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uuuum so here it is please don't laugh it means alot to me. this is more of a punk rock song.
It's over, look out below
I'm wasted, I still taste it
Yeah it's so hard to let go
So breathe in now, and breathe it out
The forecast; A car crash
It's looking like another
Breakdown, rebound
This could be my last goodbye
You cross your heart, I hope to die
And I can't deny your eyes
You know I try to read between the lines,
I saw a warning sign
And then you feel me up against the wall
Who said that it's better to have loved and lost?
I wish that I had never loved at all
No rewinds, no second times
And I won't break, I won't waste
Everything you left behind
So don't follow, just let it go
The weather's been better
So let it be another
Breakdown, rebound
This could be my last goodbye
You cross your heart, I hope to die
And I can't deny your eyes
You know I try to read between the lines,
I saw a warning sign
And then you feel me up against the wall
Who said that it's better to have loved and lost?
I wish that I had never loved at all
All the nights you spent sitting nowhere
Out there on your own
All the nights I waited by the phone
When you were going in alone
And all your different faces
And all your different ways
Are making everything a mess
And all I'm saying is that
I have different places and
All the complications end today
And I can't deny your eyes
You know I try to read between the lines,
I saw a warning sign
And then you feel me up against the wall
Who said that it's better to have loved and lost?
I wish that I had never loved at all
And I can't deny your eyes
You know I try to read between the lines,
I saw a warning sign
And then you feel me up against the wall
Who said that it's better to have loved and lost?
I wish that I had never loved at all.
i hoped you liked it please comment... |
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ha ha ha ha ha. just kiddin'. don't worry about people making fun of it. Its a really great song. Its way better than anything else i can write. Half the people on roblox can't even songs(including me). |
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i mean half the people on roblox *can't* even write songs |
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To thanks dude. I've always written songs but I never knew they were good. |
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good i might put another of my songs in this one |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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Dude you're better then Leiagirl |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
Post Count: 6642 |
Here's a part of my song:
I had a cup of beer and a cigarete.
Before I turned out the lights.
It was half past three and it was late at night.
I was with my son and he asked,"Dad, what the he** is lov"
And I said,
(fast part)
Lov is two-timer, backstabber, heartbreaker, gubuster in the brain.
Lov is a night that can't go wrong but in the end it does.
If you try you like it If you don't you'll hate yourself.
I hate lov so much,
That's all i got so far |
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The song Mike "created" wasw just copied and pasted off the internet. Don't belive me? Heres the link to the song: http://www.lyricsdir.com/boys-like-girls-up-against-the-wall-lyrics.html |
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SnoMan044Join Date: 2007-12-16
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*dosen't laugh* |
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That's a really great song! It'd sound perfect if Billy Joe Armstrong were singin' it. |
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as a matter of fact i wrote in a song for a contest and they used it don't believe me look on their archives they have conests! |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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WELL WADDAYA WAITIN 4? SING IT! SING IT! SING IT! |
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Steelix1Join Date: 2008-01-08
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That was awsome you should record that 1/10 1000 wait to go |
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That was awesome keep makin songs ;) |
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dude forget the comments i said. u copied it, u didn't right it. it's a song called up against the wall by boys like girls. if u don't believe me, ask the link:http://www.lyricsdir.com/boys-like-girls-up-against-the-wall-lyrics.html |
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SamRokzJoin Date: 2007-08-13
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XD. pwned. |
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amber2468Join Date: 2008-03-11
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Psh. Song writing wannabe. You didn't write that song, and you know it. |
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lol i know i just wanted to see how many views sorry guys.... lol |
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When we got out
______________________________
Ooh when i see the mountain,
and trees,
i wanna be free.
When i see the light,
i like it bright,
so happy, as can be.
When we got out i talk about,
how happy i wil be.
QWhen we go out,
i wanna shout,
"Let us be free!"
Then i got and see the mountains,
up high they touch the sky,
I love the air,
and it flows through my hair it's gentle,
and cool.
I'm no fool.
When we got out i talk about
how happy i will be.
When we go out
i wanna shout,
Lets all be free.
Oh i love the sound,
and I love the ground
this is where we live,
so lets love it
gracfully.
By Music Making Miley.
Lke it? |
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ya but post it in your own forum ill coment it more if it's on there. |
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i have a suggestion if you make a song bye yourshelf you shouldn;t post it cause someone could copy and when they get older and be a singer sing it |
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so?
I mean, i dont care.
Even if they do. |
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Dude, that's decent!
Great, even! |
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