rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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Another Day, Another Dream
Taking, my own tiiiiime.
Losing, my own miiiind.
Scaling, these four waaalls.
Killing, evryoooone.
Disturbing, that is meeee.
Stealin, all I neeeed.
Another day another dream.
Taking all the time I need.
Ya, I know I was right.
Just don't leave the house tonight.
Growing, my self-esteem.
Building, the bridge I need.
Burning, all the homes.
Redoing, it all alone.
Sealing, my last words.
Feeling, that thing of hurt
(chorus)
I think I'm right you know I'm wrong pick a side.
I feel the laughs they're building up to explode inside.
My time is up I have to go and do my job.
Starting all the **** that I do at night.
(chorus)
(outro)
Starting my job to do the work.x4
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McKeeverJoin Date: 2008-10-01
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Zilla2112Join Date: 2008-08-29
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Nice job. I can see that as a metalcore song. |
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McKeeverJoin Date: 2008-10-01
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Awsome... just .... awesome! |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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thanks you guys....at first I thought it stunk. |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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What Job? |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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Well here's my new song
Time
I'm all ready.
To be dead.
Stealing all the time in my head.
H**l has broke loose.
Into the town.
People running.
Into the ground.
(chorus)
Time is nothing.
Time is brand-new.
Time is fading.
Time is now through.
Failing all tests.
Beacause I want to.
Calling all shots (never to the end to the end)
The bullet hits you.
The crosshair is aimed.
As the pools of datk fade.
(chorus)
(guitar solo)
(fast drum solo)
(fast part)
Time is now dead.
Time is going.
Time is fading.
Time is growing.
Time is playing.
Time is watching.
time is hurting.
Time is healing.
Just like my heart.
Just like my head.
Just like you're.
I widsh you were dead.
(back to normal tempo chorus and outro)
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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I meant wish |
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JAXONCJoin Date: 2008-10-01
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Good job on both, except their is a Pink Floyd song called time. lol. Good job though. |
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great songs what type of music are they meant to be as my friend above said it would be a great metalcore song
great job |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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Well the first one was like an Ozzy Osbourne thing.
The other was classic rock.
And plus i didn't know there was a song called time.
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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and i also meant dark on that one part. |
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Nice job all the songs are great |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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My sis made this song(Im posting it because I thought it was hilarious)
Milk
Milk is white
Milk is cool
Milk tastes
Try some too!
lol |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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Well I'm gonna give a choice. Which song should I post:
Rock'n'Roll Will Never Die
Break My Heart
On the Go Radio
choose |
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i dont know its your choice not mine |
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Break my heart
oh yeah awesome songs
(Xept the milk thing by your sister Lol) |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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Break my Heart
I hate the pain that you give me.
But I like your smile.
I hate that you don't love me.
But I like your laugh.
I hate your heart and soul.
But it seems you won't grow old.
(chorus)
I've got this feeling.
That you don't like me.
If you don't want me.
Go break my break my heart.
I love your long blonde hair.
I hate your bad attitude.
I love your eyes of blue.
But that's what it makes me feel.
I love your heart and soul.
But it seems you will grow old.
(chorus)
(break)
I love you hate you don't know what to do.
I want you loathe you don't know what to think.
(chorus)
(talking outro{yells this})
Look I just, just...hate you.
You broke my heart.
And I'm **** tired of you.
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Man, your lyrics are excellent. I'm impressed, hope to hear these songs someday. |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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Rock'n'Roll Won't Die(origanlly Rock'n'Roll will never die
(intro chorus)
Well I know, rock'n'roll won't die.
Well I know, I'll never be the guy.
Well I know, rock'n'roll won't die.
Ohh,rock'n'roll won't die unh.
(verse)
So you know, all the lies I said were true.
I don't know, how long I can keep it through.
And so why, do you sit down on my steps?
I don't think, all the bull**** is like this.
(chorus)
(verse 2)
So see why, I'll never see the end yeah.
I know why, the beginning won't amend.
So hear me, out this one more time yeah yeah.
The crying, will now start to begin oh yeah.
(chorus)
(break)
Well looks like we're through.
I know you're suprised too.
But when the wedding bell rings.
And everyone starts to sing.
It's the end.
(guitar solo/outro) |
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exquitsite i would buy that ...... i think |
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rocky713Join Date: 2008-08-03
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On the Go Radio
I'm still wanting this to end.
I'm still feeling every friend.
I want everything new.
I want you and only you.
(speaking) (sings)
let's see here...I want you!
(chorus)
Let's go on the go radio. Hey, hey, hey, hey.
Let's go on the go radio. Ohhhhhhhhh.
I feel nothing in the world.
I feel numbness in my head.
I know girls are not for me.
I know I'm always the wannabe
(chorus)
(break)
I know i'm done.
I' know I'm old.
Nothing out there.
Nothing, nothing in the world!
(guitar solo/outro)
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