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and dont even try to say i dont make music.
my proffetion is the Piano.
i practice by ear.
which means when i listen to a song
i need to take time to match the notes with their tone. |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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cool |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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i know dumb is not a curse word lol... i just did not want the word m-o-d-e-r-a-t-e-d (mods hate it when i say that word idk?) Kingddd333 get a life... |
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wakko1337Join Date: 2009-06-14
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I'll post more later on, I'm in the process of writing about 12 poems and songs right now. Also, my external hard drive is still being a pest. I'll fix it later on today. |
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Sweet can't wait to see some more awesome poems. >:D |
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Im a good writer too! ...Right? o_O RIGHT??!!! |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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Hey Mcjerky! I am working on about 7 more poems myself... one of them... IS HUGE!!! I'm talking about 3 times the size of "the dark one" its already finished but i gotta finish the entire series!! i have a place where i post my poems... go to forums and search minard734 and you will find it! |
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Mcjerky, please ignore my older posts, I was being spammed in my inbox. Im sorry. |
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I got really mad, so i started saying some random stuff. |
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McJerkyJoin Date: 2007-06-18
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That's no excuse. |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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hey McJerky... i finished some more poems... they are now available to the public... search MINARD734 and click on my peom collection and go to the last page to see my latest works! |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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gah i made a lot of spelling mistakes in that... what EVAR!! LOL! |
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McJerkyJoin Date: 2007-06-18
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Writing a love poem. (GO FIGURE)
Can't decide on what line to use, because of the end word.
The line I'm rhyming with is:
"Love is a plethora of magic and rewards..."
The pattern is ABAB, but that's irrelevant.
So, I've narrowed it down to two rhymes:
• "a catalog of hearts and souls poured..."
• "a scrapbook of moments and people adored..."
Which one's better? I'd like your opinions; I'll give you some credit for the poem. |
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Zilla2112Join Date: 2008-08-29
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I like the second one more. It seems to flow better with the second one due to both lines having a similar amount of syllables. But that's just me. |
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Ya the second one is better in my opinion...
Im writing a love song too.... >_< But its kinda sad because it's about a man Ive never actually met in real life..... T_T
SO he has no idea i exist |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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lol... anyways... mcjerky the 2nd one is better... ya! |
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McJerkyJoin Date: 2007-06-18
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Lol, thanks Sonic.
Yeah, I chose the second one. It does sound better. Thanks everyone! |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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good |
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MINARD734Join Date: 2008-06-23
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hey did you get my message mcjerky? |
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Your Poems and songs are pretty good.
if you can get a contract
you could be famous.
but all i do is play piano =P |
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-_-
I COULD BE FAMOUS TOO RIGHT???
-_-"
I dont do well with jealousy |
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McJerkyJoin Date: 2007-06-18
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Lmao. |
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SERIOUSLY AM I GOOD TOO???
COULD I BE A FAMOUS WRITER??? >_<
THE JEALOUSY IS EATING ME ALIVE!!! |
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McJerky in my opinion I think you could do better.
-Bluest Jet of Them All |
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