Some Feedback on new Place?

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#228253343Thursday, November 30, 2017 5:16 AM GMT

Hello, I would like constructive criticism on my new Cafe I am building. It is only 35% done, but I want some advice/tips, again, in a constructive manner. Thanks everybody! https://www.roblox.com/games/110347951/Cafe-35

JayP611

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#228253367Thursday, November 30, 2017 5:18 AM GMT

Can you allow permissions to join?

JasOwns

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#228254158Thursday, November 30, 2017 5:55 AM GMT

I am so sorry, just made it accessible for everyone... [bump]

greedyawesomeman

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#228255157Thursday, November 30, 2017 6:51 AM GMT

35% done? You could do way more than that with this potential! I would add some trim to the floor and wall and between the ceiling and wall. Other than that stage could have steps all around. nice work!

JasOwns

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#228277599Friday, December 01, 2017 12:54 AM GMT

thanks greedy, appreciate it. And yes, haha, this is my very first official build and I dont want to add too much. And what do you mean by trim to the floor? Thanks!