors I see
Every one of my foolish decisions
Are left to die along with me
But can this be the truth?
-[Contradiction of Reality]-
Walking on the walls
And falling to the skies
I watch us my mind falls
Into a sea of a lies
It's contradiction of matter
Opposed to all reality
And all the pieces shatter
Into the realms of infinity
Shattering into a million pieces
An act of The Dark One
Oh the darkness it never ceases
The evil eye in the blackened sun
Continuum
Of evolution
In the dark kingdom
Of destitution
The sands begin to shift
The walls are getting higher
And to the skies they lift
Into the storm of fire
This is an abomination
Mystifying illumination
Above all, devastation
Avoid I must, my soul's damnation
But who am I to own my soul?
Where can I find the keys?
Wandering the night so dull
In search of our destinies
I'm falling forever
Losing my heart
Into the land of never
The devil's work of art
Save me from the pits of hell
Save me from the fire
Enchanted by the midnight bell
I'm falling for a liar
Where will I go from here
WHEN I'M FALLING?
Why must I shed a tear?
SPIRITS CALLING!
-[The Sorrowful Ones]-
Riding on the winds of sorrow
Gliding over blackened sea
Waiting for a brighter tomorrow
Hoping for a better destiny
I stumble upon my own grave
I fear all that I see
Oh my soul, so hard to save
Who knows my destiny?
Tears fall down
Flowing down the stream
I will drown
In this bloody dream
I CAN'T ESCAPE IT!
We are the sorrowful ones!
We roam the land of the blackened suns!
I must ride the sky
And reach the stars
Or must I die
Please heal my scars
ALL I KNOW IS I CAN'T ESCAPE IT!
I can't escape these voids of fear!
I'm lost inside forever!
Why must I shed another tear?
Will I see the sun? OH NEVER!
Blood falls
From whithered hands
Another year gone by
The night calls!
These distant lands
Will never pass me by
Will I die a broken one
Or will I see the sun?
Where am I to go?
Oh will I ever know?
I don't live inside this land!
It lives inside of me!
There is no sword within my hand!
Can it be my destiny?
-[The Lost and Blind]-
I try to see straight through your eyes
Oh face of fear
I try to see straight through your lies
I shed a tear
I live this life
In discontent
I raise the knife
Insanity I invent
I try to create
A world I can control
But in the end I hate
this void within, so dull
“So run to the tower
Lost and blind!
Drown inside my power!
And you will escape these voids within your mind!”
But how I am I to walk
When I can't see?
And why would even talk
To a man as deaf as me?
“My love for you shall never parish
My love, it will endure!
Take this now, a gift to cherish
And enter through the glowing door!”
What is eternity?
Where is the promised land?
I reach so deep inside of me
But still having nothing in my hand!
Shall I take the road of the knife?
Shall I take a downward path?
What is the point of this sinful life?
How do I escape the father's wrath
I'm lost between
The two dimensions
And I have seen
My dark inventions
This life that I have lived!!!!
-[Dreamland]-
I take a look at all my dreams
And nothing is ever as it seems
I reach out for the burning light
My hand is turned to ash
There is no steady ground in sight
To the depths, in fear, I crash
I'm lost inside this dreamland
With nowhere left to go!
Blood dripping from my hand
There's only one thing that I know:
I am but a worthless man
These horizons endlessly I scan
Cruising on the shore of memories
A wasteland passes by
A look into the faces of my enemies
I hear the madman's cry
Torn to pieces
I face insanity
My pain, it never ceases
With only anger deep inside of me
I am the madman and these are my dreams!
This life is never what it seems!
Cast into the fire!!!!
-[The Seventh Void]-
A journey deeper
Through my mind
The cliffs are steeper
Than in the world of mankind
This is insanity
The darkest side of me
I have to get away!
For all eternity?
LORD can this be?
HOW CAN THIS BE THE WAY?
I must escape from the seventh void
These horrors unimaginable, I can't avoid
I have seen the evil master
I have seen the king of snakes
I tried to sail on, ever faster
But I was sailing on a fiery lake
“Asylum for sin!
This is your destiny!
Enslaved from within
I poison you subtly!”
NO! This cannot be!
Oh is it me?
A madman in the mirror?
Is my vision getting clearer?
I'm praying for a distant voice
To save me from the seventh void
So take my soul, I have no choice
The lack of power I can't avoid
BUT WHO WILL BE MY MASTER?
“Who needs a master of blood flame?
Who needs to play this evil game?
All you need lies in my hands
I free you from these sinful lands!”
Take me away from here!
Escape I must tonight!
Just wipe away my tear!
LORD TAKE MY SORROW OUT OF SIGHT!
“I shed my blood to set you free
Crucified, securing all eternity!”
LORD you are master of all dimensions!!!!
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
I gotta say, not your best work.. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Well... I wrote it kind of fast. I think "The Sorrowful Ones" and "Contradiction of Reality" went as planned really though. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
bump! |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
Hey, random question; Do you know of any wish-granting spells? See, me and my friend are looking for one cuz he needs a globe for this new spell and I can't remember why I was looking for one other than to help him and maybe keep that spell for requirements of later spells and stuff. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Spells? What do I know about spells? Not very much. You mean a real one? |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
Of course I mean a real one. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Well I don't know. BTW I wouldn't mess with that stuff if I were you. All the wizardry etc. is satanism really. |
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catzrcuteJoin Date: 2008-09-18 Post Count: 22858 |
No it's not. |
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MINARD777Join Date: 2008-07-25 Post Count: 2266 |
Well than what is it? It is in the bible in the old testament you know. Let's not get into a debate but I'm just not into all the witchcraft stuff... we can say that. :/ |
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