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oldsoman77
#228215656Wednesday, November 29, 2017 3:31 AM GMT

1-5 how good, and tell me WHY if you choose this rating.
oldsoman77
#228215775Wednesday, November 29, 2017 3:34 AM GMT

https://www.roblox.com/games/1131267771/93ts-Place-Number-3 This is the cafe. Tell me what needs to be added or improved.
SS_Destiny
#228217384Wednesday, November 29, 2017 4:32 AM GMT

First critique: The cafe is too big. The roof is too high. I understand that you wanted to make it a two-story concept but the spacing could be changed. The cafe is very blocky. It has no round shapes or unions. The stoves are unnecessary considering that frying coffee isn't the best idea. The fridge is the size of a small house which I recommend should be changed to an actual human sized proportion. If you apply these changed I think your cafe will look much better and smoother. "I'm just writing this to sound smart" -Me
oldsoman77
#228235814Wednesday, November 29, 2017 9:19 PM GMT

Yeah, but what should I smoothen out?
SS_Destiny
#228242943Thursday, November 30, 2017 12:20 AM GMT

Change the design of all the buildings' interior. Make tables and chairs have cylinders. Get some spheres into some of the decor.
Riotix
#228243105Thursday, November 30, 2017 12:25 AM GMT

3/10. Lack of detail, shape, depth, etc.

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