gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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Location: RAT Fort Celeste
Squad: VM Elite Squad
Mission: Extermonate ColourTheory
Gcnastasi Nastyboy99 and Smrpglover were all waiting for Mothesnail at fort Celeste.
"Where is he" said Smrp in a annoyed voice.
"Hes always like this" Replyed Gc.
Finnaly He showed up.
"Where were you!?" Said Nasty.
"IDK" Replyed Mo.
So they began heading into Celeste from the back entrance.
"Were in" Gc said into the walky-talky to Majortoht and Catucus who were in a Black Hawk above.
"Remember," Said Gc, "Stay Focused, Stay Alive"
"Its clear" Said Major from above in the Black Hawk.
"Move in!" Said Gc
They were in the base.
"Now where is he." Said Nasty
They were looking around for Colourtheory.
"Guys over here!" Said Nasty
"I hear voices!" Said Nasty!
"Colour remember you own RAT you dont fight!" Said a Voice
"Hes in there!" Said Nasty
"1,2,3.... NOW!"
The door slamed up and the RAT Admirales were sitting around the meeting table in shock!
Nasty stuck out his DF Pistol.
A bullet was fired from that gun straight to Colour's head.
"Target Down!" Gc Said
Then a bullet was fired from TDFalls gun.
That went straight to Mo's head.
"Man Down!" Said Smrp
Smrp fired his gun like crazy and hit every single RAT admiral.
"GO GO GO" Yelled Smrp
"We need pick up!" Gc said to Major and Cat
When the squad got out of Celeste a Black Hawk landed and picked them up.
"Target down.... and mo" Said Gc
They got on the Black Hawk and flew away to VM Fort Vortex!
THE END!
Im not the best writer this is my first story hope you liked it!
Join Vortex Military Today! http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=224659 |
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bloodbredJoin Date: 2009-08-12
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Stories are terrible when they are biased.
**TERRIBLE**
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gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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Becuase you like RAT |
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He jelly bro. He wants to shoot ColourTheory in the head :3 |
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bloodbredJoin Date: 2009-08-12
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No, but seriously. I am an author *On Roblox* and I still atleast keep balance between two enemies, even if I hate one of them.
It's called **WRITING A GOOD STORY BRO** |
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gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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Lol no |
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OrudoJoin Date: 2011-08-26
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He doesn't want to get out, bro.
-The Master Orudo- |
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gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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:3 |
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gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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:3 |
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Yes.
Because some small haters will "extorminate" a popular clan figure who can respawn, leading to his "Down Fall."
Work on your spelling and grammar, actually see ColourTheory in a game, get to know him, then calculate your chances against RAT, and THEN write a story. |
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I found it lacked a large amount of details and descriptions. Instead of quickly rushing through that, you could of described the areas, desribed everyone and thing they saw, describe all they did, so on. Maybe the admirals shouted in surprise, maybe on stood up, perhaps one fainted, who knows. Maybe Mike realized the grim situation and pulled out his love letter to be sent to Texar? :3 |
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gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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Everyone |
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TexarJoin Date: 2008-12-16
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" Maybe Mike realized the grim situation and pulled out his love letter to be sent to Texar?"
Oyus! :D |
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Orudo is your new master.
Bow to his feet, colaboy. And drink Pepsi pl0x. |
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gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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lol |
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nou sand.
Orudo is nt mi m4st4r. catlord5 is, durr >.< |
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Catlord5's everyone's master. But Orudo is like your slave owner.
That's right - you've been imprisoned into a life of free servitude.
And all his slaves drink Pepsi.
And free people too.
IZ 4 COL KIDZ |
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gcnastasiJoin Date: 2010-05-01
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Catlord may be your master BUT CHUCK RULES ALL! |
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NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
NEVAR! |
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@gcnast
tru
@cola
too late, alreasy happened
bye bye |
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Nope!
Colaboy3000 uses proof and it did happen!
Look at The C&G Council. I am 2nd Generation. I win. By Fatality. |
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i've been here since early 2010 and have been very inactive recently
anbd have like 5 times as many posts as you
so your argument is invalid |
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