Rate my building!

Join Date: 2011-09-03
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#76421396Friday, August 24, 2012 12:13 AM GMT

http://www.roblox.com/Small-Building-Showcase-place?id=60984325 I built everything there, but the trees were made by that one tree generating plugin except for one that I built. I also modified the plugin a bit to give me the trees I wanted. Thank you.

Wrought_Bloxon

Join Date: 2011-08-06
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#76427136Friday, August 24, 2012 1:11 AM GMT

Not much to rate. It's just a shell. You can't even go inside ,the doors don't open. The scale could be decreased somewhat , as the doors are way to tall for the man. It's a nice looking building , but without an interior it is just a box. 5/10 for looks , put something inside and change the scale for a better rating.

ultralegomaster5096

Join Date: 2011-01-17
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#76429227Friday, August 24, 2012 1:32 AM GMT

I'd say nicely done. 7.5/10, it's interesting. I like the stove/furnace :P

Aotrou

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#76430394Friday, August 24, 2012 1:42 AM GMT

I liked the furnace, the rest could be better. Consider making the tent more detailed (more wooden supports, outter wires, mats on the ground, etc), and I think the other scaffold-looking thing could have more detail as well. Hmm... 3/10 for an advanced builder, 6/10 for an average builder.

Wrought_Bloxon

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#76433178Friday, August 24, 2012 2:10 AM GMT

Sorry , this comment belongs in another thread asking the same question. I will look at your place soon. Although if ninjasheep and ultra liked it I'm sure i do.

Wrought_Bloxon

Join Date: 2011-08-06
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#76435821Friday, August 24, 2012 2:37 AM GMT

Well I will be expecting more from you. You show signs that you can build ,using angles to offset things , but nothing seems perportionate(?spelling), doesn't fit the scale of the man. Likewise I like the stove , I think everything here if shrunk by half in a mini script would look better. The fallen down shack should have the planks on the floor in line with the gaps on the roof. slightly angle them down into the ground so it looks like broken boards. Unless you where trying for pallets on sticks then it looks great. I liked the trees , they have a scary appeal to them. I'll give a 6/10 , but only because of the stove. You could do better with the terrain , or best not use it at all. Look up terrain generation in the roblox wiki. They have scripts to make some beautiful terrain . If you use the voxel terrain you are limited to 2k studs size.

8Ovechkin

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#76437364Friday, August 24, 2012 2:52 AM GMT

Well I think that this is pretty good if it's your first stab at building a showcase. A suggestion though would be to ditch the terrain and make your own using bricks and CFrame. The stove and angles of all the objects (beds in the tent for one) were very nice. The tree's are sort of iffy. Overall I believe that you have building talent and get a......6.5/10

awsumpwner27

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#76438584Friday, August 24, 2012 3:06 AM GMT

Thanks guys, your comments are a big help. I'll look to make some improvements.

ryan3859

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#76460672Friday, August 24, 2012 1:07 PM GMT

6/10

Joinjoe

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#76462756Friday, August 24, 2012 1:54 PM GMT

I like the map, first impression was good, you can enter the tent. I can see your map has a lot of potential.