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(Struggle/Ghost/Verse 1)
Starting to struggle with this game
It's like I have nothing to gain
The pain is starting to get to me
Now I got the fame of the haters
I'm feeling like nothing is tame
And I ain't bluffing when I say I'ma destroy all who oppose me
Throw y'all through the wall and watch ya fall
(Struggle/Both/Hook)
No matter how hard we try
We just keep on struggling
It's like we can't gather the strength to keep on going
So we just keep on struggling
(Struggle/King Hurricane/Verse 2)
East Coast
I learned to run the battle begun one said and done
blood
I thought I was put to sleep got sweep took a wrong leap now they talking trash about my boy meek.
But I won't quit they don't know what they missing lyrics they won't listen they don't know what I did to get this written. Did I mention didn't get their attention when I saw red.
I thought I was dead nurse said I would be Okay that was she said.
Nobody would care they would watch Tv and talk about a mayor. hurricane made them fall over
and said no it's fair. I had rage and anger like I was on like a hanger.
And I just escaped trip and felt like they was a blood pool took a dip.
I felt all messed up and mom just said rest up. But I was mad
like meek mills I had dreams and nightmares of crying tears. Over the years I wanted to be mere and had to learn nothing to fear. Talk about my boy 0 back in the day we was a hero. Tornado
and back to hurricane and trying to stop screwing up. I wanted to be at the top of my game and wanted to cuss but only said lame. I was going back to get em and his crew same stuff u did to me I do to you.
It's true I made it through but I still got him they knew. the news was I went back and got him
he met his doom. he met a gun in his room. burned him to ashes somebody get the broom.
yea and I got revenge and not going to the funeral I never attend. end of story wipe the ones who aren't friends.
(Struggle/Both/Hook)
No matter how hard we try
We just keep on struggling
It's like we can't gather the strength to keep on going
So we just keep on struggling
(Struggle/Ghost/Verse 3)
I give up man
Just can't keep moving
I'm starting to downfall
Even though my skills are advancing
Dancing around on you
But you can't absorb them
So you just walk way
Just sway away
Let the day die
Sit there and eat pie while watching Family Guy
Thinking about how I'm advancing
While you sit and cry your eyes out
You're ready to murder me
When my lyrical skills advance further
(Struggle/Both/Hook)
No matter how hard we try
We just keep on struggling
It's like we can't gather the strength to keep on going
So we just keep on struggling X2
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Nice little song.I would give it about a 7/10. |
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Wow,
It's pretty nice.
8/10 |
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IcyclezJoin Date: 2013-03-01
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10/10
Totally top notch. Fantastic lyrics.
Wow, just wow. |
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IcyclezJoin Date: 2013-03-01
Post Count: 3201 |
No problem. The 10 was worth it. |
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Rhyme scheme is a disaster but I like the overall message. Also your lines should be a lot shorter because I don't know if this is poetry, a rap, or a song, I just haven't a clue.
Overall I'd give it a 6.5/10. |
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Dude, you think these lines are long? You haven't seen long yet. |
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I'll show you something long, Ghost. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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