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#116639625Monday, October 28, 2013 5:08 AM GMT

Note: This is not the Cyber from Pokemon Universe. This is his counterpart from a different IN GAME RP. I adjusted the cybernetic lens over my eye, making sure it was perfectly focused. I was in the Defenders Command Center waiting for something to show up on the alert screens. Suddenly, I receive a message on the main computer telling me to attack a heavily defended Crimson weapons research center and supply base in a volcano. Typical, always in a volcano or under the water or the ground. So predictable. I quickly get in an attack fighter in the hangar and fly to the coordinates of the enemy base, when SAM batteries suddenly open fire on my fighter, coming from the left, right, front, and back. Many would panic and eject or even simply be destroyed, but in aerial combat, it's important to remember that the battlefield is 3 dimensional. I quickly take a dive and fire air to ground rockets at the base, taking out the SAM batteries. I hit a button and the fighter launches it's cockpit into the base like a cannon, I bail out and slip into the base during the large explosion resulting. I work my way through the vents into the main lab, and I see Crimson head scientist Sting working on a large ray or something and some other scientists building a rocket. I quickly unfold and fire my assault blaster, unleashing a furious burst of plasma and destroying some consoles. The enemies are alerted and 2 Crimson Soldiers, the generic Scyther ones, snipe my gun onto the floor and restrain me. And while this is all happening, my cybernetic lens had scanned the rocket and the ray. The ray can cause a chain reaction in...salt? And destroy the bonds holding salt together, instantly making any amount of salt into sodium and chlorine? And the rocket has a satellite with a giant mirror in it. The Scyther throw me in a cage. The head scientist, Sting, flies over to me and points the tips of his stingers at my eye, trying to scare me. "Well, look what we have here? The little magnemite wants to stop the big smart beedrill's world domination. I'm afraid you have no chance, for soon Crimson will have the ULTIMATE WEAPON!" he said arrogantly. I quickly make a plan. "Oh, I'm sure it can't be THAT much." Sting is greatly irritated by this and replies "This weapon can turn the whole ocean into a doomsday weapon!!!!" I am slightly shocked by the statement but I do not show it. "Really? Sounds like an exaggeration to me." Sting appears to be about ready to explode with fury, he clearly has a short temper. "FOOL! IT SEPARATES THE SALT IN SEAWATER INTO SODIUM AND CHLORINE! SODIUM EXPLODES ON CONTACT WITH WATER! CHLORINE IS A DEADLY POISON! FIRST THE SODIUM EXPLODES THE OCEAN, AND THEN THE TOXIC CHLORINE IS LAUNCHED EVERYWHERE! THE RAY FIRES OUT OF THE TOP OF THE VOLCANO, THEN BOUNCES OFF THE SATELLITE, THEN HITS THE OCEAN! IT WILL BE THE END FOR ALL THOSE WHO DO NOT FOLLOW US! WE COULD GAIN BILLIONS BY HOLDING THE WORLD HOSTAGE WITH IT'S OWN OCEANS!" I smile inside, but it cannot be shown because I have no mouth. "Thanks for giving away your whole plan, why do you villains do that?" I quickly lift the METAL cage magnetically and pull my gun to me. "Now surrender, I am Commander Cyber of the Defenders and you are under arrest." Sting replied quickly "You and what army?" I sigh. "Defenders. I just said it. They probably have tanks waiting right outside anyway." I drag him outside in cuffs and throw him into a troop transport converted into a prisoner transport, and some tanks escort him to the Defenders maximum security jail. I return to the Command Center and tell my cousin Proton about the daily news on the video communicator. "Wow, sounds amazing!" Proton said when I finished. "Nah, just another normal day at work." I reply.
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#116639760Monday, October 28, 2013 5:13 AM GMT

Though I have made drafts and considered the topic, I have never made a story focused around one of my RP characters before. I hope you all enjoy reading it.
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#116648379Monday, October 28, 2013 12:47 PM GMT

I expected feedback. Mean feedback, but I expected something.
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#116649550Monday, October 28, 2013 1:38 PM GMT

(YEAH!!! OVER 20 VIEWS!)
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#116677332Monday, October 28, 2013 10:07 PM GMT

Anyone have feedback? And why doesn't this thing let the title edit?
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#116698110Tuesday, October 29, 2013 1:22 AM GMT

Anyone have a comment?
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#116704162Tuesday, October 29, 2013 2:26 AM GMT

Should've made paragraphs, then the whole this would be less mashed together.
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#116803194Wednesday, October 30, 2013 11:14 PM GMT

:(
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#116814098Thursday, October 31, 2013 1:26 AM GMT

(I'M ON THE BLOG!)
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#116820517Thursday, October 31, 2013 2:43 AM GMT

OVER 100 VIEWS!
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#116843436Thursday, October 31, 2013 6:15 PM GMT

Okay, okay, making a better version.
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#116843461Thursday, October 31, 2013 6:16 PM GMT

Making an improved version.

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