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333kirby
#37766702Sunday, November 28, 2010 1:30 PM GMT

Prologue Anthony Koran WAS just a regular old 14-year old boy. He and his friends Jared, Mia, and Richard were sleeping in the rooms at Skillful arts school, a sleep away school for orphans. Anthony was a silent boy he did not speak much and he never gave away a secret. Chapter One Anthony was walking along the road after he had woken up from a bad dream, when he found an open sewage hatch. He crawled into the sewage hole and saw path markers leading to somewhere. Anthony followed them. As he followed them he came up to an open factory elevator. He went in and the elevator closed. It started moving down and then it stopped. The doors opened and Anthony stepped out. There was a super computer and three chambers that looked like body scanners. Anthony immediately whipped out his phone and called all his friends. After telling Richard, Jared, and Mia where he was they were all there in a matter seconds. Richard was very good in using high tech things so he manned the computer and the others stepped in the chambers. The computer screen blinked and a screen came up saying transfer to LYOKO. Richard was too curios to take the risk. He moved the mouse over and clicked YES. All of a sudden inside the chambers Anthony, Mia, and Jared heard the words transfer to LYOKO in 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1. The chambers started to glow and the computer screen blinked showing D.N.A. strands. The portals stopped glowing and open making a great fog.
qsdp2
#37778559Sunday, November 28, 2010 5:49 PM GMT

Cool, is this a book your making up? Sounds like a good book so keep writing.
devin077
#37791073Sunday, November 28, 2010 8:50 PM GMT

is anyone aware that this is plagarism? this is a near copy of a old show called code lyoko but he changed the names of all the characters!! it was germney erik odd and im not sure of the last one i havnt seen the show in years! if u dont beleive me then googel this code lyoko
FusionRex
#37791902Sunday, November 28, 2010 9:01 PM GMT

It's not going to be published, it's just fanfiction.
333kirby
#38778880Wednesday, December 15, 2010 11:25 PM GMT

i know that but its not plaguerism my bro and I jst took prt 1 (virtualization) everything else will b different
333kirby
#38778985Wednesday, December 15, 2010 11:26 PM GMT

i will keep writing
333kirby
#38779084Wednesday, December 15, 2010 11:27 PM GMT

you r correct fusion i may post this on fanfiction.net wen i get an account
FusionRex
#38849790Friday, December 17, 2010 1:15 AM GMT

it was germney erik odd and im not sure of the last one - Yumi. And it wasn't Eric, it was ULrich.
aelita8788
#38853543Friday, December 17, 2010 1:52 AM GMT

Dude... It wasnt.... It was: Jeremy, Ulrich, Odd, Yumi, and Aelita.
aelita8788
#39590417Sunday, December 26, 2010 10:28 PM GMT

B U M P ?

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