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(Sure,Predators willsoon atack >:D) |
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Jake: I was walking down the street. Just another normal day. Cars were rushing by, people walking to where they needed to go, it was a perfect colony. "So boring, though..." I said to myself. I heard a faint scream. "Huh?" I looked down an alley, where the scream came from. I walked down, my gun drawn. "Hello?" |
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All:We jump in the Ambisinator and then Jord drives out into the city |
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Jake: I reach the end of the alley. Nothing. "Weird... I just heard... A... Scream..." I say, looking at the green ooze drip down. I knew it, something was above me. Instead of replay the tragic ends for most people in movies, I jumped back, and aimed my gun above where I was standing. There was this hideous, black monster standing there, with blood dripping from it's mouth. "Oh my GOD!" I yell, shooting it. The gun shots ring out of the alley, and through the street. People hear the gunshots, and start panicking. I heard people running as I filled the thing full of lead. "What was that..?" I say, looking at it's dead body. |
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All:We drive through the city and notice the alley
Me:I jump out take out my Commando Lunger and push Jake aside"..Don't touch it"I said as i checked to see if it was still alive |
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Jake: "What in the Hell is this thing?!" I yell, pointing at it. "It just ate one of the civies!" |
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Jason:"Its called Xenomorph,we call 'em Xeno"I said as i pulled him back to the Ambacinator"Your lucky to have lived"i said as i opend up a small hacth with a SparkRifle[It shoots electro beams and sometimes just one plain old beam that goes into the enemy and shocks them to death] |
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Jake: "Well, whatever it is, I want these things out of my city, and dead." I say to them. "Where you guys goin'?" |
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Jackson:"To go warn the people.And YOUR city? you the mayor or somthing?"I said as i sat down |
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Jake: "Well, not really. I just call it that because I'm the cheif of security 'round these parts." I say. |
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Jackson:"ahh....Well yo-"Jord inturrupts
Jord:"Jack!GET ON THE GUN! TANKER!"He yelled as he shifted into reverse spun around and drove off with me on the gun |
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Jake: "What the hell is a tanker..?" I say, watching them drive off. |
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Jackson:"Will show him the sheets for our enemy,espesially the tanker"i said as i moved a small screen in mid air to will[its kinda like avatar with the plasma things]
Will:Presses small buttons and turns to Jake"They have tanklike armour,but stronger and they spray acid,lost the sarge with one of these things" |
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I was going to join, but seeing as how your grammar is terrible, and you've completely destroyed the plotline of the actual story, I decided not to. |
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chaseer3Join Date: 2008-05-22
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(Well, if you don't want to even join, then don't post. No body cares.) |
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(I obviously cared, so I posted) |
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chaseer3Join Date: 2008-05-22
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(What does it do other than insult him?) |
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(Yeah its not like your goingto MAKE me actually modify it to make it seem as the movies,im trying to make it different,and plus if i wanted to make it like it i would've tried to copy each line or close and follow the story line,do i want to?No i don't so if your going to post,actually make up with the time for me to read it and not be insulted.Thank you) |
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(If you got insulted from my posts, then you obviously have anger management issues. Plus, I didn't mean that you had to do it like the movies, you just took out all the originality and made a cheap version of it) |
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(I was just saying and i know,i do have anger issues.It is cheap but...I thought it might be 'creative' |
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(Where should we start again? I'm kinda confused...) |
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