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Misterio587
#63773749Saturday, March 03, 2012 10:04 PM GMT

THE WAR HAS BEEN WON, BUT THE BATTLE CONTINUES. Anna was an average girl born not long after a 100 year war was fought. Later a mysterious man pops up at her door and tell her that time has to be fixed. Her life gets more complicated as soon her every move could destroy this world.
ScaryZombie
#63776638Saturday, March 03, 2012 11:00 PM GMT

No. Terrible plot.
dralion
#63777137Saturday, March 03, 2012 11:10 PM GMT

@scary, I don't see you putting out any stories.
Misterio587
#63847641Monday, March 05, 2012 12:55 AM GMT

@Scary, ITS NOT A STORY! ITS A BLURB! YOU IDIOT!
NilPirate
#63848543Monday, March 05, 2012 1:09 AM GMT

You don't need to write a story to know if a story is horrible or not. The arts are not about formulas and rules and laws, those are only guidelines. In the end, the arts are good if the sound/look good, no way else. He also never indicated it was a story. He said "plot", which means this is the overall action of the narrative. Your writing quality is irrelevant; the plot sucks.
MCAdo
#63849890Monday, March 05, 2012 1:31 AM GMT

I'd say experiment with the story, don't stick with some formulaic plot. "Make it new"
ScaryZombie
#63851440Monday, March 05, 2012 1:52 AM GMT

Oopsie, I thought it was a plot. Sorry.
Misterio587
#63923374Tuesday, March 06, 2012 9:00 PM GMT

@MCA I based it off of an idea for a story I had. TMI. Tis My Idea!
MCAdo
#63931974Tuesday, March 06, 2012 11:12 PM GMT

Well, just experiment with it, change it, make it strange, add surreal undertones, anything to make it un-bland.
Tyrannosaurus23
#63956572Wednesday, March 07, 2012 12:47 PM GMT

No
ScaryZombie
#64000521Thursday, March 08, 2012 3:38 PM GMT

@dralion "I don't see you putting out any stories." I don't put out stories, and I'm not interested in putting some out. Don't ever accuse me of putting out a story.

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