ImGraphicJoin Date: 2012-08-07
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Here for you entertainment and get my story straight.
After reading this let yall decide my fate.
Might be gone after this no need for good bye's.
Just forgive me for my troubles forgive me for my lies.
All i wanted was to shake the game up, read my raps leave you in tears.
Dreams of being in the top is anywhere but near.
I got newcomers want to nominate me as the worse man thats hurtful.
Even though they havent brought a crum to the table.
This is about coming clean and relieve my stress.
Dont make it a big deal and leave it for the press.
First things first im not black, im an Asian, take it however you want.
People going to call me names and want to front.
Sure call me blind, call me mr.Chong yea i eat alot of rice.
Dont even do it if it aint in a rhyme.
Tell me straight up no front.
Judge me however you want.
All of us are different, dont need to admit
Look at yourselves in your bathroom mirror, bet half of you cant even see it.
Just one of two issues im facin.
Truth is the truth hurts just sayin
Aint here for the money or fame.
The truth isnt a knife so just man up and take the pain.
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DeviatedJoin Date: 2012-06-18
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more metal than your ma's kettle |
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Graphic, none of us can have you leave. You got signed for a reason. Keep rappin
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THATS DOPE AS EVER ME SHOULD COLAB |
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Truth Hurts Dosnt It Bobbeh? |
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lila47Join Date: 2011-12-07
Post Count: 682 |
Copied |
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Jared343Join Date: 2009-03-02
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5/10. |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
Post Count: 1925 |
^ Soon as you give me evidence it's copied then I'll believe you <_< |
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altar30Join Date: 2010-11-26
Post Count: 1925 |
My post was at lila invade you were too stupid to catch that :P |
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Will_RizeJoin Date: 2008-04-05
Post Count: 80 |
Nice rap. But here's advice.. When you rap make sure it doesn't sound all over the place and simple. Maybe increase your use of higher grammar ability & wordplay. It was nice but I got bored with it so easily. So all in all 5/10. Make sure you rap about what people can relate too & anything the audience would like to hear. I just thought this was not put together properly. Good talent I see, but take it to a higher level my dude. |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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Little downs, conspiracy theorists. |
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Hurtful, and table don't rhyme. Neither do rice and rhyme. It was kinda bland. I see a big future, and lots of talent, that's why I know you can take your music to another level. I am a rapper myself, I've made many songs. Mine are always getting bad reviews. You did awesome other than those not rhyming words. |
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Will_RizeJoin Date: 2008-04-05
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Its not always about the rhyming @paris. Its more about if the song makes sense. But I judge songs at all aspects, maybe your judging is different. |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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Neither do rice and rhyme.
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Rice and rhyme rhyme with each other. Can you not discern the phonetic similarity between the "i" in both words? |
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They don't, actually. And saint, this song did make sense to me. I was just telling him he needed to rhyme his words together a bit better. That's why I said that he did amazing otherwise. And just because they both start with r and they have the I sound, does not necesserally mean they rhyme. Rhyming usually means that two words have a similar ending. These didn't, they don't rhyme. |
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Part 1... TWILIGHT ALL OVER AGAIN. |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
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They don't, actually.
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There are many different kinds of rhymes. "Rice" and "rhyme" rhyme in that they make the same "i" vowel sound. |
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link6249Join Date: 2011-01-06
Post Count: 2671 |
ro-rappers
y u no leave mt |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21
Post Count: 24998 |
Big ups for knowing about rhymes John.
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Hey, I'm a rhyming masta. Bug ups, John B: Numba 1 Rhymer |
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