Asap TaylorxBulletXCeeJay Black Diamonds (DMT)

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#101601016Monday, June 17, 2013 5:43 PM GMT

Asap Taylor/Chours:Black Diamonds I Got Black Diamonds Black Cars Black Clothin Black Houses Black Watches And Black Phones (2x) I Goy Black Diamonds Asap Taylor:I Got Black Diamonds But But They Aint sTOLEN I Got Black Cards Who Tryna Play Poker Its Ethier Stack Or Starve So I Stack My Cheddar I Got Money On Top Of Money Call In Tall Mr.Man Ketch Me Getting High Higher Then An elevatior In Ketch Me With Team Getting Girls In Los Vages Asap Taylor/Chours:Black Diamonds I Got Black Diamonds Black Cars Black Clothin Black Houses Black Watches And Black Phones (2x) (Verse 2 Bullet/Drake17dude) Yea I got Black diamonds, Yea i got Black Cars, I spit hot bars, Alien boy I'm from MARS, Hater's tryna take what is ours, We big stars, Fast cars, Hit the gas pedal, Mission Accomplished, Wheres my medal, Re Re, We make haters flee, Man on the moon, CeeJayy droppin that Album soon, Kid Ace making them haters pick up The pace, Nat go hard, We catching them haters Off guard, A$AP Tay, We make Haters Obey, Shout out to Rad, Them Black diamonds making them haters sad, Cause we got, Asap Taylor/Chours:Black Diamonds I Got Black Diamonds Black Cars Black Clothin Black Houses Black Watches And Black Phones (2x) I wear real diamonds Wear em on my watch Dont even know what the time is And black diamonds blind you Like shootin your eyes with a mutha####### 22 That diamonds so sharp like a shark tooth And i get in line for the jewelry booth So i cut in line to get my diamonds The diamonds of dark wear em everywhere Even at the park The point is we wear em all the time Like last night at wine n dine So this is CeeJayy sayin peace out Im not in the building anymore Im out.

Supreme_Kevin

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#101601216Monday, June 17, 2013 5:45 PM GMT

This was bad too... Also here is a tip from one of the pros..... Space out when the next guy has his verse.

lazycool25

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#101601354Monday, June 17, 2013 5:46 PM GMT

CeeJay Last Part

lazycool25

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#101601420Monday, June 17, 2013 5:47 PM GMT

Kid Get A Life In Don't Comment Thankyou

Supreme_Kevin

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#101601750Monday, June 17, 2013 5:50 PM GMT

I have a life. I rap and make money. I also RO Rap. Better then you. Go look on your other thread and read my comment if you wanna know what * Killing it * is.

lazycool25

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#101602497Monday, June 17, 2013 5:58 PM GMT

1.do I care 2. you comment on every one of my videos cuse u must be a hater in 3 =. if u make money why don't u get a life

Supreme_Kevin

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#101602923Monday, June 17, 2013 6:03 PM GMT

1. You would when you realize Im one of the best RO Rappers here and I am trying to give you constructive criticism. 2. Im trying to help you get better if you dont take it you will stay at the same skill level and you wont get better and so far no one likes your raps except your little friend. 3. Just because I comment on a forum that just takes me at the most 1 minute does not mean I do not have a life.

lazycool25

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#101603079Monday, June 17, 2013 6:04 PM GMT

ok if your tryna get me beter you just said you cant rap bro so yea

Supreme_Kevin

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#101606478Monday, June 17, 2013 6:36 PM GMT

What?

Crash6351

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#101606808Monday, June 17, 2013 6:39 PM GMT

OP is not only a terrible writer, but an idiot.

Solitudius

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#101617270Monday, June 17, 2013 8:10 PM GMT

lol even i could do something better than this

McFloaty

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#101635775Monday, June 17, 2013 10:39 PM GMT

"OP stay off the MT because You and your raps sicken me!" >> Still a better written verse than anything in OP's little song Song Rating: \ 0.2/10 \ - Horrible grammar - Little to no spacing - Terrible lyrics - Lyrical composition not thought out thoroughly

lazycool25

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#101637980Monday, June 17, 2013 10:57 PM GMT

boii your smile look a** YOU RAPPIN WANNA BE YOU FACE Makes me sick so does you family

McFloaty

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#101638586Monday, June 17, 2013 11:02 PM GMT

If that was an insult I think you need to try a tad bit harder and perhaps apply a little grammar to it..

McFloaty

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#101638872Monday, June 17, 2013 11:04 PM GMT

And if I'm a rapping wannabe then you're lower than that because I'm a heck of a lot better than you, kid..

Supreme_Kevin

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#101641587Monday, June 17, 2013 11:27 PM GMT

McFloaty is better, your best rhyme is rhyme and time. MC Floaty is classic, he is better then you. WAY better. You rap like a wannabe nine year old.

Supreme_Kevin

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#101642175Monday, June 17, 2013 11:32 PM GMT

Black Cars Black Clothin Black Houses Black Watches And Black Phones (2x) I get it, you want to be all black even though you are a lego... I Goy Black Diamonds You goy black diamonds? First of all wtf is goy? Also there is no such thing as that, unless you wanna buy a spray paint from WalMart or customize the sims logo to be black. Wiz Khalifa much Asap Taylor:I Got Black Diamonds But But They Aint sTOLEN No one wants to steal your little fake diamond you got from billy mays. Also you are so unoriginal for something. ASAP TAYLOR? A$s sass As$ Pass? Best rhyme you can make? I Got Black Cards playing poker. There is no card that is black in poker. But there are symbols in black. Either way nobody cares about your issues with losing your money in poker.