IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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Into the Gray
Written by DancingQueen24 (Holly)
Meaning: About a girl who just wants to break away from all the pain.
Verse One
Holly: I just wanna take a break, get away, leave today
Bella: I just wanna cry myself, to sleep, but you’re in my way
Holly: I just wanna go, where the only place I am is called home
Bella: I just wanna fly, fly away, into the gray, into the gray.
Chorus
Holly: I just wanna fly away from here! Leaving sorrow and fear!
Bella: Bring together close and far! Taking what was ours!
Holly: I hate that I seem me-e-ean, but you don’t know oh oh me.
Bella: I didn’t mean to hurt you I guess I didn’t see it
Holly: I hate what happened im glad it’s not completed
Verse Two
Bella: I just wanna run, I wanna run away from the damage ive done
Holly: I want to undo, I wanna undo, the person I’ve come
Bella: I just wanna go, I wanna go so I don’t have to run
Holly: I just wanna fly, fly away, into the gray, into the gray, into the gray
Chorus
Holly: I just wanna fly away from here! Leaving sorrow and fear!
Bella: Bring together close and far! Taking what was ours!
Holly: I hate that I seem me-e-ean, but you don’t know oh oh me.
Bella: I didn’t mean to hurt you I guess I didn’t see it
Bella: I hate what happened im glad it’s not completed
Verse 3
Holly: But again I just want tooo!
Bella: (Fly away from here)
Holly:Far away from near!
Bella: (Leaving sorrow and fear)
Holly: Leaving that sorrow and fear!
Bella: (Bring together close and far)
Holly: Bringing together close and bringing together far!
Bella: (Taking what was ours)
Holly: Taking all that was ours!
AT SAME TIME:
Holly: I hate that I seem me-e-ean
Bella: I didn’t mean to hurt you I guess I didn’t see it
Holly: But you don’t know oh oh me
Holly: I hate what happened and im glad its not completed!
Bella: I wanna get away! And take away the pain!
Holly: I wanna go into the gray, the gray, the gray (oh ho)
Bella:I wanna go into the gray, the gray, the gray (oh ho)
Holly: I wanna go into the gray, the gray, the gray! (oh oh)
Holly: The gray! The gray! The gray!
Bella and Holly: Oh ho ho whoa!
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JubrilMDJoin Date: 2011-03-30
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100/100 |
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TemptionJoin Date: 2012-10-19
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Amazing, Infinaty out of 100 :3 |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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Thank you! We really appreciate it! |
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zoey1337Join Date: 2008-12-09
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Lovely :D |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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Thank you. c: |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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That's okay, you can have your opinion. :) |
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9899000Join Date: 2011-04-22
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Its really good but its kinda sad and dark. DONT BE LIKE BRUNO MARS 99 sad songs 3 happy songs |
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9899000Join Date: 2011-04-22
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I Could get you a gig in a halftime show if you can make a happier song |
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LuluGirlzJoin Date: 2012-09-03
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This made no sense what so ever.. |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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This is our only sad song we wrote. We have happy songs like Light Up The Night and Bubblegum Boi. |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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The song is about a girl that wants to get away from the pain in her life. |
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I love the idea!
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Simon Cowell: *Big X shows* Whoops I pressed wrong button; I am so used to pressing that... Oh and that was brilliant girls. |
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nosaj72Join Date: 2010-01-17
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Oh-Mazing. I wish I could work with you guys. You have talent. ;) |
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I'ts not a good song
It's a great one :) <3 |
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6/10 mainly because I like it's message. |
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A debased, crunkless piece of garbage, take some lessons from the masters |
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It does, have it's like iffy areas, where I don't know you could have used a little bit better word choice in area's, but other than that, it was really good, and I could almost see it turning into a real song. (I was trying to sing it to my self, and noticed there are a few choppy areas where it doesn't flow well) However, it has a very strong message, and I think a lot of people can connect with just wanting to get away, either boy, or girl. I know I can connect with it, with my own problems, so I am pretty sure other people can. So yea, it's not perfect, but it's not bad your not a professional, so is it good for you guys now? Yes, it's excellent, just next time, you need your word's to flow a little better. |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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Lol, in my head it flows, but the bad thing about roblox songs is that you cant hear the rythm of the song, so we all get different beats to it. The chorus is kind of like Katy Perrys song Wide Awake. |
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I guess that makes a little mroe sense, I don't know, I think it would be better if you actually had voices... lol... poor roblox, you can add voice actor's but when it comes to stuff like this.. :/ |
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Use MIDI maybe? I don't know. And you didn't write bubblegum boi..xD |
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OH wait never mind. I was thinking of a different song "bubblegum boy"...derp sorry xD |
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XenicimJoin Date: 2012-02-18
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LOL. Crazygurl that's what I thought. xD Then I was all "Oh, durr."
Anywho I like the song. C: 7/10. Nice message.
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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@Cici. I wrote Into the Gray, and Bubblegum Boi is a mixtape to the song Bubblegum Boy by Bella Thorne and Pia Mia. |
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