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tacobitzJoin Date: 2010-08-06 Post Count: 593 |
Okay sure =D I was going to do it..But you can if you want :P |
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The script might not be that good, because I was tired,
-Script One-
-Scene is in gym with Sam and Connie-
Sam: Connie, did you hear about the school concert coming up next week?
Connie: No.
Sam: You should enter!
Connie: I'll audition. I'm gonna go talk to Dawn after P.E.
-Scene is in front of school with Loom and Dawn-
Loom: ...And thats 123,456,789 reasons why school sucks.
Dawn: *Laughs* Oh, hey Con!
Connie: Did you hear about the concert coming up?
Loom: Everybody did....
Connie: I must've been the last one to hear.
Dawn: Well, are you going to enter? You sound very good.
Loom: Yeah!
-Buffy enters the scene-
Buffy: Hey Con-Freak, Dawn-Dork and Loom-Doom.
Dawn:What the hell do you want this time?
Buffy: Lunch money.
Loom: Like always.
Connie: Back off.
-Nicky enters scene-
Nicky: Back off from them, Buff.
Loom: Thank you.
Buffy: I'm out, idiots.
Nicky: Shut up.
-Buffy leaves scene-
-Scene shifts to music class with Danny, Dean, James, Lilac, Melanie Nicky and Sinead-
Melanie: I just hate school.
Nicky: School is pathetic. Just like everyone else here.
Sinead: Then how come you stood up for Dawn, Loom and Connie earlier?
Nicky: Shut up dumb-name.
Sinead: Shut up!
Danny: THISISSPARTAAAAAA!!!
Dean: GAWSH!! *Covers ears*
Nicky: The nerd speaks up. Dimwad.
Lilac: *Puts head on xylophone* I hate middle school....
James: NO! THIS IS MADNESS!
Melanie: NO! THIS IS PATRICK!
*Class stares at Melanie*
Lilac: Wow...
Melanie: *Turns red with embarassment*
Nicky: Mel, calm down.
Melanie: GO TO HELL, ALL OF YOU PATHETIC JERK! SCREW YOU LILAC!
*Lilac stands in corner, crying with fear*
Mr. Maynard: Lilac, its ok. Melanie, TO THE PRINCIPALS!
Melanie: Damnit.
Lilac: *Walks over to James, who is wearing a black and white fedora*
James: *Hugs Lil* *Puts a blue and green fedora on Lilac* Fedoras is my theme todai.
Lilac: *Silent giggle*
TO BE CONTINUED |
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lol wat the heck happened to melenie???O_o |
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NiftynessJoin Date: 2010-12-16 Post Count: 2377 |
Hmmm. Interesting script, I think its good enough for the first part. keep working on it. |
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i have a question.is this a movie or just a series with episodes/speacils/etc |
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tacobitzJoin Date: 2010-08-06 Post Count: 593 |
Movie :P |
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MastasinJoin Date: 2010-01-28 Post Count: 104 |
All i have to say is Epic |
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juliet204Join Date: 2008-08-02 Post Count: 2818 |
Seems like their should be more girl parts and Aelita is not even following the kids descriptions and they all sound like Pathetic Idiots who are all Haters to everyone who is around them and is always mean by saying H3ll and Damit so it seems like Taco should be the Script Writer......So Aelita needs to learn how to follow the kids DESCRIPTIONS not what she thinks their Descriptions are.....Please tell me she is gonna see this.... |
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MastasinJoin Date: 2010-01-28 Post Count: 104 |
Shes going to see it x3 |
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MastasinJoin Date: 2010-01-28 Post Count: 104 |
Heres a scpirt i came up with kind of still same mind set but
(Starts with Nicky and Sm showing what they do when they wake up t tried to explain it all)
Loom:Hey everyone -says something under breath-
James:Hey Loom
Sam:Hey Loom
James:Want to see the Hat i'm wearing its from France
Sam:Cool sounds like you have life expericne
James:Yup-Smiles-
Loom:You spend your life collecting these hats but in the end your just goin to die and we will have to do something with them why make mor work for us
James:I dont plan that kind of stuff i think about the now not the later
Sam:Good James thats what everyone should do :D
-Connie,Dawn, and Sinead enter-
-All say hi at same time-
-Everyone but Loom and Dawn give a quick Giggle-
Connie:Well here we are our last year of Middle School 8th grade how are you guys feeling about this.
Loom:1 More year closer to death -walks away-
-Dawn stays really quite-
Sinead:I'm happy shows we have matured and our parnets will trust us more :P
Dawn:-Sighs-
Sam:Well i agree with Sinead this is the year we can get jobs
-Bell Rings-
James:Come on we need to get to class
-Now in Math Class-
Teacher:Class today we will learn about Square Roots
Dean:Hey sam want to ditch and go to the park and play Rugbe
Sam:Shhh I dont know about you but i want to gget to High School
Dean:what ever
-Dean waks out of Class room-
Teacher;Mr.Smith where do you think your going?
Dean:To the park
Teacher: Ok dont cometo me when you need help
Nicky:So Con...
Teacher:Ms.Lin i do not want talking in my room
Nicky:Yes Sir
Nicky:So Connie you going to enter the talent show?
-Connie attacks like she dont know what shes talking about-
Nicky:Come on you have one of he best voices ever plus you can get a contract
Connie:contract for singing?How?
NIcky:Theres going to be a talent scout there
Connie:Really O-M-W
-Cuts to Commerical x3-
Tell e what you think ik it kind of short
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MastasinJoin Date: 2010-01-28 Post Count: 104 |
Acts not attacks again i'm tried.... |
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juliet204Join Date: 2008-08-02 Post Count: 2818 |
Aelita is always getting herself banned for saying h3ll and whatever else thats a bad word.
Aelita is a Perra |
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MastasinJoin Date: 2010-01-28 Post Count: 104 |
Lol? |
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juliet204Join Date: 2008-08-02 Post Count: 2818 |
I know Spanish and Perra is not a good word never say it unless you really hate someone. |
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Mm, Juliet, damn and hell aren't bad words.
Hell is a place. (And in the Bible)
Damn is in the Bible.
You are a reeeeal perra Juliet.
And a troll. |
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Apagar el infierno pendejo! |
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And FYI, she hired me. It's the script I wrote, so live with it. |
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MastasinJoin Date: 2010-01-28 Post Count: 104 |
._. to much drama that doesn't deal with the show..I don't like it all :| |
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i say hell on roblox.
see up there lol
watch me say crap
crap
lol |
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juliet204Join Date: 2008-08-02 Post Count: 2818 |
Some people report which i dont and Aelita you are the real Perra because you need to follow the descriptions of the kids because Melanie doesnt act like that. |
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juliet204Join Date: 2008-08-02 Post Count: 2818 |
Creo que Aelita debe aprender a seguir las descripciones
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MastasinJoin Date: 2010-01-28 Post Count: 104 |
Can we speak this in english? >> |
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