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Lyricist05s
#227595994Thursday, November 16, 2017 3:06 AM GMT

Ziplite: Up on the creek, gold knuckles appear. Cops are shaded their bullets unable to pass my shades. Where's your knuckles at, about to slaughter on a stage. DeadBlazor: Was it great? Ziplite: Yah just give me a chance to write it out before I go insane. This is that old school boom bap, the boom is to your face the bap is for your straight hit. DeadBlazor: Ziplite: You wish to be me, but you're not me because you never made a album did it fit, like my clothing this is sik a new sick-change. I'm done with these sick lames. No sik changed it happened when the crazy whacks came...That's when sick changed. DeadBlazor: No secret I'm up in here, my knuckles shine they're like Luke Cage, My skin breaks an entire bullet block and Guage. Bullets don't impact and annihilate, this demon are you that dumb did you never rap before. I'm a heavy devil, you can't phase me I'm heavier than brass knuckles. Shaq X: What the SHAQZ, Breeza boomalicious fragilistic, no screw that spit I'm a X-hit yah off your home page and destroy your account with a missile. Have you not heard Dyclonian? Well here's some info. I'm attached to an A.Vropolean beat, double-audio speaker box lets hope the [SPEAKER HAS KNOCKED], you off the online site and into Null!!!! Various artists, we're like the BrockHamptons drownin' you into heavy metal. Or any genre demon musical. Did I mention, this spit is just the start of my vertigo. Me: Street-lingo Asphalt, grinning like Orion hail-mary sky-fall hundred blades [AS GODS], couldn't take it. New supreme and supremacy you'll be having to drop everyday like a Democracy, knuckles coming into the act, it decapitates pink-colors out of the "head of" prada! Last line, it went higher with the fire I spit lit going off than a sona!!!!!
RusselMurphy
#227596734Thursday, November 16, 2017 3:28 AM GMT

Is this supposed to be a rap.
ZacharyRyany
#227596970Thursday, November 16, 2017 3:36 AM GMT

Yeah, I agree with him. This doesn't sound like a rap, I'm not trying to be offensive in anyway, just being truthful.
ShiyithekidRS
#227601098Thursday, November 16, 2017 6:59 AM GMT

I think it is rap. Although rhymes are very important in Rhythm and Poetry, they don't always need to end as couplets. If you look closely, you may see a variety of hidden rhymes in this entire rhyme scheme.
ShiyithekidRS
#227601187Thursday, November 16, 2017 7:05 AM GMT

Also, the bars here are structured differently
Lyricist05s
#227605469Thursday, November 16, 2017 2:09 PM GMT

It's, a mix between Rap and Heavy Metal xD
Comb_ative
#227606284Thursday, November 16, 2017 3:19 PM GMT

Points for trying, though it isn't something I'd listen to.
ZacharyRyany
#227838248Wednesday, November 22, 2017 9:47 AM GMT

Lyricist, when you said Heavy Metal and ### # cringed, I don't know why you think that sounds good, but we are each our own person I guess.

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