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verse 1
y does it bring me down
y do i hang around
i no i cant do nothin bout
the way i feel i wanna scream out loud!
pre chourus
because!
Chorus
im sick and tired of ppl yellin in my ear
tellin me wat to do and wat to fear
i wanna break free
sing it to me
quit tellin me how my heart should b
i no i like him even when he hates me
but its my life
and its gonna be all right!
verse 2
quiet but social when im with the band
seeing all of my friends...but him
he new about it all even though im lost
and all the things they have told me i forgot
(pre chorus)
(chorus)
bridge
i wanna break out
i wanna do it now
i wanna rock out hard
but i cant with a broken heart!
(chorus 2x) |
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jay7001Join Date: 2008-12-03
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its good i love it :D |
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zpwnerJoin Date: 2008-09-02
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nIce song |
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JBroxJoin Date: 2008-12-03
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Cool |
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drahmin10Join Date: 2008-09-18
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pretty good |
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HossaJoin Date: 2008-02-19
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AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING |
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jay7001Join Date: 2008-12-03
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i love it |
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possumboyJoin Date: 2008-10-04
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pretty darn good... |
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cool! Do you like mine?"It's Going Down"
[Intro]
I knew I was being threatened
Do you think it was worth holding out?
I mean I've heard some pretty ugly things about those guys
Ugly stories
[X-ecutioners]
Watch them flee... watch them flee
Rap rap rap up
Watch them flee
Hip-Hop hits
And you do it like this
[Verse 1]
It's going down
The rhythm projects 'round the next sound
Reflects the complex hybrid dialect now
Detects the mesh of many elements compressed down
The melting pot of a super-futuresque style
The combination of vocal caress
With lungs the gasp for breath
From emotional stress
With special effects
And a distorted collage
Carefully lodged between beats of rhythmic barrage
[Pre-chrus x2:]
It's going down
The logical progression on the timeline
The seperation narrowed down to a fine line
To blur the edges so they blend together properly
Take you on an audible odyssey
Now it's going down
A logical progression on the timeline
The seperation narrowed down to a fine line
To blur the edges so they blend together properly
Take you on an audible odyssey
Now it's going down
[Chorus}
Put it out for the world to see
LP and X-Men to the 10th degree (It's goin down)
Nobody in the world is safe
When we melt down the wax in your record crate (It's going down)
[Verse 3]
Once again it is
Composed sentences
All together venomous
The four elements of natural force
Projected daily through the sound of the source
Everybody on board as we blend
The sword with the pen
The mightiest the weapons
Swinging right from the chin
To elevate of mental states
Long gone with the wind
To defend men from shoddy imitation pretends
It's going down
Style assimilation readily
Trekking through the weaponry
Of the pure pedigree
Cleverly seeing through whatever is ahead of me
Whatever the weather be
We invent the steadily
It's going down sub-terrestrial high
I rhyme regiment that's calling the shots
Exectution of colloborative plots
Ready to bring the seperation of style to a stop
[Pre-chorus]
[Chorus}
[X-ecutioners]
X-men 'bout to blast off world wide
Yo it's a request only
X-men 'bout to blast off world wide
It's built from scratch
Album in stores soon
'Bout to blast off world wide
And you do it like this
Just like this
[X-ecutioners]
Put put...put it up
I said it goes like this
And you do it like this
It's going down
Put put...put it up
I said it goes like this
And you do it like this
It's going down
[X-ecutioners]
Like this
Like this
Like this
Like this
Like this |
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JAXONCJoin Date: 2008-10-01
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You guys are great. I like making progressions and riffs on guitar, but I could NEVER make lyrics. Good job! :-D |
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i can like make a beat and stuff, but never any lyrics! they all sound weird to me. i mean my lyrics. your are good |
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croc2crocJoin Date: 2008-09-12
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It's Going Down is way better than the the first one |
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lsuboymattTop 25 PosterJoin Date: 2008-07-15
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Pretty good...
You just need to add teh Guitar Stuff... |
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Pretty cool.
...Are you sure you didn't use Copypasta? ;D |
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its not my kind of music but its a 7/10 in lyrics |
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...ya know im gonna quit posting my songs on roblox...i should be able to talk to my friends bout my problems not to some people i dont even know that are probably half way across the world...no offense...which thats not really offensive |
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ghdude93Join Date: 2008-11-03
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cool song =D
when i'm trying to make songs i often think out a beat, but i can't make lead or lyrics xD
the most lyrics i make is parodies on other songs xD
my favorite is The Coke Song / I Want it That Way - Backstreet Boys xD |
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