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(K! What is the plan with Vio and Nia?)
Nia
I sling my bag over my shoulder and teleport to Teriana.
"Cool.' I mutter as I start walking forward. |
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(GERP.... WON'T BE ON FOR THE REST OF THE DAY! BYE!) |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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(What do you mean?)
Vio
I see someone else teleport here. I scream with excitement. |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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(Aw, bye..) |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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(8, you gonna post?) |
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vamking12Join Date: 2010-05-08
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CS:
N.ame: Gregory Chandra
A.ge:16
Ge.nder:Male
Grade average:B and Cs
Appearance:This olive skinned guy is 6' 0", has very short, grey hair, brown eyes and a slender build. He has a distinctive bruise on his upper back.
Personality:Strong, Paranoid , Mature Quiet
Powers: super speed Shapeshifter telekinesis turn invisible
Talents:acrobat piano can speak
Bio:tbr
Other:Lime Loving Llama |
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You need better grammar, your CS is undescriptive. I doubt you will get accepted. |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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Yeah.. He's right..
I'm bored so I'm doing homework I don't need to do. |
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(What did I do wrong with my CS, aren't you suppose to say whats wrong Fox with my CS?) |
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N.ame:Dextro Plutonium.
A.ge:10.
Ge.nder:M@le.
Grade average:Mostly As but Bs on math.
Appearance:Rough dark brown hair, white skin, silverish eyes, red t-shirt saying I am not stupid he is <-, blue jeans, 6' 4, a cap saying SHUT UP!, Skinny and white teeth.
Personality: Nice, quiet and easily annoyed.
Powers:Technokinesis(The ability to control technology.), the ability to travel through it and the ability to talk to it.
Talents:Dancing but is afraid of doing it in public, great inventor and a good gamer.
Bio:He was diagnosed for asperger syndrome and hates it. He used to live in New York then he moved to Australia. He hates getting dirty and washes frequently and he likes to suck batteries they seem to make him energetic. He made a robot at the age of four and has loved it ever since.
Other:"Lime Loving Llama." |
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(My guess would be the lack of description of what you mean by 'travel though technology'. As well as his @ge, I think 10 is a LITTLE young, I mean if the characters were going to be that young then the Limited Romance rule would sorta be wasted right? The appearance should be elaborated, as well as the personality.)
CS:
Name: Selene Sparks
A.ge: 16
Gender: Female
Grade average: A to B+
Appearance: She has naturally straight black hair with a blue streak in it that goes all the way down to her hips. Her eyes are a dark brown, almost black color. Her skin is tanned and she has a tatoo across her left arm and shoulder of a blue dragon breathing ice blue fire. She wears shirts with the sleeves cut off to display her tatoo and breeches. Her clothes are always neutral colors such as black, grey, white, and tan. She almost always wears makeup, blue and black eye shadow, mascara, and bright red lipstick.
Personality: Despite her almost gothic appearance she is really fun-loving and cheerful most of the times, but when aggitated she'll insult you enough to make the average person burst into tears. She'll say random things at random times when she feels neglected and wants a bit of attention. She's really insecure on the inside, but presents a tough face to hide it.
Powers: She can create and control small amounts of fire, just about the size of an apple. She is able to communicate with animals as well.
Talents: She can dance, though she doesn't really achknowledge it. She can also sing pretty good, depending on the song.
Bio: As a kid she used to test out her powers, and ended up accidentally burning down her home with her parents inside. She was then moved to a foster home, her foster parents were really disconnected and basically allowed her free rein. However she wanted them to pay more attention to her, thus she began having weird and random outbursts in attempt to get their attention. She tries to get good grades to impress them, but it doesn't work. She's basically given up trying to get their attention, but old habits die hard so she still has outburst and tries to get good grades. As an act of rebellion, which was subconciously trying to get her foster parents' attention, she got a tatoo and bought a Harley.
Other: Lime lLoving Llama |
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(Uh I think by limited romance is no romance. |
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(And travel through technology hint hint means he can travel through computers, wires and other machines.) |
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CS:
N.ame: Tiffany Bellwood
A.ge: 14
Ge.nder: Female
Grade average: B+
Appearance: http://love-fine.info/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/13.jpg
Personality: She is often swimming and wet. Shy and innocent, Tiff is not one to mess with because shy people do shine when annoyed to a level.
Powers: Can control water and adapt to swim under water for a long periods of time
Talents: Music and swimming
Bio: NA
Other: Lime Loving Llama |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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(Both accepted. Blueeyes, since you are so in-control and I reconise you from the Mlp:FiM thread, I'll give you admin.) |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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(You can be that young though - The limited romance part is for older characters) |
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*Smashes face into ground* |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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Is there a problem? |
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kira1132Join Date: 2010-11-27
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(Omg I have no ideas for my character " BRAIN FAILURE!!! *Explodes*) |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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What about a girl.. Hope my idea helps! ^.^ |
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kira1132Join Date: 2010-11-27
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(Still thinking...) |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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Unique names or simple names. I'm reading a story in the internet and it has some unique names. |
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SarhathJoin Date: 2012-03-03
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Aspen
I step out of the car and smile gratefully at my dad, who smiles back and drives off. I sling my bag over my shoulder and look at the huge building. I gulp and walk inside.
( Gtg to church.) |
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tinyhonkJoin Date: 2012-01-03
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D: Poor Shadow! I know he has a think for Dash.. Chapter 3... |
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SarhathJoin Date: 2012-03-03
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How about Allyson? Or Sonya? I can rattle them off if you'd like. :P JK. |
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