sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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Hi there, as part of a request by some other dude that's reviewing, I decided to do that. Now you may not know what I know about movie making, but I do have a lot of knowledge, and am going to special class for that.
Just send the request and see.
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WARNING:
Reviews are posted here as wall of texts, but that's just for special purposes that I want people get examples, and get some technical info about movie making. |
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Channel name: Bobbysayhi
Video(s) for review: ROBLOX Music Video: Bohemian Rhpasody by Queen!
Details: I tried to make it with almost all greenscreen. So some scenes I could of easily done without greenscreen I did with greenscreen. |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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|| ROBLOX Music Video: Bohemian Rhpasody by Queen! ||
The direction of this music video is good, I think it could be good.
But still there were some missing items like more variety of shots and transitions. The cuts in some parts were too quick, and there aren't enough effects in this video to give the feel that I think was supposed to be passed through.
The UI is interrupting almost everywhere and anytime.
Though it's missing some details and some things weren't cut away when should be, it had a good direction and as well as satisfying in the climatic part of the song. |
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Uhhh. I didn't understand half of what you said. Can you say it like you would explain to a younger 5th grader? |
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Channel name:Unitedmoviemakers
Video(s) for review:Roblox Crazyness: bricks of fury and Dayren house party
Details: These were random videos edited with premiere elements
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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@Bobbysayhi
The game's player list and chat is interrupting and the movement between shots is too instant, and there is really lack of movement and variety of clips and movements. Although the direction of the music video is good. |
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There is not really a way I know how to remove that. Also, what do you mean the movement is too instant?
I don't think I should have a fade out for 5 seconds that would ruin the pace of the song. |
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Eh, I'm not going to start a fight like you did after my review. Just review people's videos so they can understand what your saying.
One last thing.. Just try to find out what they were going for. The pace was slow on the slow parts and faster on the climax. ON the slow parts of the song if I had my guy jumping around and having tons of movement it would of been a mess. |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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Why necessarily 5 second fade out?
In some parts the transition is too instant and can lead to confusing the viewer.
You are not limited to a fade out in adobe premier you can think of something else that wouldn't ruin anything but improve actually. |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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@Bobbysayhi
Now now I didn't specified what kind of parts, at least a not solid mouth would change a lot if you want any specific detail. |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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|| Roblox Crazyness: bricks of fury and Dayren house party ||
I see that what you wanted to do is sort of a comedy documentation?
If that's so then I must say it was entertaining, and everything is just about roblox.
Although I found myself needed to pause the video to read what the guy was saying but still good one. |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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Now that bobby mentioned, put the direction of the movie in your details, I can only assume right now. |
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nooblet68Join Date: 2008-11-29
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Channel: Nooblet68
Video for review: Roblox Boss Battle: Roblox's Master Hand |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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@nooblet68
Well all it is, is gameplay video, not much to say about it. |
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Channel name: JohanSKruger
Video(s) for review: ROBLOX Movie: Roblox Trapped In The Darkness Part 1 & 2
Details: I want to know which are my errors and mistakes in these movies before I finish Part 3. Now since it's you sonic17th, I know you will review it and comment it with great knowledge of moviemaker mistakes. All criticism is accepted. |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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|| ROBLOX Movie: Roblox Trapped In The Darkness ||
PART I:
Well there was almost to no mistakes, but I did found a chroma keying error in the part where Johan falls out of the castle. I may suggest adjusting the threshold.
PART II:
Only few problems, again with chroma keying at the same part, but the way you made the camera angles and the dialog I didn't even remembered it was just a movie level video.
Both parts shared great animation and set build, as well as advancing plot. The scenes are made great, especially with the music selection. |
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KeesheeJoin Date: 2008-09-24
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Channel name: Conshava
Video for review: The featured video on my channel.
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KeesheeJoin Date: 2008-09-24
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hope u get sum lulz |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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@Keeshee
Well that was boring.
If you are aiming at one shots, the actors need to make it intereseting, not to mention the camera angles were bad and...this seems like it has no plot or purpose. It's like it was filmed for the heck of it. |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28
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Also to add to that criticism above, there is no music to at least keep the spirit of this video up. It's just another day in the office as how I describe it. |
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nooblet68Join Date: 2008-11-29
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I'll probably finish a proper 'Movie', then ask for your critisism... |
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KeesheeJoin Date: 2008-09-24
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I did not even film it. I just starred in it. And your right it had nothing planned about it. (except for what happened @ the beginning) |
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Thanks Sonic17th, I now know my mistakes, and know what to fix for the final part. Thanks yo. |
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