ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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Hello! Sorry, I would have posted something much earlier, but something in the filter wouldn't let me and so I'm posting now. =3
What happened? - You stop at the waters edge, and as you slowly lap up the liquid, a dark shape rolls down into the darker parts of the sundrown place.
You follow it, surprised that a rip tide is pulling you downward, not out into the sundrown place. Thrashing, you manage to swim, yet you are still being pulled downward.
Feeling something odd on your side, you open your eyes surprised to see gills. Your paws are now webbed, and your tail, a fin. Landing softly in the darkness, your eyes adjust, and a rather pretty she-cat steps forward.
She dips her head. "Welcome to AbyssClan. I am Softstar."
Rules -
1. Mates are not allowed. I would allow them, but roblox doesn't like anything to do with things like that, even if it's just RP.
2. Please, RP yourself and no one else. Unless that person gives you permission, do not do it. Ok?
3. There are certain disasters you can RP. These are: Rip tides, underwater carnivores (where ThunderClan has foxes and badgers, we have Bluntnose sixgill sharks and Goblin sharks) and water spouts that go down deep enough to stir up the water.
4. Have fun!
Cats -
Leader - Softstar (Siamese with cream and a dark brown head, chest, paws and tail tip)
Deputy - ? (Please do not ask, I pick myself)
Medicine Cat - ?
Medicine Apprentice - ?
Warriors - ?
Queens - ?
Kits - ?
Elders - ?
Joining form - Please fill this out upon joining:
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RP Name -
Breed/coat/appearance -
Gender -
eye color -
Why join? -
In case of confusion, I'll fill one out myself:
SN - ditto9267
RP Name - Softstar
Breed/coat/appearance - Siamese with dark brown paws, tail tip, chest, and head
Gender - She-cat
eye color - Dark Blue
Why join? - I made it up
Oh, one last thing...
If you don't read the books, don't join! You'll just ruin it. |
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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Oh, and I won't start the RP unless a few other people join. OK? |
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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Awkward silence... |
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fireturnJoin Date: 2008-08-30
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Well at least it's not a completly generic warrior cats thread... |
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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I tried to make it different so it stood out. |
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fireturnJoin Date: 2008-08-30
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It does stand out, but unforetunatly the warrior cats RP is saturated... I admire your creativity though this has potential, I am wondering if there is some underlying story involved though... |
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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What do you mean? |
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This is pretty intresting...completely not what I was expecting when I clicked on it. I may consider joining. :3 |
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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Ok, thanks I didn't think anyone was going to join actually. |
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fireturnJoin Date: 2008-08-30
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Well we've got this good prologue of a cat turning into a cat of abyssclan and meeting Softstar. But from what i can see there's nothing after that, it just turns into make it up as you go along. Don't take this the wrong way I'm only trying to help but it feels like there's no direction or goal. In warrior cats there's always a peril and a goal to accomplish, this kind of feels like the bit inbetween the books where the cats just do random stuff that doesn't effect their lives... I may be wrong and again don't take this the wrong way you've clearly worked on this but there needs to be some sort of path for the characters to follow, you know? Does this make sense? |
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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Yeah, and I guess you're right. But I made this up two years ago, before I joined roblox and I posted this on the warrior cats message board. But some rude person banned me for something that she took the wrong way. I actually forgot about it until a week ago :/ |
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fireturnJoin Date: 2008-08-30
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Heh, well, yeah that was rude of him/her. It's good for two years ago I guess but yeah, story. I can help if you like or you could go away and write a story into this and repost (if so then make sure to invite me!), or you could make it up as you go along, If you choose the latter I'll join, seems like a fun ride either way. |
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I'll give it a try..perhaps we can still Rp if I'm the only one who joins? xD Like a one-on-one.
SN - Breezepetal
RP Name - Silvertear
Breed/coat/appearance - Breed: American Shadded Silver Cat; Coat: Silvertear is all white with bright silver on her back and tail tip. She has Bright Green eyes, and a pink nose. She has a black ring around her nose, and a dash of silver on her forehead. (I May post a picture of her breed later...)
Gender - Female
eye color - Deep Green
Why join? - This RP seems interesting, and different from the other Warrior Cat Rps. I love warrior Cats, so why not join? :3
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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Yeah, maybe I will re-type it, but I don't really know what to change... I'll have to think about it. |
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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Ok! Thanks for joining! And a picture would be great! |
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Awesome, cant wait to begin RP! :P Anyways, I'll go find a picture on the internet and upload it as a decal. xD I may have to go for a bit, but I should be back soon. C: |
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fireturnJoin Date: 2008-08-30
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SN - Fireturn
RP Name - Greyfur
Breed/coat/appearance - Breed: Persian, grey fur coat, sleek and slender with jet black forelimbs and paws
Gender - Male
eye color - Blue
Why join? - I'm interested to see where this will go.
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ditto9267Join Date: 2011-12-04
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(Sure! Sorry I got busy yesterday) |
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(Mkay cool, I wanna start off as a loner if thats okay. :P)
~Silvertear~
Silver walked out of her cave where she had been living. She blinked, and looked at the water. She loved living on the shore. She scratched at her old collar, the one she had from the two-legs, when they had owned her. She smiled slightly, and padded down to the ocean's bank. Carefully she dipped her paws in the water. |
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fireturnJoin Date: 2008-08-30
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(good to know)
Greyfur awoke from his nightmare with a start. There had been sharks everywhere in his dream but now only the faint light from the den mouth and the soft swirles of the water were to be seen. It seemed as if he'd overslept again and he was probably needed for patrol. He picked himself up and swam to the cave entrance. |
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loppolhJoin Date: 2010-01-26
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You, you need to go back to mugging people. Or atleast use your knife you chav. |
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QuilboarJoin Date: 2010-05-17
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