I agree with him on the capitalization, it's awful.
Actually no, I agree with all of the criticism, this needs work.
It doesn't matter if it's story shift, Papyrus is a skeleton with a ego, likes to cook spaghetti, and has a heart of gold.
Sans is a lazy skeleton who like's going to Grill by's, drinking ketchup, and probably some other stuff I can't remember off the top of my head.
It's barely Undertale at all if you stray extremely far from what made the characters memor able enough for the A U s to exist in the fir st place.
Other versions of characters are fine, but if a version of character is going to behave differently than the necessary traits, you need a good reason, such as Error! Sans getting bored of being lazy.
That will be all. *Clap clap* |