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The wild full of mystery and wonder for wolfs.
As the legend holds a true power mystery:
One day the Dark wolfs will rise. Fire Storm and Ice powers are useless
for now the crystals beholding those powers were smashed into peices when the
dark was rising many years ago. We truely do not know where the peices are.
But when the dark rise again and the secret heros rise the powers will be restored,
and the dark will be sealed into the cold dark place they have came from.
You and your friends will know the dark will rise some day and try to take over.
But for now you need to find out who are the sercret heros and when the dark rise once again.
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1.NO G-modding
2.Use proper grammer and capitals
3.NO trolling
4.NO rude mean comments
5.Follow the ROBLOX's basic rules
6.Up to 3 characters.
If you follow the rules you will not have a problem with me.
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Name:
A.ge:[18-35]
Personality:
Apearance:
Power:[Fire Storm Ice Dark]
Gender:
Bio:[optional]
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Name:Rose
A.ge:23
Personality:Mean to the wolfs she hates. Nice soul to her friends.
Apearance:Icey black coat of fur with big hasel eyes that turn red when angry,Whit belly, and a short white tail with black on the tip.
Power:Fire
Gender:Female
Bio:It's optional so I'm not doing one
Wait til i accept you for you to start roleplaying we can start roleplay when we have up to 5 people.
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This is alright
All you need to do
is make your grammar
a little bit better.
For example
"Wait til i accept you for you to start roleplaying we can start roleplay when we have up to 5 people." |
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at900Join Date: 2010-02-12
Post Count: 2660 |
It is a good thought, but would recommend adding more backstory
IE: How would one acquire these wolven powers? |
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You could learn a bit better spelling and grammar...
Just to say. |
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I can't spell any better i write at night so i can't see what key im hitting plus i use to cheat on spelling tests so now my spelling is messed up i cant spell certain things |
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and i cant do more back story bcuz i have to ask my friend who always spends her time on creepypasta suff and i didnt record it but eh quality is not so good :/ |
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at900Join Date: 2010-02-12
Post Count: 2660 |
Hmm.
Is there a lamp/spellcheck/that crooked red line under a misspelled word? |
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No :/ there is none because im using roblox studio 2013 all the time and my internet sucks and then my google cryome doesnt help since it wont load the page :/ i blame my sister for messing the computer up '̀-'́ |
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btw ppl the person who came up for the backstory is me XD and she's right I got obsessed with this creepypasta thing :P and I don't know what to add to the backstory I have to deal with a cat who made a hole under my bed and goes inside it so I have to get her out XD well anyways I might tell lps to add more to the backstory soon cause I have a active imagination and thanks for positive comments on my friends thread :3 |
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Juke_YTJoin Date: 2011-03-05
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Fix your grammar and take the time to think of a back story. A good creepypasta has no back story, but a great one has something to make it seem real, or in other words a back story.
Also, read this: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=85130389
Plus, this RP is pretty bad, though it's better than some of the other crap we see on here. |
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>:L I made the idea for this darn thread. You want some more backstory, I'll give you some backstory! over 1,000 years ago darkness was the first element but one hero overtook the leader of darkness gaining the power of heaven, he knew he wouldn't live forever so he divided his power into many other crystals so other wolf's could have powers to defend the forest.But the other wolf's of darkness missed the leader and wanted revenge,they ventured as long as they lived,all the wolfs of darkness did it until finally they found the crystals and smashed them!Now the other elements are powerless until the crystals are put together,but danger is coming...the darkness wolfs said they'd have their revenge and they weren't lying. |
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Juke_YTJoin Date: 2011-03-05
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Wasn't so hard, was it? |
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Don't feel inclined to do as Purely says. He's more concerned about his poor eyes seeing a "crappy" roleplay than he is about your enjoyment. |
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Juke_YTJoin Date: 2011-03-05
Post Count: 37430 |
@Tai; See, if she listens to what I say and makes a new thread, with fixed grammar and a solid back story, those first three people who posted their criticism wouldn't be there. Heck, she might even get some RP'ers to join.
Think carefully about your reply, if any. |
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I'm not I just decided to add more to this thread considering I'm kind of the admin for this thread for giving my friend the idea well you get the point and I have seen LOTS of hater's I ignore them I actually wanted to do a backstory :P |
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and I'm not making a new thread It'd tee my friend who made this one off and if your not a hater and like how I did the backstory I'm sure my friend lps :P would be happy for you to join. |
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Thx Ginger and im not making another thread on this this is the second one the first one sucked :/. |
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Name: Mr. Gregford
Age: Unkown (looks like 80)
Personality:Religious, Wise, Neutral to all
Apearance:An old man who is comepletely bald, wears bipolar glasses, has green eyes,
Seems to have an Holy aura. Wears robes similar to monks.
Power: Holy
Gender: Male
Facts:
1. He may look old, But he is one of god's mightiest archangels. Watch out!
2. He has the Light crystal, witch has The shape of a christian cross.
3. He is also skilled in the art of "God-Fist", A Deadly martial art practiced my Monks in the 1600s |
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im sorry dev but denied this roleplay is for wolfs not people thats why i gave an example on what it should look like its for wolfs not people that why the powers are only fire ice storm and dark :/ |
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Name:Dapple
Age:[18-35] 26
Personality: Rude,strong
Apearance: (this is why she is named dapple :3) she has a light brown coat,dark brown spots,white paws,and black fur on her back,plus blue eyes
Power:[Fire Storm Ice Dark]Storm
Gender:Female
Bio:[optional]
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guys the wolfs are not adults at 6 months we are doing it in dog years so if your wolf was 1 year it's 7 in dog years :P but that means dapple and rose are rlly old xD well anyways my friend said you could be a pup c: so I'll change age 0-35 but if your going to be 0 then the youngest you can be is 3 months :P |
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I layed down on the barn floor as I did many years ago before I met Dapple. I yawned I was getting so old but not as old as dapple. I did a little laugh. |
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