lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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THANK YOU!No reason to flame me cuz you didnt like it. |
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redsox748Join Date: 2008-09-20
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Wow my last post was a huge typo... |
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IMO its not that good of a song. |
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seriously dude..I dont see how somone would be like "Add music and dis could be a hit!" No...too short. Not enough lyrical power. Good start for a song writer though. |
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lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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Its not short.Wherever it says (chorus) you repeat the chorus.If you did that its not short.But thx. |
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Well still its not AS short but no long enough. Try adding and end verse then do the fade. |
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lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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End verse?Well theres 3 bridges and 4 or 5 choruses so I think thats pretty long. |
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Whatever kiddo Im done argueing with you. |
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lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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Well I didnt know we were arguing and btw I am probably older then you. |
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BTW no your probably not because somone who cant take critisism from anyone isnt older than me |
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lobstery why does it matter if your older. It doesn't make a difference. |
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PasteIJoin Date: 2010-06-09
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Sounds like something the old Linkin Park would write c: good job! |
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lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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I probably am older then you.And btw shadow hes the one who brought up the age thing.And i took ur critiscim.I just told you that my song WAS long.And THX DOMO:D |
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