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Sonic was sitting at the eating table with his parents, when suddenly 15 ( I don't know how old he is ) year old Sonic jumped up and down like a little kid looking up at a million dollars. Sonic said " I found something, it is fear! " Sonic's parents looked up at him and said, " You fear something cupcake? " Sonic, " Yes I am going to make fear! Sonic's parents, " How? Sonic, easy all I need to do is write what the F and E and A and R stands for.. x Sonic runs to the Computer x He goes on Roblox.com and tries to make a group but it rejected him. He read it and it said he need BC to make it. Sonic, " MOM, Can I have BC on this website? " Sonic's mom said sure honey. He jumped up and down. He sang " fear by drake " His mom did all the stuff and he then thought what it standed for. Sweet magic pumpkins he said. First Encounter Assault Recon! He then made it and finished it and Telamon joined!
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Reply and tell me if anything needs to be improved. Be Ready for Part 2! |
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MajicCowJoin Date: 2010-05-24
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Cool Story Bro
omg floodcheck GET OOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTT |
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Thanks. Guys, if you have any advice reply. |
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cool and i am making THE EPIC FEAR BATTLE coming soon |
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Not bad, although. If SONIC is 15 shouldn't he be more umm... Mature? |
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Chapter 2, Deathly begining coming soon in 3D! |
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ItudiosJoin Date: 2011-02-11
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That wuz wierdly pleasant. Ha ha. |
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jacobdgJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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Your doing it all wrong. |
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So it is my verson of it Jacob.. |
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Chapter two: Deathly starting
Sonic was suprised by Telamon! Telamon was too famous, and Sonic never thought Telamon would join! After that, bundle's of Robloxians started joining and now it had over 10k members! By now, people started making groups and one of the group maker's name was Justgoaway1! Sonic was mad at Justgoaway that he made a group named VORTEX Security. He knew it was the 2nd largest group and he didn't like the Vortex Security. Meanwhile, while Sonic was making plans to attack them, Vortex Security was already at their Forts blocked every exit. It was a surrender or die. Vortex Security had mp5's and Snipers and Shotguns. Suddenly, he called his army to the outside while VS was outside the Fort's gate. Sonic's suddenly got a phone call from ColourTheory, CT said his army will be inside the Fort in a minute. Surly, they arrived. and Now VS was outnumbered. Suddenly VS got a phone call from Trick55.
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Wait for part 3 on 3D!
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ItudiosJoin Date: 2011-02-11
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This is epically wierd. |
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ItudiosJoin Date: 2011-02-11
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Some day they're gonna be foruming the stories of how MOAF started...... |
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HAX3RZ101Join Date: 2011-05-02
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Not bad I like it. |
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fiht345Join Date: 2008-04-24
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Why does it seem like FEAR people always make duplicate threads of eachothers threads. There is another thread just like this further down the page. |
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My first piece of advice: not to be mean, but use grammar. The stories lack it. Other than that, they're fine. Except for the fact your timeline is way off. FEAR has been around for years. VS was just made last December. |
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I got grammar. I don't care about the so called " Time Line ". |
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weewoeJoin Date: 2010-12-02
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What blox says ish true. But still, pretty good story. |
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