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alien187
#36615870Saturday, November 06, 2010 10:20 PM GMT

PLOT: Scene 1:The merchant of venace set in medevil times your in the town of venice a man named Yorick with the unlearned skill of assassination free runs his town later has to deliver a package to lord telamon but on his way a man from behind knocks him out he wakes pu later looking at three people armed, the man in the middle with the hat none other than telamon himself saying "you did a great job with the delivery , but i wasnt going to let you just stoll outa here" he stabs a dagger in your heart and yorick knocks out surly dead. Scene 2: Life after death yorick wakes up in a bed blood all over him standing up he sees someone and approaches him the man wearing assasins clothes greeted himself his name was dalaxvanhar he then expalins how he was burried alive and was found by dog barking at the grave while he digged it up , yorick was going to kill lord telamon but he needed help , he was weak and untrained so he asked dalaxvan to be trained he accepted and first gave him a tour round the village nearyby venace first stopping of to getting him armour and weapons meeting the towns armourer and blacksmith , builderman he gave very unique agile assassin armour but it didnt suit yorick. builderman later was intrigued of a new idea he thoght of, grey magic robes which are bonuses for magic yorick wasnt set out to be an ordinary assassin but a one specialised in magic . later he went to get a place to stay by a woman named playrobot ,she created him a house extra ordinary in some ways after that he took his last stop to the enchanter clock work he enchanted his armour in strange ways and his armour felt alot greater. Scene 3: The training Yorick trained and trained he trained combat with dalax and studyd alot of magic books training to be as strong as telamon and wiping him out but after he had an unfinished questions he remembered asking dalax why telamon killed him he answered the parcel had something very special to open a door inside this door lies a skull a skull so great in magic it can only belong to one however you need answers as to get to the skull you must answer certain riddles they called it the riddling skull noone has ever solved them before and this object most likly a note has clues to them , if telamon reaches the riddling skull all fate is lost and humainty is doomed to suffer we must train you to defeat telamon and crown yourself as the skull as it is written you are the one destined to wear it yorick and untill death noone else shall have it Scene 4 : growing reputation he was ready to duel but after he had done instead of going ot the riddling place he was given a list from dalax a list with names and locations on them the people were lordnathon , jj5x5 , pheedy dobgirffen and yosuka . yorick traveled killng them all and each of them had a piece of a weapon to them he collected all pieces went back to builderman who created all pieces to one they called it firebrand ,his hope on defeating telamon lyed in this weapon and he had gained many followers and reputation assassinating through the counties. Scene 5 : The finale lieng one spot left on a map they called this place the ridling skulls resting place there was on obsticle getting there thought ot cross sword fight on hieghts which was lord telamons domain he traveled fighting telamons minions and reached the sword fight on hights accompanied by dalaxvanhar facing them a man in a cloaked hood putting it down it was roblox himself taking his darkheart out fighting both dalax and yorick he hit yorick with his handle knocking him of the heights to lava death seemed imitent but he feel through rocks instaed to a big dark cave going back ot dalax dueling with roblox fighting each other in a termendous duel both never giving up aultimate power of essence fighting between the two but dalax took a large swing roblox side stepping to the right then piecing dark heart through dalaxs body dalax fell into the lava dead yorick shouting as he watched and at that moment power went through him roblox jumped inside the cave yorick having super defensive mode fighting roblox not making one mistake using magic on his side but roblox's power was so strong pushing yorick on the ground after wards yorick thought of a plan very quickly and shot a magic bolt at the big rock above roblox falling down then crushing roblox he looked atrobloxs body it was glowing he grabbed it and power went through him this power was so powerful it was astounding he heard of the story of this power called project shadow . yorick made his way to the end of the maze seeing telamon chanting words with his eyes closed near the skull he approached him cautiously and telamon opened his eyes looking at him like he expected him he felt there wasnt even a contest in the match so he shot a huge bolt of fire at yorick yorick just made one quick counter sending the bolt and him flying backwards hitting the wall having complete power yorick starts destroying telamon but telamon took out windbrand shooting the magic back at yorick they had a fight firebrand vs wind brand the place crumbling ot how powerful the swords were hitting as they colided each other but in the end yorick disarmed telamon then stabbong both windbrand and firebrand through telamons heart yorick put them both back in sheaths and looked at the riddling skull taking it and watching it fix to his head its esscence was etremly powerful he knew it was his to keep till death where a new adventurer would have to solve the riddle later calling the place yoricks resting place where his home lived moving sword fight on the hights to another part of the world and mvoing his home vilage above the cave and at his death clockwork moved his skull to the spot in the cave he found it locking the cave up with an enchantment for it only opens at the week of haloween
alien187
#36615961Saturday, November 06, 2010 10:21 PM GMT

tell me waht charachter you want ot be
MikelTheMysterious
#38108488Saturday, December 04, 2010 8:45 PM GMT

Very, very good story, but you need to use capitals. I will follow this because I love the idea.
kikilolo1
#38124548Sunday, December 05, 2010 12:26 AM GMT

whatever female character you need.
alien187
#40947232Saturday, January 15, 2011 6:13 PM GMT

you could be playrobot .

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