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altar30
#118608569Sunday, November 24, 2013 7:07 PM GMT

This is the link to the Prequel of the song/story "Hi, Its Jimmy" http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=75081910 Dear Jimmy, Do you think it's easy to just forget someone you barely knew but were still close too?! You were my boy, literally my child that I raised, Someone I was proud to see pass the 12th grade, Depression kicked in when I realized graduation was the last time I had seen your face, I honestly convinced myself that the problems were a phase, Man was I wrong, that kid was all I had left, Ever since his daddy dipped after leaving a slip, A note that read he was taking a trip, Turned out he did alittle thinking, found the rocks in his kids room, And instead of confronting him, he lit and was on the same fume, Got alittle hyper, alittle happy, drove and then boom! He's stuck in the same hole his son's in, But I'm still getting his mail, that losers hiding up in London, Thats an hour from Coventry, where our boy resides, That last look of fear Jimmy gave me's trapped in my eyes, My lifes in shambles now, so they's who I despise! Why am I the one that has to deal with these issues!, JIMMY, Your long gone now but your daddy doesn't miss you!, And I kinda wish I didn't either, but hey your room's still the same, Incase you comeback, does that make me insane?! Well I don't care! I wish I could just forget you little punk, Raising a spoiled brat with an incompetent drunk, So I got all these emotions bottled up just ready to blow, And guess who I get to take it out on, You guessed it! I'll be at dads house by tomorrow! Ok, back Jim Jim, He's leaving a Casino, I step out to greet him, Shocked, What? Didn't expect me, I called to give you a warning, Relax, its not about the alimony, see our son's dead, Yea, turned out he was on the same thing you found under his bed, Oh by the way, Thank you for being such a good role model, Jimmy really conformed, To be like his pops, rush him, does this smell like Chloroform? You seem a little dizzy, hear, you can lay in the trunk, Sorry 'bout the smell, You can lay next to Jimmy, he smells like a skunk, But I guess it's better to get used to it now, since I'll be leaving you at the dump. Hmmm, wakey wakey, you've been out for 3 hours, oh you loose cannon, No point in struggling, your tied up, now where did I leave my canon, OH! Here it is, gosh, silly me, Let me take a couple pictures of you next to Jimmy, I'm just going to cut you up alitte, you know, purging the family tree. MY god you've let yourself go, put a shirt on-oh wait, Right haha, you can't, now soon you'll be shark bait, I want you to feel the love bites from my pet snake, The venom won't end you, you don't deserve Jimmys fate, For petes sake, I think I left his cage lock unlatched, So old fashion breaking it is, BANG, gut smash. BANG BANG, JIMMY LOVED TO PLAY WITH YOUR TOOL KIT, BANG, YOU STRIPPED HIM OF HIS INNOCENCE, WHY WOULD YOU TAKE IT!, WHY?! BANG BANG WHY! WHY! WHY! BANG BANG BANG, DONT CRY! CRY! CRY! I WANT TO SEE YOU HUG YOUR SON, DO YOU THINK I LIKE DOING THIS, DO YOU THINK THIS IS FUN?! IM HAVING A BLAST, [F] IT, YOU SEE THIS HANDGUN! ITS THE SAME ONE YOUR SON USED TO BLOW OUT THAT DEALERS LUNGS, NOW ITS YOUR TURN, SWALLOW THE LEAD, AND IM NOT GONNA STOP TILL YOUR. OFFICIALLY DEAD, BANG! OH GOD! Red walls, clear tears, and a misunderstanding, Jimmy got the dope from his friend who was handling, Dad tried to stop him, took his stash then had warned him. Jimmy's mother never found out, and if you had seen this, Fragile lady run out and scream in complete silence, No sound had come out, but to me it was the loudest thing you could witness, She never spoke again, Dont get it twisted, I go by Radical but am not the voice for the defiant, I just want everyone to learn something before there soul is forever silenced...
AsmodeusTheDemigod
#118609102Sunday, November 24, 2013 7:13 PM GMT

http://i.imgur.co m/mjmOWyX .gif
RipDar
#118611009Sunday, November 24, 2013 7:35 PM GMT

Altar, Nice you put alot of effort onto that song and for that i give you props.
RipDar
#118611055Sunday, November 24, 2013 7:35 PM GMT

and we can maybe make a album in the future :). goodowork
PrinceBowWow666
#118611201Sunday, November 24, 2013 7:37 PM GMT

Someone please rate these new single i leak for my new album that will come out next year : http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=118610779
altar30
#118622478Sunday, November 24, 2013 9:37 PM GMT

@Darell thx man, you should check out the prequel of the song too, it'll make more sense to the overall song :)
altar30
#118622565Sunday, November 24, 2013 9:38 PM GMT

@Asmodeaus, That sucks :/
ImmortalLightning
#118630084Sunday, November 24, 2013 11:08 PM GMT

Really good. A lot of effort was put into this, I can tell. "I'm immortal, you are mortal. I'll rip you to shreds, go ahead and test me."~Ghost
johnb
#118630264Sunday, November 24, 2013 11:10 PM GMT

Lol altar still ro raps
altar30
#118643308Monday, November 25, 2013 1:32 AM GMT

^ I guess, I just sorta came back since I've been getting alot of writers block irl. Ro-Rappings a nice way to filter my good from bad :)
KieraAllayn
#118649482Monday, November 25, 2013 2:35 AM GMT

You already had mine, but mad respect man..
theflame1234
#118651040Monday, November 25, 2013 2:51 AM GMT

Dude this is the first time in a while i've read a whole ro-rap from top to bottom mad props! 9.5/10
lib4by39
#118653169Monday, November 25, 2013 3:15 AM GMT

Aye. This was good actually. ..~Bravo~..
altar30
#118707156Tuesday, November 26, 2013 12:29 AM GMT

Thx guys, any specific feedback for me?
altar30
#119140994Saturday, November 30, 2013 9:06 PM GMT

Bamp, any specific feedback?
altar30
#120003321Wednesday, December 11, 2013 4:01 AM GMT

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