catlord5
#26083623Saturday, May 22, 2010 12:05 PM GMT

K, I will. l-C5-l
catlord5
#26083975Saturday, May 22, 2010 12:18 PM GMT

Chapter 8: Raid Genral Nachary shouted that he was going to raid the FEAR Rec Center. Come for a Promotion. When he got there, a few FEAR members were there, and then some RAT members came. Amoung the FEAR members was Agentrok and BoostPowah, and amoung the RAT members was FluffyZay. The raid had begun. Fluffyzay ran to take over the building, while the other RAT members attacked the people that were guarding the door. They started punching them till they dropped thier guns. 1 of the RAT members took over a tank and went to guard the main door. The other RAT members spread out in the field guarding the main building, while Nachary and Fluffyzay broke into the building. Video cameras sensed they were in the building, and they started to shoot lazer beams at them. "Good thing we run everyday" panted Nachary. "I think we should be able to make it to the gun room." They ducked and weaved, narrowly avoiding each lazer beam. When they got to the gun room door, everything was quiet, no more lazer beams. "AHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!" somebody screamed. They heard movements in the ramparts, and then Agentrok and BoostPowah were upon them. Massive firing started. Fluffyzay shot a can of explosive radioactive waste, and it blew off portion of the base and started a fire. A bullet skimmed her arm, and she got angry. "Grr!" she charged at Agentrok, and beat him over the head with her gun. She grabbemd his gun and shot BoostPowah with both guns. They succured the gun room, they grabbed some guns, and then they planted a mine next to another can of raidioactive waste. "Run!" Nachary yelled, and just when they got out of the base, the base exploded. They had defeated FEAR again. l-C5-l
Nachary
#26084069Saturday, May 22, 2010 12:21 PM GMT

EPIK!!!!!!!!
catlord5
#26084412Saturday, May 22, 2010 12:35 PM GMT

Chapter 9: The Battle Of Bloxburg Donkeyo heard of the succes, and congratulated Nachary and Fluffyzay for their succes. There was just one area that Donkeyo needed to stop FEAR from getting supplies, Bloxburg. Donkeyo, Nachary, Fluffyzay, Bclark112, and Rockinsist attacked Bloxburg. Logan heard of what was going on, and went to Bloxburg to defend it. When he came on, he saw in the distance explosions, something bad was happening. Donkeyo had taken over a tank, and was blowing away enemies left and right. "Nothing will stand in my way now!" yelled Donkeyo. "Sir, get out of the tank now, or you will die!" screeched Fluffyzay. Donkeyo jumped out of the tank, and in mer moments after he jumped out of the tank, the tank exploded. "Thanks for saving my life, Fluffyzay." "No problem.....Donkeyo." "CHARGE!" Donkeyo screamed. He and his men (And Fluffyzay) ran over the bridge, and on to enemy territory. Some of Logans men attacked with airplanes, while the rest traveled on foot. Donkeyo's men and Logan's men met with a loud battle cry. You couldn't see anything! Bullets were flying, swords were slashing, and fires were roaring. Nachary attacked Agent and threw him so far that he fell off the baseplate. Donkeyo and his men killed them, and closed them into thier base. "Grr, I keep losing, I can't do this" and with that, Logan and his men left, they had conquered Bloxburg, and cut FEAR off from their supplies. l-C5-l
bclark112
#26084579Saturday, May 22, 2010 12:40 PM GMT

I love it even more.
SHREKODUDE
#26085292Saturday, May 22, 2010 1:04 PM GMT

W00t! FluffyZay! Put me in as the nice RAT Major that ends the war and gets to become a General (not gonna happen, but I like imagining it! LOL)!
catlord5
#26085295Saturday, May 22, 2010 1:04 PM GMT

Lol, I'll be making the next chapter in about an hour or 2, I have to go somewhere, bye! l-C5-l
bclark112
#26085345Saturday, May 22, 2010 1:06 PM GMT

See ya
Nachary
#26086641Saturday, May 22, 2010 1:48 PM GMT

I love myself in these stories they are so epic!
bclark112
#26086735Saturday, May 22, 2010 1:50 PM GMT

Yeah, epic alright.
catlord5
#26093300Saturday, May 22, 2010 4:02 PM GMT

Chapter 10: Treaty Donkeyo and Logan met at the HQ. Donkeyo had no one with him, while Logan had Agentrok and BoostPowah. Logan told Donkeyo to go to the RAT HQ for something, and now Donkeyo was dying to know what Logan has to say. "Donkeyo, it has come to my attention" Logan said. "That RAT is a very formidable apponent, and that FEAR would love for you to be our allies." "Hmmmm, I see. I was thinking the same thing, that it would be nice for us to be allies, you with all your men, and RAT with our power." "Hi Donkeyo." "What are you doing here Shrekdude?! I said nobody should come." "Well, I saw that Logan had 2 other people with him, so I came to protect you." "Well, since your here and your a Major, I guess I could let you stay, but no fighting!" "Ok sir." "Now, Shrek, what do you think about FEAR becoming our allies?" "I think that would be great sir!" "Also, how about a promotion of Genral for all your hard work?" "Thanks sir, thanks a lot!" So, everything in RAT was normal yet again. Logan handed over FEAR to Sonicthhedgehog, but Sonic still kept the treaty. Everything was good. l-C5-l
catlord5
#26093350Saturday, May 22, 2010 4:02 PM GMT

That was the last chapter, hope you enjoyed the story! =D l-C5-l
catlord5
#26095873Saturday, May 22, 2010 4:48 PM GMT

The next story will probably be about UCR. l-C5-l
catlord5
#26097371Saturday, May 22, 2010 5:16 PM GMT

Maybe not, I have a plan for a story, but It won't let me use it. Anybody have any ideas about what my next story should be about? l-C5-l
catlord5
#26110909Saturday, May 22, 2010 9:28 PM GMT

Anyone? l-C5-l
MarioKartAddict
#26113428Saturday, May 22, 2010 10:13 PM GMT

Have the setting in the future--RAT, FEAR, and x-101st versus UCR. RAT surrenders immeadiatly and becomes allies with UCR. x-101st is easily defeated. And FEAR ends up getting defeated in the end. So in the first chapter have RAT change sides. And IL can come in and attack both sides. AND PUT ME IN THERE AS A PERSON OF IMPORTANCE! :D
catlord5
#26114590Saturday, May 22, 2010 10:32 PM GMT

Ok, maybe. Anybody else have any ideas? l-C5-l
kaelan01
#26115759Saturday, May 22, 2010 10:53 PM GMT

I'm thinking of the beginning of the war between RAT and IL, or RAT and X-101st. Either should begin with them ambushing RAT. I would love to be in that part, if you use it ;) I'm a major in RAT.
catlord5
#26116428Saturday, May 22, 2010 11:06 PM GMT

K, I think I have an idea, I'm going to see if it works. I'll put you in it kaelan. l-C5-l
kaelan01
#26116526Saturday, May 22, 2010 11:07 PM GMT

K, thanks C4, you rock!
catlord5
#26116849Saturday, May 22, 2010 11:12 PM GMT

It' C5 lol. l-C5-l
kaelan01
#26117730Saturday, May 22, 2010 11:27 PM GMT

Whoops :P
BoostPowah
#26118385Saturday, May 22, 2010 11:39 PM GMT

Dang, I thought I died.
FootballMaster607
#26123165Sunday, May 23, 2010 1:12 AM GMT

I loved it, but I think you should have used more... expression. LOL, just kidding. It was great!
catlord5
#26143713Sunday, May 23, 2010 11:36 AM GMT

Thnx Football. =D l-C5-l