nopeaceJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 839 |
We passed through the mountains and landed at the start of the passage where the Eytukan and the Elders were.Liyanin stayed with Sevin behind the trees and I went in alone.Well,you could pretty much imagine how awkward the situation was.I didn't really come up with any reason for why I was here because my mind was still set on the mountains but after all the scolding and the boring lectures they told me that if I wanted to stay then it was fine with them.But if I new what my eyes were about to witness I would have controlled my curiosity and would have never came here.Lying all over the ground were dead bloody Ikran.It was horrible.All of them.Scattered like roaches with holes driven right through them.
So this was what the skybeings were. |
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I climbed into the Sampson and loaded the other M60 also,then locked it on it's mount. |
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nopeaceJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 839 |
I didn't speak at all on the journey back home.How could they do this?What gives them the right to?They were innocent.Ikran never ever attack unless they are attacked.I was so angry.How could The Great Mother have let this happen? I looked over at the others but they didn't feel as bad as I did.A little upset maybe.I didn't know why it effected me personally.I always had some sort of special connection with the animals of Pandora.And to see what I just saw being me.....
Danm them! |
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RetalJoin Date: 2008-07-07 Post Count: 8677 |
[Took me ages to find this]
Name: Nikolaveich Drieknov
Occupation: Avatar Pilot and Engineer when not Piloting.
Appearance: Firm Facial Features, Scar from Chin to ear, Sharp Electric Blue Eyes, Slightly Shaggy Black Hair and Stubble. Russian Military Fatigues. (Urban Camo)
Equipment: Combat Knife, Repair Tool, Small Handgun.
Bio: A Russian Engineer Imported into the Program as a 'Last Chance' Community Service. He was about to get the Firing Squad. He heard about Pandora, about it being a death sentence, so he decided he might as well live a bit longer as an Avatar Pilot. Why an Avatar Pilot? So they could kill him without a Fight if they decided he wasn't doing his Time well enough.
Avatar Name: [Human name]
Appearance: [Face of Human]
Equipment: Combat Knife Modified for Avatars, Assault Rifle.
Etc: Avatar wears the Russian Fatigues like Nikol himself. |
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KerionJoin Date: 2009-04-24 Post Count: 18124 |
I start checking over my AMP as I always did. This time there was a twist in the ammo feed that I straightened out. |
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I went back to my M60 and checked it."Everything is good."I said."Harrison,what are you doing?"I heard Percy say."Are you following me?"I asked him."No,just going to check on the Sampson."He said to me. |
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KerionJoin Date: 2009-04-24 Post Count: 18124 |
(Hey Niel, is it's alright with you can I make a second character?) |
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nopeaceJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 839 |
We returned to the village where I quickly went inside my leafpod not to sleep for I was afraid that I would have nightmares of more horrible things that the skybeings would do but to simply stared up to the sky.I prayed that no more Ikran would die.I prayed that Sevin wouldn't die. |
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Neil16Join Date: 2008-06-06 Post Count: 1952 |
[Umm...Thanks, Retal, for rejoining us. But you have just brought an evident problem that I should've seen before.
If anyone here still has the link to our last chapter, I request that they search for people who have not shown up yet and PM them the URL to this thread. Also, PM those who made a character and never got started.
Thanks] |
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I checked the MG's one last time and walked toward the barracks. |
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KerionJoin Date: 2009-04-24 Post Count: 18124 |
(Sorry, I used to have the link about a week ago but then I did some thread link cleaning and threw out the piece of paper.) |
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I did join this thread,but, im not posting. Good Day and good luck! |
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Neil16Join Date: 2008-06-06 Post Count: 1952 |
[Thanks for telling us you're leaving, most people leave without warning.] |
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KerionJoin Date: 2009-04-24 Post Count: 18124 |
(Can I make a second character?) |
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Neil16Join Date: 2008-06-06 Post Count: 1952 |
[Sure, you can have up to 3 characters. If you want to make more than 3, you must have one die D:] |
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KerionJoin Date: 2009-04-24 Post Count: 18124 |
(So in other words, if I make a 3rd make him sort of expendable. Okay.) |
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KerionJoin Date: 2009-04-24 Post Count: 18124 |
Name: Lieutenant Jeremiah Anderson
Occupation: RDA Marine
Appearance: 6'2" lanky, blond hair, icy blue eyes, long scar leading just below left eye. RDA uniform w/ body armor
Equipment: Assault rifle w/ modified grenade launcher (modified to have 3 shot clip of grenade launcher), side arm pistol, combat knife, body armor, helmet, exopack, 6 fragmentation grenades, 18 grenades for launcher (in clips of 3)
Bio: Among the most feared men in the RDA's private military, not so much for his demeanor as what he can do to a man. Even unarmed. Even though he is relatively friendly there is an aura of fear around him. It's not unjust either, he has killed over 60 men though none of them were his allies. What is interesting about him is that he works by a strict moral code, he never kills innocents and will go to lengths to defend them from his comrades, he even too a man's arm off at the shoulder for doing so once. |
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nopeaceJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 839 |
Na'vi
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Name:Kamaro
Specialty:Hunting/Leader of a hunting party
Appearance:Tall,Serious face,Man tattoos,Long hair braid
Clan:Ikran People of the Eastern Sea
Equipment:Bow and Arrow,Quiver strap
Can speak English?:Will be able to
Bio: Kamaro is one of the strongest and most respected warrior in the Ikran Clan.He is highly skilled in hunting,fighting and flying.He never shows much sympathy to people.He was the only person who didn't get caught for chasing Pacce away from the village when he was young.You would normally find Kamaro hanging around with the stronger warriors of the Clan.He is quite arrogant and sometimes cold.He said that his goal is to fly the Toruk which angers Pacce because his father was killed by one.
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nopeaceJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 839 |
[Thanks for the heads up]
Kamaro
I stood next to where the Eytukan normally sat.It gave me a sence of pride and power.One day I would be sittng there taking charge of this village.I was waiting for her to arrive from Iknimaya.The news was that many Ikran died there because of these new race on Pandora.All this talk of "Skybeings" and how they were really powerful didn't really scare me like they scared other villagers.Another thing that took my attention was that Pacce had returned.I hadn't really noticed that because suplies have been quite low and I was doing day and night shifts untill some of the warriors were talking about how bad he was at the hunts.
Little baby Pacce. How weak. How pathetic. |
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Neil16Join Date: 2008-06-06 Post Count: 1952 |
[[ Not exactly, your third character does not need to be dispensible, you just need to have one of your characters die, doesn't matter which one.
By the way, Characters will and must eventually die, so try to make a character that does not reflect yourself, but make them their own personality. The one that is closest to you should not be dispensible.
In other words, if a character you made reflects what your personality and what you would've done, only have one "Close Character," The rest of the characters you make should have their own personalities (Such as me making Commander Dengald a ruthless and arrogant man). Make sure characters are special and reflect their background and past, for that shows who they are at the moment. Don't hesitate to give them accents, slang, patterns of speech, humor, etc.
For example, T'seuke reflects my thoughts, my choice of what to do, my personality, while Commander dengald does not. Only have one character that reflects you, because having them with all the same personality is boring to everyone and will make it hard to choose which one to let die.
If a character dies, that is a chance to make a better one, one with more personality and differences. Eventually, the character that reflects you might die.
All characters should be dispensible, one way or another, and none of them are perfect, each one has a weakness, so try to express that as we go on, event if it shows up a few chapters from now. Characters will also have to get hurt or injured if they are caught in a situation of fighting a losing fight. No one can be invincible or infinitly dodgy.
Just to make sure everyone got the message, do not make multiple characters with the same personality, make each one unique, like the way they really are. Intresting characters make an intresting story, and remember, YOU make this story along with everyone else. ]]
[[Sorry if that was a along post to read, but I just need to make sure everyone got the memo to make *Intresting* characters]]
..::Thanks::.. |
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Neil16Join Date: 2008-06-06 Post Count: 1952 |
[[Also, if there is anything that you would like to discuss with me in private, as in ANYTHING, feel free to PM me, I'm just as a normal person as you are and I enjoy getting PM's
Things that you could PM me about, regarding this thread...
-Storyline suggestions
[[Make sure you PM me before doing posting something that could put a turn on the story line, such as dying or killing another character(s).
-Storyline ideas
[[I'll be glad to read them and reply]]
-Characters
[[Need to make sure a character will be accepted, incase you are doubtful that I will accept it? PM me and I'll be glad to help you change your character a bit]]
-Information
[[Something you want answered that you did not understand? Need a summary of storyline? PM me or any other member that has been on this thread for a while]]
-Help
[[Need help with anything that deals from your character to the stroy, I could help. Also, you could help me with a few things once we get far enough into the story, such as a news of what is currently happening]]
-Et Cetera?
[[Anything, I'll try my best to answer you. I have a lot of time, so I won't be bothered. Your reply might not come in a while, incase I'm busy, but I'll never judge you because you sent me a PM, infact, I'll enjoy recieving and replying to PM's.]]
It won't hurt your roleplaying to PM me, at the least, it will make no difference. It will probably make Roleplaying here easier if you PM me.]] |
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KerionJoin Date: 2009-04-24 Post Count: 18124 |
(Ah, neither of my characters are much like me in the real world, but both are like 2 of my gaming personalities. I fall into those a lot when I play D&D or computer games.)
Anderson
"So corporal, how many casualties over the last few months." |
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Name: Sgt. Jimmy Gleason
Occupation: RDA Marine
Appearance: 6'0,brown hair,Marine uniform,black boots,green eyes,Marine cap
Equipment: RDA handgun,emergency Exopack,radio,and binoculars
Bio: An RDA Sampson pilot that is Lucky Thirteen's new pilot after it's old pilot,Jack Pantelias,was killed.He is a nice but shy guy and came for pay and exitment. |
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nopeaceJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 839 |
Pacce
I had forgotten all about Kamaro.I guess it was pure luck that we haven't yet come into contact and I'm hoping it will stay that way.He looked even more menacing than I last remembered him now that he had his man tattoos.He stood there guarding the Eytukan's seat.It would be hell for me if he actually saw me in front of his own eyes.Kamaro seemed to fuel the anger inside me.I was still mad about what happened at Iknimaya.But to me Kamaro made the skybeings look like dead hexapede. |
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Jimmy
I walked to the hanger where Lucky Thirteen was to meet my new crew,along with the new door-gunner.
Harrison
I was waiting by Lucky Thirteen with Percy for the crewmen to arrive."I thought you were gonna be the pilot Percy."I said to the co-pilot."Naw,they asked me to but I didn't want to."He told me. |
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