wrong88Join Date: 2010-02-02
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we continue now leave idiot now you made one of my poster's allmost leave. |
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(ok..)
Charmander-
I chomp down on the apple some more. Yet I am unaware of a pokemon hiding in a bush behind me. |
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hido13Join Date: 2009-06-03
Post Count: 22066 |
(This doesn't even DESERVE to be in RP. No storyline or originality.) |
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wrong88Join Date: 2010-02-02
Post Count: 256 |
ignore hido dude |
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Charmander-
As I am about to finish the apple, something uses Bite on me and I tumble into a tree. |
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wrong88Join Date: 2010-02-02
Post Count: 256 |
Piplup
i looked at Charmander it look like he got bit! i ran over there and said are you ok! |
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hido13Join Date: 2009-06-03
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(Nice observation Sherlock.) |
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Charmander-
I was seeing stars."Char char... ( I'm seeing double... )" I look over and see a blue figure. It went over to my apple and grabbed it. "Char!" |
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wrong88Join Date: 2010-02-02
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i half to say one thing then we ignore him shut up GIRL! ok now we ignore him. |
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(Sorry to intrupt but Hido is a girl.) |
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(Erm... Girl isn't an insult, especially if you call a girl a girl.)
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hido13Join Date: 2009-06-03
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(I'll just sit here and watch you fail.) |
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( The Joy of lisening to verbal arguments ._. ) |
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(It isn't even verbal. They are fighting people they have never met. They are also typing, not speaking. :P )) |
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hido13Join Date: 2009-06-03
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(Exactly.) |
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( I call it verbal because most of the time when I say something else people yell at me -.-' ) |
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( Yes, commenting on arguments is generally a lose-lose situation. :P )) |
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( Thats probally why i'm hated at school >.> ) |
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( Oh, talking at school in general is a lose-lose situation. ) |
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wrong88Join Date: 2010-02-02
Post Count: 256 |
stop posting on my own post's message eachother like me and toust |
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hido13Join Date: 2009-06-03
Post Count: 22066 |
(You can't even spell "toast" right? Fail.) |
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wrong88Join Date: 2010-02-02
Post Count: 256 |
your mom FAIL giving berth to you! |
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( and the war continues :l ) |
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Grammar errors dectected! Grammar errors Dectected! Scanning...Scanning....Scanning...Scanning...Scanning complete! Found (2) grammatical errors.
(1) Capatilize the first word of a sentence.
(2) Since the birth has already happened, it should be "failed", not "fail."
Spelling errors detected: (2)
(1) The word "at" should be between "failed" -see above- and "berth."
(2) "Berth" should be "birth."
Logic errors detected (1)
(1) If she failed at giving birth, how is the person still alive? |
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