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nqnt
#48245629Tuesday, June 07, 2011 7:10 PM GMT

"Why?!" I shout as I hear the whip crack again. It strikes me on the back, again and again. This pain is like no other, never ending, probably worse than how they do it in H3ll. Tears flow down me face like small rivers, blinding me, and mixing with the blood that drips out of my mouth. I'm guessing they want to know the extent of my powers, but I won't show them anything. Ever since they murdered my parents, they've been treating me like a lab rat. The whip strikes again and I black out. Is there really no hope?
nqnt
#48255142Tuesday, June 07, 2011 9:56 PM GMT

I had both the 2 and 3 chapter out but Roblox killed it TAT but I plan to re-write them tomorrow >.>
karateperson
#48262145Tuesday, June 07, 2011 11:50 PM GMT

Is that the whole Chapter 1?
nqnt
#48301688Wednesday, June 08, 2011 8:02 PM GMT

Yeah. I'm srry it's so short but I wrote it when I was half asleep :\ The other chapters are longer.
karateperson
#48305702Wednesday, June 08, 2011 9:50 PM GMT

ah ok
Prefex
#48309266Wednesday, June 08, 2011 11:01 PM GMT

In a book that would be like 4 lines... ~Prefex the Prefect~

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