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GolanFusion
#63462669Sunday, February 26, 2012 4:52 AM GMT

Chapter 1: Training to catch food. I was down,hiding and my grey fur was shining. I lept forward and started running for the deer. I my name was Tim,I was the odd one. There was two kinds, wolf's and Foxes. The was the problem,my mum's a fox but I looked like a wolf. No one told me until I realised that. I am young and kind of hyper and excited. There was one problem,I was soft hearted. I was running and out ran the deer. I let the deer go by purpose but acted like I got tired. "Congrats Tim,you did good but try to get better" said Zak. Zak was my teacher,he was nice and funny. He was usaul red coloured fur. "Ha,I know your better then that but your off" he said laughing. "Bella,your turn." said Mr.Zak She found a deer,she quickly crawled forward. Bella was my sister. Bella and I annoy each other and play around. She was a better fox then me. She lept and ran for the deer. She ran and bit the deer leg,the deer fell. She took a big bite and the body and then she let the deer free. "Great,Bella you always make me proud."Mr Zak said.
super142
#63474269Sunday, February 26, 2012 1:38 PM GMT

good stuff

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