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Tyrotrus
#65018477Monday, March 26, 2012 11:04 PM GMT

This is the story of VAK's fall: "Left, Right, Left, Right, Left, Right!" shouted the trainer aboard the Endurance. The Endurance was the pride of the Resistance fleet. The Resistance (VAK Resistance, or VR) was an organization to destroy the Vaktovian Empire, the self-proclaimed "Helghast of ROBLOX." Vaktovia was capturing war groups left and right, so VR was formed to stop them. VR was made up from four types of soldiers: 1. The VR's army was the main force behind the Resistance. Its soldiers were armed with M82 assault rifles and Combat knives. 2. The Resistance's Airforce made up of highly trained pilots flying the new Crypt fighters and Endeavour bombers. They were also trained to fly Vaktovian gunships and ATACs. Stats: Crypt Fighter: 2 Double Laser Cannon 4 Bombs Endeavour Bomber: 8 Laser MGs 5000 Bombs (500 lb.) 4 Laser Cannon 3. Next were the Resistance Urban Assault Force (RUAF). The RUAF's job was to fight on the streets and inside Vyyrahk City's buildings. They were armed with stolen StA-11 LMGs and Tactical knives. 4. Finally, there were the Resistance's SEAL Division. These soldiers have insane combat skills and are to be used for the final assault inside the Palace. Some are armed with stolen StA-62s, but most prefer StA-11Rs, a modified StA-11 with more power and a magazine 1.5 times the normal size. The story's hero, Capt. Tyrotrus M. Yuvlan, is a SEAL. Capt. Tyrotrus, Gen. Cryptanite, Gen. Robert Tob, and Capt. Glutamate, all SEALs, walked into their dropship. Tob took the controls of the ship. Tyrotrus started biting his nails worriedly. Sure, he had helped with the assassination of Gen. Mario Metrac, and he had personally executed Vaktovian engineer Juggylocko, but this time he was to assassinate the Vaktovian emperor, the great Emperor Vaktus. "C'mon Tyro, we don't have all day," Glutamate said to him. Tyrotrus jumped from the gunship. Artillery exploded all around him. Many fell, but the VR kept pushing further. Tyrotrus' first kill came quickly. A VAC (Vaktovian Army Corps) Soldier started firing at him with his StA-3 LMG. Tyrotrus dashed behind a building and shot the soldier dead. 'That was easy,' Tyrotrus thought, but he knew that it would be a lot more difficult inside the palace. The team ran on until an ATAC beared upon them. Firing rockets, it chased them to a park. Climbing a tree, Cryptanite fired a rocket at the ATAC, destroying it at once. Having lost their way, they searched for the palace. However, they came upon a squad of Vaktovian soldiers. Ducking behind a bench, they fired upon the Vaktovians. Normally, a ROBLOXian would run from gunfire. But Vaktovians have been trained not to run from a fight. They are fiercely patriotic like the Helghast and will never EVER surrender. But Vaktovians are no match for VR SEALs. Approaching the palace, they met Vaktovian Gen. Horus Korvak. "Looks like we have some visitors," he said mockingly. Pulling out his StA-18 pistol, he shot another VR soldier that had made it to the gates of Vaktus' palace. The soldier died immediately. Out of rage, Tob pulled out his StA-62 minigun and shredded Korvak to pieces. After that onslaught, the group used grappling hooks to get over the palace wall. However, Vaktovian marksmen (snipers) injured Tyrotrus. Not waiting to recover, he ran to the door of the palace and broke it down. After the team got inside, Glutamate attached a C4 bomb to the doorway and blew it down, causing a barricade. Safe, or rather not so safe, inside, they continued their quest for Vaktus. Upon entering the palace, they met Gen. Sage Alcatraz and the Vaktovian Royal Guard. Sage, armed with an StA-62, fired upon the team, killing Glutamate. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Tob screamed. In a rage he leaped out and stabbed Sage, accidentaly impaling himself upon his own blade. His anger got the best of him. He and Cryptanite killed the rest of the royal guard and got to Vaktus' throne room. Upon entry, they saw Vaktus all alone, smiling. "I am surprised you had gotten past my guard," he said as he put on his helmet. Pulling out an StA-2 pistol. he shot Cryptanite in the stomach. Doubling over in pain, Cryptanite gasped out, "Avenge me and your comrades..." Then, falling over, Cryptanite died. Tyrotrus pulled out a Vaktovian longsword he stole when he killed Juggylocko. "So you think you can kill me, little boy? Vaktus sneered. He lunged at Tyrotrus, but he ducked just in time. "DO NOT CALL ME A LITTLE BOY!!!" Tyrotrus screamed, "I AM MORE OF A MAN THAN YOU WILL EVER BE!!!" Laughing Vaktus lunged at Tyrotrus again, but missed. Now Vaktus was getting irritated. "Let me kill you so you can join your friends," he said. That was the straw that broke the camels back. "DIE YOU LITTLE PIECE OF SCUM!!!" Tyrotrus screamed. He lunged at Vaktus with so much force that Vaktus' blade broke. Vaktus made a run for the door, but he tripped. "Please, have mercy on me..." he begged. But it was voer for him. Tyrotrus killed Vaktus on that fateful day in Vaktus' palace.
Tyrotrus
#65019770Monday, March 26, 2012 11:21 PM GMT

Surprised that there are no replies. Hater count must be low today.
Imperiumz
#65019893Monday, March 26, 2012 11:23 PM GMT

i call your bluff, and raise you a grueling war. THE ASIAN HAS SPOKEN!
GeneralKai
#65020050Monday, March 26, 2012 11:25 PM GMT

The haters will come. Give them some time.
PieGuy305
#65020062Monday, March 26, 2012 11:25 PM GMT

Bad Grammar, used"Upon entering" too much, and you used cap locks to represent shouts. Exclaimation Points are sufficient. Too many paragraphs. Also, do not use Actual ROBLOX names. Instead of "Cryptanite," say "Crypt." Poorly written, little voice, no flow, lots of chiches. C-
dention1
#65020127Monday, March 26, 2012 11:26 PM GMT

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Imperiumz
#65020144Monday, March 26, 2012 11:26 PM GMT

pie, i never knew you forumed. :o
burgerking13
#65020194Monday, March 26, 2012 11:27 PM GMT

Vaktus would have his Royal Guards with him so it would be hard to even touch him.
ToberDam
#65020218Monday, March 26, 2012 11:27 PM GMT

Cliche.
bramblepath2
#65020500Monday, March 26, 2012 11:31 PM GMT

Ummmmmmmm........ Not trying to flame or anything but eh, doesn't seem very realistic to me. I don't think either side would have killed eachother that quickly or have won that easily. If for whatever reason both sides were at war, it would problaey have taken time to get to the final battle. That, and I personally don't think you should have let yourself kill Vaktus. It would most likely wouldn't have came to the point where a single person would get to become a commando and be able to do that. Onless you have some sort of extreme swordfighting skills, you probaley would have been wounded before you got there. Again, I'm just giving you advice, as I enjoy reading clan stories. Not taking the Vakkies' side, I just think that it seems unrealistic to be able to do all those things without much trouble.
Tyrotrus
#65021068Monday, March 26, 2012 11:39 PM GMT

@Pie- Get a life. >:O At least I can write a better story than you. @Bramble- It isn't based on real skillz. It is just an account of a fictious raid on Vaktus' palace. And yes, it is quite unrealistic. I read that it took 25 swordsmen, after dying several times, to finally kill Vaktus. Oh yeah a final note on the raid: After exiting the throne room, Tyrotrus collapsed due to the wound caused by the VC-32 shot. A few minutes later, he lay dead upon the throne room floor. The Vaktovian Resistance mourned the deaths of their comrades, but they knew that Vaktovia will fall due to Vaktus' death. However, they will have to face a new enemy: then-Gen. Dologan has been made Vaktovian Emperor/Autarch and is waiting for his revenge.
Tyrotrus
#65021185Monday, March 26, 2012 11:41 PM GMT

I only use Upon entering once and Upon entry once. Maybe you should repeat preschool so you could COUNT.
Tyrotrus
#65021253Monday, March 26, 2012 11:42 PM GMT

@Imper- What do mean "raised a grueling war?" Do you think VAK will try to destroy whatever group I am in?
aaronmadison
#65021539Monday, March 26, 2012 11:46 PM GMT

This is false one doesn't simply beast the Vaktovian empire.
Tyrotrus
#65022551Monday, March 26, 2012 11:57 PM GMT

Don't complain to me. >.> I see too many Vakkies leaving VAK.
Robo104
#65022606Monday, March 26, 2012 11:58 PM GMT

Give up kid, you're only making yourself look bad now.
Tyrotrus
#65023727Tuesday, March 27, 2012 12:13 AM GMT

orly?
Ninjakutsueki
#65292330Sunday, April 01, 2012 1:00 AM GMT

The story is not bad. It is alittle, drastic that you kill such major Vaktovian characters, especially since they're still active. It makes your story... rather rubbish. Saying thing thing about Metrac, although it hurts to say. You could say that because he is no longer in the group. For your next story, you should talk about things that much more realistic, like not using such major Vaktovians as characters.
BowMaster9
#65292488Sunday, April 01, 2012 1:02 AM GMT

oh goody another "i kil vak i kil vaktus lololol we win vak r n0bz" morwin4me
Artlens5
#65292829Sunday, April 01, 2012 1:07 AM GMT

I give is a 5/10.
z3ppelin
#65292924Sunday, April 01, 2012 1:08 AM GMT

okay. -RCP Marshal, RAT Coordinator-
Tyrotrus
#66022205Tuesday, April 10, 2012 9:55 PM GMT

Has anyone realized that I made this to be firewood? Firewood=Flamer bait. Trolololololololololololololololololo...
SirBackspace
#66022359Tuesday, April 10, 2012 9:57 PM GMT

I assume that this is a VAk story, so I'm not Going to read it
Tyrotrus
#66022455Tuesday, April 10, 2012 9:58 PM GMT

Yeah Most VAK stories, like this one, are a bunch of worthless craaaaaaap.
Armanos
#66022512Tuesday, April 10, 2012 9:59 PM GMT

i care.

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