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post your lyrics and i'll rate them! thats how it goes. |
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Guitar Introduction (Machine Head Style Intro)
vocals (Howard Jones Style)
Metal, Will Live For Ever,
So Do Not Say Good Bye (said so it is stretched out),
As It Will Never Leave (screamed),
Heavy guitar part
vocals again
Metal has tried to be, destroyed (said so it is stretched out),
By all the rubbish genres (screamed),
Disco, hip hop, r and b and even hardcore punk,
But they failed just like new genres in the future will,
drums heavy part
Metal will live forever (screamed),
Do not try to defeat it (screamed),
Or you will fail,
Left alone,
and forgotten (screamed),
Extreme heavy guitar, drums and bass
You will fail if you challenge metal,
It will live forever,
you may hate it (screamed),
BUT WE DO NOT CARE (extremely screamed),
We do not care (screamed) if you hate the screamed vocals,
We do not care (screamed) if you hate the heavy drums,
We do not care (screamed) if you hate the deafening guitar,
We do not care (screamed) if you hate the stage diving,
We do not care (screamed) if you hate the crowd surfing,
We do not care (screamed) if you hate the moshing,
If you hate metal
We do not care(screamed)
Repeat from start but more drums in intro.
Then at end As it goes down the vocals go we do not care about you none metal fans (this is repeated and goes lower with the guitar machine head style to silence) But for a concert it suddenly stops and the vocals go we do not care (said screamed as the guitar, drum and bass do one long big heavy note).
Thats my song rate it...
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1,000,000,000/10.AWESOME!!!! |
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larry5444Join Date: 2007-12-14
Post Count: 12624 |
When the streetlights
Come on the pooling night
Is levied aside
And pressed in twilight
Against our two rooms
I'll see you tonight
The pavement is aching
Cicadas are crying
The wine colored air
Breathing thoughts
Through your hair
Breezing to me
Leading me there
I come alive
As the shadows parade
My hot summer blood
Comes and floods and it waves
Curbside confessions
No longer afraid
Of what you'll say
And I find you
Twilit beyond all the cars
The driveways they sleep
But streetlights will keep
Watch over me
They flicker like stars
And now all the secrets
Carefully kept inside
Run the streets rad
Our chemicals spread
Washing us through
Making you mine
I come alive
As the shadows parade
My hot summer blood
Comes and floods and it waves
Curbside confessions
No longer afraid
Of what you'll say
Now there no words
Only the glow in our wires
And so we will be
You turn slow to me
Our lips at the sun
The hills are on fire
Oh
I come alive
As the shadows parade
My hot summer blood
Comes and floods and it waves
Curbside confessions
No longer afraid
Of what you'll say
Of what you'll say
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abexJoin Date: 2008-11-28
Post Count: 69 |
Abduction is the way I start my day.
Finally all my planning has paid off.
Eager to dismember.
Your skin so sweet and tender.
Strapped to the chair.
Degrading you right to your face.
Gagged.
Puking all over the place.
It's time to finally shut you up.
Stabbing you viciously.
Watching your face was priceless.
Blood Splattered Satisfaction.
I dealt you away (repeat)
Good - Now your times up.
Preparation has paid off by - Never quitting.
Disposing of your body was a pleasure.
No one will ever find you.
I'm sure they will look hard - but only I know you're in my backyard |
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JAXONCJoin Date: 2008-10-01
Post Count: 1441 |
Here's mine:
(Screaming for 10 minutes)
What do you think? |
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awesome i think it goes under metalcore lol |
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for people who do not know it has more screaming vocals and i like that |
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JAXONCJoin Date: 2008-10-01
Post Count: 1441 |
Lolz. |
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cupcake74Join Date: 2007-12-28
Post Count: 30 |
*screaming for 6 hours* OMG I SHOULD MAKE A RECORD! or maybe join SLIPKNOT |
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omg soccer guy u and a lot of other people don't even know what they're talkin' about when they say "metal is worthless screaming" or sumthin' like that. but that is only death metal when they scream. so you've only heard death metal. listen to heavy metal, thrash metal, christian metal, speed metal, etc. all that type of metal isn't screaming u idiot. but anyways here's my song. it's motorbreath by metallica(which is thrash metal).
Living and dying laughing and crying
Once you have seen it you will never be the same
Life in the fast lane is just how it seems
Hard and it is heavy dirty and mean
Motorbreath
Its how I live my life
I can't take it any other way
Motorbreath
The sign of living fast
It is going to take
Your breath away
Don't stop for nothing its full speed or nothing
I am taking down you know whatever is in my way
Getting your kicks as you are shooting the line
Sending the shivers up and down my spine
Motorbreath
Its how I live my life
I can't take it any other way
Motorbreath
The sign of living fast
It is going to take
Your breath away
Those people who tell you not to take chances
They are all missing on what life is about
You only live once so take hold of the chance
Don't end up like others the same song and dance
Motorbreath
Its how I live my life
I can't take it any other way
Motorbreath
The sign of living fast
It is going to take
Your breath away |
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great song and its not just death metal which screams as theres killswitch engage who are metalcore, roadrunner united who are loads, machine head who are thrash and groove metal, do your research. |
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sorry skittledude my sis typed that 1,000,000/10 |
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simba7032Join Date: 2008-07-31
Post Count: 373 |
A real song about my band firing me.
simba7032 - Distant Sirens
*Metal guitar intro*
ROOAAAAAAHAHHHH!!!!!!!! YEAHH!!!!
WOAAHHHRROOO!!!
GOD!!!
Verse 1:
*Mellow guitar*
I sit alone
In my room
With nothing...
to do.
*Metal guitar*
Well I think someone
Better move
Ima bout to injure...
two people!!!!
Mellow Chorus:
Because I hear distant sirens
in the back of my mind!
Sounds like an ambulance,
better move, watch out before I punch ya!!!
*Metal guitar*
Verse 2:
*Metal guitar continues*
As you see
I am violent
but somebody deserves it!
As you see
I am ang-ree
'Cuz somebody here deserves it!
Metal Chorus:
Because I hear some distant sirens in the back of my mind!
Sounds like an ambulance, better move,
my arm is swinging uncontrollably!!!
*guitar solo*
Bridge:
I'll take out the trash!
When I see 'em I'll
take out the trash!
NOW!!!!
I'll take out the trash!
When I spot 'em
I'll take out the trash....
RAHH!!!! *15 second scream while guitar solo resumes*
Chorus:
Because I hear some distant sirens in the back of my mind!
Sounds like an ambulance, better move,
my arm is swinging uncontrollably!!!
Better move, my arm is not in my control
Better watch out, a flying knife!!!!
*Guitar note ends the song* |
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raegirl1Join Date: 2008-12-18
Post Count: 1745 |
*15 second screaming* RAAAHHH die noob! xD |
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