what you think of my song

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#5601226Friday, February 13, 2009 4:24 PM GMT

all i do is sit and watch tv i think im addicted to mtv what is wrong with me and why cant my mum see all i wanna a do is watch tv theres nothin else much better than it to me i just wanna watch tv... ( X2 ) i just cant get her off my mind shes sendin me all of the right signs she wants me its just why cant she see all i wanna see is her face i would wipe out the entire human race just to see her smile and to be with her for a while ( X2 ) when i get addicted to somethin i just cant get it off my mind im just that king of guyyyyyyyyyy... all i wanna see is her face i would wipe out the entire human race just to see her smile and to be with her for a while ( X2 ) oh oh oh ohhhhhhh

killerdan

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#5601249Friday, February 13, 2009 4:25 PM GMT

plz be nice i made this up on the spot so i havent got all of it right

killerdan

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#5601349Friday, February 13, 2009 4:32 PM GMT

plz comment... ive wrote songs before but never had the guts to show people them or sing them

killerdan

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#5601540Friday, February 13, 2009 4:48 PM GMT

plz just tell me what you think

dbesdesd

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#5601636Friday, February 13, 2009 4:59 PM GMT

It's a nice song. I've only written two songs, and I'm asking myself if they're good or not.

ultrajbb901

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#5601839Friday, February 13, 2009 5:14 PM GMT

very nicely done.

littlebro227

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#5603507Friday, February 13, 2009 7:30 PM GMT

U got some sort of music to go with that?

killerdan

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#5621763Saturday, February 14, 2009 10:03 AM GMT

i cant write music for it. but its all in my head

ultrajbb901

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#5622381Saturday, February 14, 2009 12:43 PM GMT

how about do the guitar tabs.

killerdan

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#5625824Saturday, February 14, 2009 4:25 PM GMT

i cant play the guitar. il try to set up a youtube account so i can sing it for all you bloxxers.

killerdan

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#5632873Saturday, February 14, 2009 9:10 PM GMT

..........@..@..@.........@..@..@ ........@............@....@.............@ ........@......(\(\.....@......../)/).....@ ..........@....(=':')...........(':'=)....@ ............@.(..(")(").......(")(")..).@ ................@.....................@ ....................@..............@ ........................@.......@ .............................@ Happy Valentine! thanks for the comments

Predator22716

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#5636198Saturday, February 14, 2009 11:03 PM GMT

Hmm it's a nice song. Good job

ultrajbb901

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#5655515Sunday, February 15, 2009 5:39 PM GMT

oh. i can. heres an example. ---3---2 -1------ -------0 ---5--- -------- -------3

killerdan

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#5682467Monday, February 16, 2009 4:06 PM GMT

il ry t get permission to be on youtube k

Fall4You11

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#5687731Monday, February 16, 2009 7:22 PM GMT

nice song

Sangan

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#5708800Tuesday, February 17, 2009 3:37 PM GMT

i love it and i want to se her play it

killerdan

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#5709024Tuesday, February 17, 2009 4:01 PM GMT

IM A MAN!

whisperwitch

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#5709319Tuesday, February 17, 2009 4:31 PM GMT

lol! its a nice song

4thRemnent

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#5710301Tuesday, February 17, 2009 5:56 PM GMT

very good.

Sangan

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#5710506Tuesday, February 17, 2009 6:14 PM GMT

no i men i want to hear that girl in the song play it

undertaker9229

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#5712729Tuesday, February 17, 2009 8:52 PM GMT

YEAH I KNOW THAT WE GET ANGRY (YEAH WE GET ANGRY YEAH WE GET ANGRY YEAH WE GET ANGRY) BUT IT DONT MATTER CAUSE I AM THE ONE (TO STOP THIS TO STOP THIS SONG TO STOP THIS SONG) HEY BUT LET ME TELL YOU. (CHORUS) SO IM MAD AT ME AND IM MAD AT HER BUT NO ONE NOW CAN STOP THE WIND IN MY WAY BUT I SAID HEY IM GONNA RIP OF MY CLOTHS AND THEN GO AND SNIFF A ROSE CAUSE I KNOW I WANT TO GO BUT MICHAEL JACKSON ROSE AND MADE HIMSELF THE TONE BUT BOB MARLEY RIPPED OF HIS CLOTHSAND SNUGGLED IN HIS DOSE BUT I KNOW THAT HE IS SO PAFETIC AND HE IS GONE SO HE IS OUT OF MY TONE MY TONE HAS GONE BUT IM OK YES I AM OK NOBODY CAN GET GONE.

killerdan

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#5727368Wednesday, February 18, 2009 10:17 AM GMT

lol woah over 100 views sweet. this is my best forum post yet.

undertaker9229

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#5727793Wednesday, February 18, 2009 11:56 AM GMT

thanks mate

Fall4You11

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#5950648Friday, February 27, 2009 10:56 PM GMT

good song undertaker but needs to be a little bit longer

killerdan

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#6435920Sunday, March 15, 2009 8:46 PM GMT

how bout this you come up with another verse and il add it to the song if i like it PS: im not allowed on youtube :(