I'm doing this well?

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#117730105Tuesday, November 12, 2013 7:08 PM GMT

Look :> http://web.roblox.com/A-Kid-in-a-Forest-Unfinished-place?id=133812588

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#117749670Tuesday, November 12, 2013 11:37 PM GMT

It's a good game, but there's a grammar error. Marco: Steven's father were killed. It should say: Steven's father was killed. UNLESS it was supposed to say: Marco: Steven's parents were killed.

gringowh0112

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#117784578Wednesday, November 13, 2013 3:22 PM GMT

Okay, thanks! I'm changing it right now. PS: My english isn't very well...

Jillian501

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#117800937Wednesday, November 13, 2013 9:34 PM GMT

Ok, I'll be looking for more mistakes.

gringowh0112

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#117849291Thursday, November 14, 2013 4:02 PM GMT

Game updated to version 5. I'm learning about basic scripting, if i learn more, maybe i add better features to the game. :D