Please give me feedback on my Film Fest entry!

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#94818638Sunday, April 14, 2013 2:28 AM GMT

I did the BLOXcon location category, and the city I chose was New York City. Tell me what you think here, and I would like both positive AND negative feedback. Thanks! http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=Gv9tlmkHZHk

sekretaryuk

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#94820076Sunday, April 14, 2013 2:40 AM GMT

I think it should include ROBLOX places/things, not the actual city.

jojods1125

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#94824794Sunday, April 14, 2013 3:22 AM GMT

@sek That's why I did a mash-up of RL and ROBLOX.

sekretaryuk

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#94826741Sunday, April 14, 2013 3:41 AM GMT

Make it ROBLOX-only.

TZ_Tazuk

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#94843112Sunday, April 14, 2013 8:37 AM GMT

I like it. Very well done.

0neDesire

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#94843696Sunday, April 14, 2013 8:57 AM GMT

It needs to have people there in a train that comes.

CfJr

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#94844894Sunday, April 14, 2013 9:36 AM GMT

TBH, I thought it was bad.

jojods1125

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#94849446Sunday, April 14, 2013 11:42 AM GMT

@cf What did you not like about it? I'll see if I can improve it.

chadboyz

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#94863949Sunday, April 14, 2013 3:05 PM GMT

I hated it.

jojods1125

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#94867799Sunday, April 14, 2013 3:47 PM GMT

@Chad What did you not like about it? What can I improve?

Aries0_0

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#94880348Sunday, April 14, 2013 5:49 PM GMT

pretty good †★≈RANDOMNESS≈★†

sekretaryuk

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#94938415Monday, April 15, 2013 2:05 AM GMT

I agree with Chad and Cf. It's pretty bad. Could be way better. Not the winning entry.

StickMasterVaders

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#95032237Tuesday, April 16, 2013 3:05 AM GMT

Can I be a part of your video? Im not good at editing but im good at how to view your camera and acting...