Mazescape RPG [Story.]

Join Date: 2013-09-22
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#114122361Saturday, September 28, 2013 2:01 AM GMT

One day you wake up, You're in some kinda maze with a bronze sword. You have to try to escape the maze! Before it all gets destroyed by Deathious "Shardlous". You eventually find some friends and start battling monsters to escape this maze. Will you make it out of the soon-to-be maze: Or possibly the biggest maze that contains mobs in ROBLOX? It's an extremely simple but kinda creative story I suppose. Rate in the replies if you'd like. ~One's username isn't a aspect of one's intelligence.~

KodakKid3

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#114123275Saturday, September 28, 2013 2:10 AM GMT

I love the idea of using a maze. For anything.

lateregistration

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#114124694Saturday, September 28, 2013 2:25 AM GMT

is this like the game Fate? Where you adventure through a dungeon and fight monsters that get stronger as you descend down the stairs.

Aotrou

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#114129769Saturday, September 28, 2013 3:23 AM GMT

Sorry, but that "story" isn't a story, and is painfully simple. Read up on the legend of the Labyrinth in Greek mythology. At least for creativity's sake use that as a basic structure.

morash

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#114129947Saturday, September 28, 2013 3:25 AM GMT

You have laid a story-line, but have yet to lay a story.

Aotrou

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#114130711Saturday, September 28, 2013 3:35 AM GMT

Barely a story-line. More of just the exposition and setting.

morash

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#114130968Saturday, September 28, 2013 3:39 AM GMT

I guess there is a little bit of a rising action embedded in there. What I really want is an rpg without fighting. That would probably make it to the no longer in existence front page.

Aotrou

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#114131448Saturday, September 28, 2013 3:45 AM GMT

Well if my partner and I *ever* finish Burning Gray, your dream might come true. Hehe. HEAR THAT SHADOWLEGO? ;)

morash

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#114131515Saturday, September 28, 2013 3:46 AM GMT

I LOVE THAT GAME! 8D

Aotrou

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#114132260Saturday, September 28, 2013 3:57 AM GMT

You have no idea just how much thought went into that game even at it's current 1/15th-ish completion. I mean, we're both deep into literature and game design, he's a bit more satirical than I, but what I am short on I make up for in sanity. Hehe.