IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15 Post Count: 2603 |
Hi guys! I'm DancingQueen24 and this is a song I wrote called "Don't Bring Me Down with Hate"
100% written by me
Enjoy!
[Rap]
Jubril101:
I took the hate and I threw it on the ground,
I can't do this no I can't back down,
You may think you're the cool kid in town,
When clearly you haven't looked around
Ahem aren't you missing something?
Somethin that can't be replaced maybe a little someone
King of Ace I'm almost at home base I can't be brought down,
I hope by now you realised you aren't the coolest kid in town...
[Chorus]
DancingQueen24:
I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate,
People move on and don't stop like a figure 8,
I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate
I won't let anybody bring me down
Bring me down with hate!
[Rap]
Jubril101:
You say you're hotter than the sun, I'll make an exception
You're mind is more confusing than an inception
Glass half full? More like glass half empty
Make me mad? Oh God don't tempt me
Only going up no not going down
"I go down I take you with me" No, not this time around
I'm not sticking up and I'm not sitting down
Only here to get my crown
Nothing greater, and nothing less
I hope by now you just confess
That all you do is hate hate hate
And that you're the King of Jacka** and I'm the Queen of Ace!
#peace
[Chorus]
I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate!
People move on and don't stop like a figure 8!
I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate!
I won't let anybody bring me down
Bring me down with hate!
[Rap]
Last laugh, Last laugh
Looking through your bad tracks
Playing back the back-stabs
Good one, clap clap
You really think that hurt?
You really thought I was that weak?
Really though I was some kind of freak?
Well just so you know, you might've won this round
I hope you sing along while you hear it through the stero cleaning the McDonalds' ground
[Chorus]
I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate!
People move on and don't stop like a figure 8!
I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate!
I won't let anybody bring me down
Bring me down with hate!
[Bridge]
So don't give up, don't give up your crown
Don't let people hurt you or bring you down
And don't sacrifice mistakes or fill yourself with hate
Because in the end who will be the last one laughing?
The last one laughing...
Oh the last one laugh-ing
The last one laughing yeah..
[Chorus]
I've been burned to the ground and struck down with hate!
People move on and don't stop like a figure 8!
I'm making the right moves like in chess, oh checkmate!
I'm not letting anybody bring me down
Bring me down with hate!
Oh no don't bring me down!
No bring me down with hate!
With hate, with hate, with hate
Oh don't bring me down with hate! |
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JubrilMDJoin Date: 2011-03-30 Post Count: 789 |
Please comment! Give your honest opinionsss! |
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nosaj72Join Date: 2010-01-17 Post Count: 16 |
I think it's really cool...this is the first song that Jub raps in, right? |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15 Post Count: 2603 |
Yeah. |
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JubrilMDJoin Date: 2011-03-30 Post Count: 789 |
;p I've sang in other songs too |
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You should record you singing this then post it on youtube and post the link here cause i realy wana here this. |
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johnbJoin Date: 2007-11-21 Post Count: 24998 |
Let's burn her on the cross |
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I think it might be good, but like troll said, I'd need to hear it. It looks like decent enough lyrics, but I'd have to hear it to really tell if it's good or a bust.
Overall, decent. 7/10. |
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lily17777Join Date: 2008-01-04 Post Count: 2049 |
johnb
*Grabs match*
*Nods head* |
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It wasn't that bad. I've seen THAT bad. This is ok. |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15 Post Count: 2603 |
Thanks guys! I can't sing it right now but I will soon! |
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ZarikelJoin Date: 2012-06-10 Post Count: 81 |
Girl, you'll be working at McDonalds if you "sing and dance" on ROBLOX. I mean honestly. I actually get somewhere in life. Loser. And I agree with JohnB that you should be burned on a cross. You witch. Love you temper queen. :) |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15 Post Count: 2603 |
Lol Zar. I have a good education and I have a life. Just because I play roblox doesn't mean I'm going to work at McDonalds. Stop hating because you're jealous of me. :) |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15 Post Count: 2603 |
It's okay, It's okay. :P |
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ZarikelJoin Date: 2012-06-10 Post Count: 81 |
JEALOUS? OF YOU?! HAHAHAHAHAH! LOL THAT IS A GOOD ONE! I don't want to be some rude girl who acts like she is the best at everything she does even though she can really suck. I accept my flaws. You should learn that to! Temper queen! |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15 Post Count: 2603 |
I honestly don't understand how you stalk me yet is not jealous. Leave me alone for the love of God... |
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RegimenJoin Date: 2011-07-18 Post Count: 9431 |
Great job 9.5/10, reppin Reloaded Records all day |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15 Post Count: 2603 |
:o
I'm not in even ReRe but okay :D |
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9247Join Date: 2009-11-29 Post Count: 2872 |
This song is stupid. |
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9247Join Date: 2009-11-29 Post Count: 2872 |
Zar you are amazing! |
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