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streetfighter919
#127252015Tuesday, March 04, 2014 3:03 AM GMT

(Verse 1 Street) Yes I'm cold, shivering with no shell... Who will be gone next no one can really tell... It's not about popularity or about sales.... It's your love to the art, and I stick to it like a nail... Everybody get wildin, but I'd much rather be silent... Concentrated with no debating I like it quiet... Always mobbin outside, trying to start a riot... I've learned to keep a close, but people never try it... To hear the voice in my head of my dear mother crying.... Yes when my father died she was alone... It was dark without question, light never shone... This life is a curse and it's written in stone... The steps that he took are the steps that I have shown... And ever since that day i feel like I have grown.... I was the kid that was never around many people.... Always coming in second, I guess just like a sequel.... Never getting my shine, even ignored by the teacher.... The Outlawz had everybody wanting to see em..... And as time grew older everybody wanted to be em... Life is full of goals and all you want to do is achieve em... But take one step at a time, take more time trying to conceive em.... But don't let that stop you from achieving your dreams.... But you have to take footsteps as hard as it seems..... You could get knocked out in one punch, like Mohammed Alli... So spread your wings and fly too let the rest of them see.... That you are here to stay, that this is your destiny.... Life is cold, but don't let the breeze knock you down..... I finally did it I'm takin over the town (East Coast is takin over better believe it boii) (Bridge Bullet/Drake17dude) Contemplating if I should rip it or not, It's Radix Records you should be fearing, MVP to the game, On my way to hall of fame, After this verse you will see I'm a beast that can't be tamed ( Verse 2Bullet/Drake17dude) Prepare for me to body this track, Wondering if I should give my rap crown back, The same kid they said could never make it, The same Brooklyn kid that they hated, Is the same one that gon pass you at a McDonalds, You gonna be like yo Kev is that you, Yeah I'm the kid you used to (S) on, Well guess who went from nothing, I worked hard for what I aquired, While you were born with a silver spoon, Hoping that that scenario will happen soon, Cause I'm heading down a,path of destruction, So much green in my room you would think it was molded, These rappers needa slow down before they get scolded, Went from Sketchers to Converse, Went from Converse to Nike, Yeah I'm still struggling but it's starting to get better, Check the forecast for my cold bars, That will change the weather, Grab you sweater knit, Cause I'm kill this track without a kit, These new rookies over look me, Yo I'm a threat to ya son, Watch out cause you don't want me to grab the loaded gun, My new tracks hotter than the sun, Beef with me than the war has begun, And Radix Records has already won, But in artist theres only room for a number one, And that's me, Wait let me take that back, I'm number one two three four and five, Mess with me and after one bar you won't be alive, Sick of this government corruption, Dysfunction, My own gang, Don't need no red rag, Let me finish off these (F)gs, Ro rap game I run that, Beware of me cause I can murk anything like, Ooh kill em, I ain't even done yet, I'm the owner you the pet, Trying listen to what God says, But at the same time I'm selfish, And just don't care, You should be scared, Please prepare for when I finish ya, Rap game voodoo and I ain't even stick a pin in ya, They be like Zamn he killing it, God Zamn I'm feeling it, Bullet is dropping hits, And I'm almost done with ya, She want me to put my thumb in her, Better hol up, When we roll up, Have my vato hold me back, Before this gun go Click Click Clack, IGH!!,
drake17dude
#127254074Tuesday, March 04, 2014 3:26 AM GMT

This is like Control without me calling cats out
drake17dude
#127255702Tuesday, March 04, 2014 3:45 AM GMT

This is like really dope
iluvskrillex14
#127258539Tuesday, March 04, 2014 4:21 AM GMT

Well done guys, you killed it.
Sonicjr723
#127261132Tuesday, March 04, 2014 5:04 AM GMT

"This is like Control without me calling cats out" Not even close.
drake17dude
#127269212Tuesday, March 04, 2014 12:23 PM GMT

@Sonic street said it was. Also there's no way It could be as good as Kendrick or Big Sean or even Jay Electronica. But did you like it at all?
Sonicjr723
#127269793Tuesday, March 04, 2014 12:49 PM GMT

"street said it was. " What kind of hip hop knowledge/credibility does street have that validates a claim such as that, though? "even Jay Electronica" "even" This is the kind of thing that annoys me, honestly. Jay had the best verse. "But did you like it at all?" Street's verse was simple and basic, but the rhymes were OK. Your verse had some highlights, the quality was inconsistent though. It wasn't terrible, but it wasn't really good. Slightly below average if anything.
streetfighter919
#127270139Tuesday, March 04, 2014 1:06 PM GMT

Well i said it might blow up on the forums, Kinda like control did
drake17dude
#127270147Tuesday, March 04, 2014 1:07 PM GMT

Thanks. And I think Jay's verse was dope but Kendrick imo did better on his second half.
drake17dude
#127270247Tuesday, March 04, 2014 1:12 PM GMT

I knew my verse was inconsistent but I guess mine was like a freestyle I wrote it as I went
Swordism
#127271085Tuesday, March 04, 2014 1:49 PM GMT

lol these ro-raps always have some "deep meaning" then when drake comes in all he does is brag about himself and threaten the viewer
drake17dude
#127278012Tuesday, March 04, 2014 5:31 PM GMT

No not really but Street wanted me to do that but if you read some of my others like Alone,KORRUPTION,Alone etc.
Swordism
#127278732Tuesday, March 04, 2014 5:48 PM GMT

"Alone,KORRUPTION,Alone etc." are you ok
DollaRichR13
#127279284Tuesday, March 04, 2014 6:00 PM GMT

this went hard dope
drake17dude
#127292294Tuesday, March 04, 2014 9:47 PM GMT

I didn't mean Alone twice i meant A better Place. Thanks rich
drake17dude
#127298025Tuesday, March 04, 2014 10:57 PM GMT

BUMP
Ylndy
#127315709Wednesday, March 05, 2014 2:14 AM GMT

bad poetry
Gethype111
#127320134Wednesday, March 05, 2014 3:01 AM GMT

And your metal is the worse. There, I said it.
1991Hero
#127335922Wednesday, March 05, 2014 8:36 AM GMT

geth, his music, it gets my respect what you listen to really shows what you are therez good rap and you know little to none of it
jackmanyaFANS
#127355811Wednesday, March 05, 2014 8:59 PM GMT

Real Hip Pop/Rap I like!
drake17dude
#127357311Wednesday, March 05, 2014 9:16 PM GMT

Thx
Gethype111
#127363016Wednesday, March 05, 2014 10:18 PM GMT

"geth, his music, it gets my respect what you listen to really shows what you are therez good rap and you know little to none of it" I have my own music taste such as Indie Pop, Trap, R&B, etc.
drake17dude
#127363145Wednesday, March 05, 2014 10:20 PM GMT

Thanks
drake17dude
#127365160Wednesday, March 05, 2014 10:41 PM GMT

More rates?
drake17dude
#127439050Thursday, March 06, 2014 11:48 PM GMT

I hope biskit reads this

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