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gokuichigo22
#116533312Sunday, October 27, 2013 3:32 AM GMT

(Intro) Ya, so im walkin' down da street right. I hear somethin' weird ya know it's mah b day i'm swagged out and everyting, but it was all ruined by something. GUNS!!! (1st Verse) I was talkin' wit mah manes before i heard a bang, i thought to myself wheres mah fu(kin babe, i felt a slight pain, i was standin' in the rain, and started 2 cry, and thought why, i rushed to scene of the crime, i found mah girl lyin there dead it appeared she was shot in the head, i stood in shock, ever since then my life has not been bad or sad, but worse this hurts,i didnt know how i could make it work. so picked up the the pen and wrote, and wrote i didn't care if i choked, or if i was broke, i focused and worked hard from the start. Now i'm rappin' but not always about them guns, or the clubs, ya in most of mah songs i write about he violence in chicago, but not all over its just the hood like englewood. But i still love mah city Chicago 4eva!!! (Chorus) (someone singing) ahhhhhh all these things that happened to me, maaade me stronger, made me stronger yaaaaaaa (x7) (2nd verse) ive been through a lot in my life, violence, workin' and so much more, i'm getting sicked and tired of all these wh0r3s. I'm blessed 2 be where i am now, if i was where i was before i woulda been gon da ground, screamin' loud, i prolly woulda been killed for real, like lil jojo he lived near me he was shot, ya when he got popped, but i made good choices , and took good routes like i shoulda. I thank you mom for that, cuz if it wasnt for you i woulda been smashed, wit a baseball bat. I'm lucky even though i lived in a bad area, cuz believe me it coulda been so much worse, guess what some kids are born into the the dark, they fight, we need to show em the light. (Chorus) (someone singing) ahhhhhh all these things that happened to me, maaade me stronger, made me stronger yaaaaaaa
gokuichigo22
#116982626Saturday, November 02, 2013 6:32 PM GMT

what do you guys think of it
DigitsGod
#116982723Saturday, November 02, 2013 6:33 PM GMT

I bet this all really didn't happen to you.
gokuichigo22
#116987823Saturday, November 02, 2013 7:32 PM GMT

i didnt its a story. i made a short story then made it into a rap. I;m an author and a rapper
gokuichigo22
#117014702Sunday, November 03, 2013 12:45 AM GMT

i'm*
steelmygirl
#117014938Sunday, November 03, 2013 12:47 AM GMT

this is really bad sorry
gokuichigo22
#117022627Sunday, November 03, 2013 2:20 AM GMT

well thx for ur honesty
AlexandroSultan
#117022748Sunday, November 03, 2013 2:22 AM GMT

no good lil homie
gokuichigo22
#117029241Sunday, November 03, 2013 3:40 AM GMT

well how can i make it better
uglyfirewizard
#117029329Sunday, November 03, 2013 3:41 AM GMT

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gokuichigo22
#117063370Sunday, November 03, 2013 4:41 PM GMT

thx
frogspit99
#117064902Sunday, November 03, 2013 5:01 PM GMT

Decent. Here's the start of mine. (Not finished) Now I'm rollin' in da hood I got my puddin' and it's good. You can't stop me from cryin' cause I fell off a plane dat was flyin'. I scraped my knee tryin' to go pee. So you know spendin' mah money in da dolla tree won't be born into me. But I do try to buy all the candy I see. Cause all I can do is share none with you. I try to hide mah gum cause I know you'll beg. So don't ask for some, cause I'll slap ya, son!
Forza4Decals
#117066537Sunday, November 03, 2013 5:22 PM GMT

SORRY MAN BUT DIS SUCKS MEMES IS GOOD RAP NOW
ImmortalLightning
#117066662Sunday, November 03, 2013 5:24 PM GMT

HORRIBLE! IT HURTS MAH EYEZ! 0/10
108Farenheight
#117100136Sunday, November 03, 2013 11:58 PM GMT

sucks sorry
uglyfirewizard
#117174893Tuesday, November 05, 2013 1:55 AM GMT

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shonyshon
#117175874Tuesday, November 05, 2013 2:05 AM GMT

frog this isn't about you darnit
frogspit99
#117233147Wednesday, November 06, 2013 12:24 AM GMT

Who said it was?
shonyshon
#117248265Wednesday, November 06, 2013 3:21 AM GMT

"Decent. Here's the start of mine. " you did poop

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