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CatninJoin Date: 2007-12-31 Post Count: 5525 |
Next chapter, please. |
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>.> tomorrow. too busy right now |
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give me comments or ideas you have! :D
I still have room for people to be in my story! |
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chriseonJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 1324 |
put me in again, put me in again |
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:/ I need a break....
May not write Chapter 13.5 today...
my homework is just horrific. |
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chriseonJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 1324 |
dude, i feel your pain |
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I wouldnt keep my fans waiting Brian. Ive already started on my sequel. |
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chriseonJoin Date: 2009-08-25 Post Count: 1324 |
where can i read it |
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Cookie is drowned in milk and Den a random nuke hits then random hobos eat cookies remains. |
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lol
cookie is being a troll again... now i troll his story. |
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No.
I a saying that I have started on my sequel. My fans have waited long enough so now I shall please them!.
That aint Trollololol'ing. You want Trolls? Ill give you Trolls.
Trollololololololol!!! |
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I havent even trolled his story! TOLD YA
HE ALWAYS STARTS FIGHTS |
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Bump
cookie is a troll, he admits it.
I drown da cookie in his own milk |
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I ate cookies today...literally.
They were chocolate chip and tasted good.
I tried this cookie that was trolling around...he tasted really sour... yuck..
I coughed his chewed bits in a toilet and flushed. |
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Brian. It is just a name.
I ask why I keep bumping this. There aint anything new to be interested in.
How about you bump this thread Brian when you finish your story that seems to have basically no plot and too many characters and no end! |
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Why don't you actually read it yourself?
It has a plot...A VERY LONG PLOT THAT IS ACTUALLY GOOD (just need to complete it).
Your's is abrupt and really stupid.
Making yourself the head of attention is even more stupid and kills the entire story. Really? a holiday dedicated to you? Wow...
And you showed your hatred against reesemcblox and telamon in the story.
And haven't you realized that a lot of people have commented on this story including some big FC high ranked (hunterspeedy, Pizzaman1000 took a glimpse of it and wants to make it a book gui) and FEAR high ranked (GenScar, Belial52)
What did your story get? I see a lot of tl;dr....
Can't make spaces because you're so lazy.
The illiterate people are right about your story. It's lame and packed up words spit out from a sewer line.
Go save yourself with all your biased friends who really never read my story in the first place.
My story actually has a good plot by adding more characters, more actions, and other realistic events. And it is the continuation of a previous story. And yes, there is an end to the story, but I am not revealing it. It ties with another story that Catnin has already made.
Yea, You got dunked in your own milk, cookie.
And that's how the cookie crumbles. |
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Yep, I shut him up.
Now, I need some more characters and ideas.
Give me anything and it will most likely be put in the story. Maybe some names of guns, vehicles, buildings, bases, technology? |
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