Ok so I have an udition for C.A.P.A and I have to turnin some creative writing pieces I started writing a small story but have ot finished i would like you guys to rate and give me any suggestions
Hello there my name is Alec. I live in a small place in Duluth,Minnesota. I used to ask my mom why did we move here and she would respond “Nothing bad ever happened and if something does we’re moving to Paris.” I think shes blind or something, but then again there are so many gangs they are most likely in ever state and I’m and inside person anyway.My favorite online game is mabinogi. I love being another person and I love the power.Could you imagine? Becoming another person and leaving to a semi-peaceful world.I think its what most would want, even if they won’t admit it.
My mother yells”Alec it’s time for breakfast, Oh and Merry Yule!”. For all of you who don’t know Yule s a pagan holiday, and yes my mother is a pagan. NO that does not mean my house is all spooky and there are ghost, we do not have magic cauldron instead of stove. Only my mother is pagan ad she is modernized.The rest of us are atheist.On the way to breakfast I hear “Hey fudge packer think fast.” I Quickly turn around and just barely doge a fist. I could already tell without looking at him it was my brother ”Shut up jarhead! “ I say.
Shortly after breakfast I meet with my best friend on our walk to school. I stop to tie my shoe.I probably should mention his name but right then something astonishing happened.A girl walked by me and everything changed.The air felt like steel needles pushing against all my pressure points, I forgot to breathe while she walked by. I’ve never had this feeling before.It was like a dream.Her hair shined brown in the light, as is if set on a bright orange fire. Her eyes were an icy blue. She had to have been born in December. She had on a Black hoodie, Tight blue DENIM jeans, and come black converses. Wasn’t really anything special so why did I feel this way about her? Like life just restarted.For second I wasn’t Alec the nerd, I was XxALCxX the top rated dungeon explorer in mabinogi riding past a hot and innocent elf on my stallion.*Snap Snap*
“Dude come back to earth” I shortly fly away from my dream land.“Hey Brian who is that girl?”.He shortly responds “Um that’s Adella The newest girl to Step foot in our small little town.” I drop my book. I bend to pick it up and get a paper cut and Immediately put it in my bag. |