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I know so many grammar errors, Im not the best at grammar and I like getting these out as Fast I can. Oh guys please join Gold cobras I would really appreciate it. |
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Make a 4th chapter and let me be in it. I am a CPL and I would like to be a surviver. |
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Book 1: The Revenge Plot
Chapter 14: Where Happiness runs in the Roots...
Where Happiness runs in roots….
The water in the elevator was almost half way full.
“Guys, I know I always here drink a lot of water and its good for you….But not right now…” said Zak.
“We need to get out of here!” said Poker.
“Ya, we kind of got that!” said Mike. In am matter of minuets the elevator would be an aquarium.
“I got it!” said Zak “Reaper give me your computer!”
“Wait no…” said Reaper scared.
“Too late.” Said Mike handing Zak the computer. Zak took it and smashed threw the door. It created an opening for them to float down into the base. Zak handed the computer back.
“Thanks.” Said Reaper in a sarcastic tone. They quickly swam out of the elevator and into the base.
“Well that was a close one..” said Poker
“Tell me about it…” replyed Mike. They walked into the room to find a surprise.
“Devin…” said Reaper. Devin was the leader of Regian of Chaos a new enemy FEAR had encounterd.
“Oh hello, I see you escaped our little moving aquarium.” Said Devin in a evil voice.
“Why are you here?” asked Zak.
“Maple payed me to kill you and it will be my pleasure now lets start.” Said Devin. He stiked at Reaper and jumped….
“Were here now get your stinking buts to that underground base whatever.” Said Alexis another onoe of the Fear generals. The remaining Fear soldiures took off into the base.
“The underground base is big where do we look?” said Conk.
“Hmmmmmmm well where would it be. We need to think like Sonic.” Said Killer.
“He would put it in a place people wouldn’t suspect.” Said Conkum.
“I guess, wait let me see that parchment.” Said Killer. Conk handed over the riddle. Killer turned it over and it read: FEARS SWORD IN THE DARK IS STONE BUT IN THE LIGHT Is Fears victory!
“Fears sword…” said Conk. They ran into the main hall. There stood sonic statue holding a stone sword.
“Quickly get into the sunlight!”said Killer. They ran outside and they were the right. The sword turned into the a jewl incrested gold instead of stone.
“We were right!” said Killer. Suddenly and explosion hit just next to him. Fear wasn’t the only people after the sword…
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Explosion hit next to you, BIG ANNOUNCMENT: THERE WILL BE 20 CHAPTERS |
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Ahh!!! I finally caught up with the chapters. Me need more! |
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IF YOUR FAN JOIN THIS GROUP IF UR A CHARCTER JOIN THIS GROUP:http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=337177 |
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I will join soon Maple, Need to make some space first |
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xPolariumJoin Date: 2008-06-20
Post Count: 291 |
Yay caught up as well...I like how its been going...Not alot of people are put in it which is good because its going to make this story confusing with ppl doing this...And also so many people who posted need some logic on there scenes they post -_- |
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Book 1: The Revenge Plot
Chapter 15: Fight on the Ocean Floor
Fight on the Ocean Floor
Reaper slid out just as Devin’s sword hit the ground.
“Ugh, I hate that maple I just so want to-“ said Zak.
“Mind your language Zak.” Said Poker.
“Hey were not at a library.” Said Zak. Poker rolled his eyes.
“Enough of these games lets begin!” said Devin impatiently.
“Wait a second were trying to work out something, can you wait?” said Zak.
“Even if this isn’t a daycare you still shouldn’t swear!” said Poker
“What are you my teacher?” said Zak.
“Guys maybe we should start um…fighting.” Said Mike
“Yea I almost got killed guys!” said Reaper
“He’s not my mom!” said Zak.
“Did she teach you any manners?” replyed Poker.
Zak got mad and swung his sword back hitting Devin who was sneeking up on him.
“Oh oops…” said Zak
“Get to the Vak ship quickly!” said Conk. They ran on to the ship. The captain zoomed there way out.
“Ugh that was a close one.” Said Killer.
“Mhm you almost got hit.” Said Conk. The ship was flying high speed away from prominent gigantic ship.
“Ahh were exactly are we going?” asked Killer.
“We don’t know your supposed to tell us.” Said The Vaktovain pilot.
“Go to FEAR underwater base.” Said Conk. The ship turned sideway and zoomed.
“You two come!” said Squidboi, they followed him into the room
“What is it?” said killer seeing Vaktus stressed.
“TDfall and Ben have died, by the mask assassin. The prominent empire is taking over were falling all of Roblox is falling…. Said Alexis….
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Kaijin16Join Date: 2010-07-27
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Pfft, TDFall never would've died to some assassin. =P
P.S. Telamon wouldn't have died either. He would've just banned him XD |
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Book 1: The Revenge Plot
Chapter16: The Prominents Strike Back
The Prominents Strike Back
“Ah well um.. I think I accidently hurt devin…” said Zak
“Not hurt him, pwn him!” said Killer. They had a few laughs and went into the control room. Everything seemed destroyed or damaged. They went up to the scientist that were in control of the base.
“Will it be fixable?” said Poker
“We don’t know, were trying now.” Said the head scientist
“Ok, so there is hope.” Said Mike. They paced around, waiting for the next move.
“There is incoming call, its from a Vak ship? Should we accept it?” asked a pvt.
“Yes accept it!” said Poker. The call was glitch as underwater there was not very good signal.
“Hello,Hello? Were just saying us Vak and Fear that were coming to the base. Also get to your battle stations the Prominent Empire is right on our tail.
“Argh and I thought vaktovian was the worst, those prominents beat them by a long shot.” Said Zak.
“Especially that dumb leader Maple, hes a..” said Mike.
“Lets not have another language argument.” Said Poker.
“The last time we did, we killed a mass murder..” said Zak.
They all laughed. For once in a long time they were not on the run or battling. That didn’t last long, an explosion hit. A vaktovian ship crashed and killer and Conk jumped out with a couple of Vak soldier.
“Were here and so is the Prominents.” Said Killer.
“WATCH OUT!” said Conk as he pushed killer out of the way. A grappling hook shoot down picked up Conk and and shot back up.
Conk was kidnapped…………
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Oh god i hope nothing happens to me lol |
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xPolariumJoin Date: 2008-06-20
Post Count: 291 |
What was i gonna say D: |
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Book 1: The Revenge Plot
Chapter 17: The rescue Misson
The Rescue Mission
“NOOOO! Conan!” said Killer. Killer tried to jumped, but couldn’t reach him. He was too high already. The gray ship was about to take off.
“We need to catch it! The ship.” Said Poker.
“Are you kidding me that’s the prominent Hive..” said Zak
“He’s right it will be swarming the prominent.” Said Reaper.
“Oh and worst of all the queen bee Maple.” Said Mike in a disgusted voice. It would be dangerous. Though Conankum was worth the risk.
“How do we get up?” asked Killer.
“Our helicopter it should still be there.” Replyed Poker. They rushed To the copter and Killer jumped into the pilot seat.
“Are you sure you know how to run this?” questioned Zak
“Well I know how to run a sea ship so really how different are they?” said Killer. They flew up twisting and turning and swirling around in the wind.
“ Yea next time KILLER ISNT DRIVING!” said Mike
“I feel like cottan candy in a machine, oh what Id give for some cotton candy.” Said Zak.
“Well guess what were on…”
Maple could taste his victory. He was going to get the sword and then..
“Sir it’s the wrong one.”his secretary interrupted his thoughts,
“What do you mean?” asked Maple.
“It means he dosen’t posses the sword.” She replyed.
“What ARGH!” yelled Maple.
“There is someone on the ship, its those pesky friends.” Said the assistant
“Well lets give them a proper greeting.” Said Maple with an evil smile
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Maple, Epic book. This is gonna be ahrad thing to make for the Special thing though.... JOIN MAPLE'S BOK FAN CLUB TO KNOW!!!
Maple, this one is all you lol |
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xPolariumJoin Date: 2008-06-20
Post Count: 291 |
@happy you keep saying something special
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Um Idk if Maple's going to add anymore characters until book 2 |
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Book 1: The Revenge Plot
Chapter 18:In the Hive
In the Hive
“Were alive?” asked Zak not wanting to open his eyes. He peeked through his hands and then opend his eyes.
“Yes were alive,surprisingly” replyed Mike. The wind rushed threw their hair as they walked along the top of the ship and slipped into it.
“So this is how it looks in the hive.” Said Poker as they walked down the hall. Suddenly droids came around the corner.
“SWORDS OUT!” yelled killer. Poker quickly took his sword jumped up and cut both droids in half.
“Maple knows were here we need uniforms.” Said Reaper. They followed him into a room left open.
“Here put these on.” Ordered Poker.
“Really do we have to it’s not my color..” said Zak
“JUST PUT IT ON!” yelled Mike.
“Shese Pushy much…” answerd Zak. They put the uniforms on and went down the hall.
“Im traking conan now…He is in the central detainment chamber!” said Reaper. They followed him down a series of stairs and steps into a room.
“CONAN!” Killer pointed out. There in a sort of electrical prison was the brave fear member. They turned of the jail cell and conan ran out.
“They were looking for the sword…They meant to pick up killer.” Said Conan.
“What is so special about this sword…” said killer looking at it.
“Why don’t you ask?” said Maple in an evil voice. Reaper took out his gun, and the others with there swords.
“We fight him together..” said Mike.
“Well,well,well we have the whole gang, oh what? Was sonic too afraid to come, oh wait he’s dead. I really have to give my congratz to that assassin, who ever it is….” Said Maple. He flew on top of the ship.
Zak angrily, flew up. Then he charged his sword to maple, but something or someone blocked him…
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fiht345Join Date: 2008-04-24
Post Count: 7216 |
Why is it on the VS wall? |
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