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Medicis
#113970361Thursday, September 26, 2013 12:39 AM GMT

[MISSION_/: ZERO] [DATE OF LOG_/:REDACTED] [TRANSMISSION RECORDING_/: [RDY]] [LOG_/:"Before the WIJ was a full blown corporation, before they could efficiently travel through space, before they had the alliances, the massive amount of members, or the power that strikes fear into the enemies of the WIJ Corporation. An idea that wasn't originally theirs, but someone else's. A prototype power cell that never drained is rumored to be still in the hands of the WIJ Corporation....":\_BREAK] [DATA PATCH RETRIEVAL_1_/:"The cold barren winds on the planet of the Alpha Site was enough to leave a 3rd-Degree searing of the skin and immediate freezing of the exposed skin, estimated a temperature of -1560 average degrees Celsius winds around the mid-afternoon and a temperature of -3500 average degrees Celsius winds around nighttime. No known life forms live on the planet with the exception of Alpha Site stationed at one of the two hot pockets on the planet's surface called, "Pyro". Hot pocket Pyro has an average temperature of 2440 degrees Celsius and has about a three mile radius melting ring, leaving the surface of the planet scorched, but has biological substances. Alpha Site is rumored to have five layers of thermal paneling to protect it from the harsh conditions of the planet [REDACTED]. Alpha Site uses hot pocket Pyro to pipe its heat throughout the facility, warming up the facility to an average 27 degrees Celsius." [DATA PATCH RETRIEVAL_1_/:[TERMINATED]] [LOG_/:"The mission was to "collect" a prototype power cell Alpha Site has created, WIJ Colonel [REDACTED] was incharge of planning mission "Zero" and recruiting members of the early WIJ Corporation to set out and infiltrate Alpha Site. WIJ Lieutenant [REDACTED] put charge of a team of Seven WIJ Members that specialized in Subzero Temperature Infiltration and called it, "Lucky Seven"....":\_BREAK] [DATA PATCH RETIREVAL_2_/:"Members of squad Lucky Seven set out by Dropship from an orbiting SJP, (Space Jump Platform), whereupon Lucky Seven landing on planet [REDACTED] approximately 25 Clicks from Alpha Site. WIJ HICOM lost Video Contact and Audio Connection with Lucky Seven within 13 Clicks of Alpha Site, resulting in an approximately six hour parting time with established communication with squad Lucky Seven. WIJ HICOM put squad Lucky Seven on standby went on surveying planet [REDACTED] within 13 Clicks of Alpha Site. Upon further analysis planet [REDACTED] holds an unusual magnetic pattern approximately 5 Clicks beneath hot pocket Pyro and Alpha Site resulting in a disruption of Radio Waves sent to and from HICOM to squad Lucky Seven acting as a Jammer. Approximately six hours later, WIJ HICOM sucessfully establishes Video Contact and Audio Connection with squad Lucky Seven, and sends a WIJ Dropship to evacuate squad Lucky Seven from planet [REDACTED]." [DATA PATCH RETRIEVAL_2_/:[TERMINATED]] [LOG_/:"Squad Lucky Seven sucessfully "collected" the prototype power cell from Alpha Site and presented it to WIJ HICOM, whereupon they send it off to WIJ Scientists to be researched and tested. Research reveals that this prototype power cell can never drained of its power source, no further details of fine description or components other than the color of the substance within the power cell is a deep, rich blue. Rumored to be still hidden deep within WIJ HICOM Archives still under careful research and testing methods.":\_BREAK] [TRANSMISSION RECORDING_/: [END]]
BerserkTurtles
#113970552Thursday, September 26, 2013 12:41 AM GMT

lol hot pocket
Bloxis1
#113971285Thursday, September 26, 2013 12:48 AM GMT

Cool. I like the layout, but it really didn't convey the feeling of a story. I'm not sure how you would fix that, it might just be me. Good work.
Medicis
#113971498Thursday, September 26, 2013 12:50 AM GMT

Thanks.

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